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The Metal Mallet
post Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
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Well, here's the link to the previous thread: Bloodlust - The Beginning

You can continue your praisings of my written words here. Expect an update next Saturday. I don't expect I'll get one out sooner. School starts again kvright.gif


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The Metal Mallet
post Feb 3 2007, 08:13 PM
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Why you smashing up my city! It's people are getting killed and you have to so inconsiderate and small her walls! Poor Kvatch! I'll still take the armour though! biggrin.gif And yea... I guess the hypnotism didn't work, decided to rest up before school starts again rather than post machine, sorry. I just guest my normal writing atmosphere is better than my home. Anyways, here's today's update. I'm sure you'll enjoy this one!



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The alley stunk of stale sweat and garbage, causing Taris’ expression to turn sour. Beside him, Rah’mirr kept his alert eyes scanning the adjoining alleyways. Taris also knew that in the nearby vicinity, two more Morag Tong agents were searching for Simion. If the Breton was hiding in these alleys, they were going to find him.

In all his time serving Mephala and the Morag Tong, this was Taris’ first time enacting the Guild rules for those who betrayed them. He couldn’t even recall a time in the Morag Tong’s history when such an event had happened. All Morag Tong assassins had either perished on the duty or had retired peacefully, not so with Simion. Vengeance had enticed him to break an oath that should’ve never been broken. For that, it was his duty, as well as the other’s duty, to put an end of Simion’s disgrace to the Guild.

Taris had only been a rookie when Simion was still in the Guild. Even at that time, Simion was known as an accomplished assassin. He was skilled, but humble, two traits that worked really well together. That was until the Arena Underworks Incident happened. He had been assigned to clean up the mess, and what mess it was. It didn’t even look like an assassin killed the Dark Brotherhood agents. Instead, it looked as if a barbarian horde of Orcs had stormed through the Underworks. Witnessing the aftermath of Simion’s wrath had both amazed Taris as well as inspired fear for Simion. It took something unnatural to do what had been done to those assassins single-handedly.

Taris had never spoken with Simion before that incident, giving him the respect of his superior rank, and after it he decided to keep away from him all together. He had heard about the attack on Lavos and Taris certainly did not want to share the same fate.

Yet again, Taris felt that he didn’t even want to face the renegade assassin. Yet again, he did not want to share the same fate as Lavos. Sure, his career choice was dangerous, but he felt that he many years of life yet to live. He didn’t want to miss out on them.

Rah’mirr must have sensed something in his companion, as he placed his paw re-assuredly upon Taris’ shoulder.

“Do not fear, young Taris. Together, you and Rah’mirr pose a great threat to Simion. Rah’mirr will watch your back as you watch Rah’mirr’s. We will live to see the Breton’s end.”

Taris smiled as he returned the gesture to his Khajiit companion. “I needed that. Being an assassin, you’d think I wouldn’t be afraid of my own death though. I should be well accustomed to it by now.”

Rah’mirr’s expression softened. “No sane person is not afraid of death,” he answered honestly.

Taris nodded. “Good words, my friend, good words.”

Rah’mirr’s eyes returned to scanning his surroundings. “We’d best keep going,” he said warily as he started walking again.

Taris held back momentarily before continuing. Rah’mirr was right. No one in his or her right mind would be fearless of death. Bravery was simply coping with the fear to accomplish the goal. Bravery was what Taris had to conjure in order to survive his mission.

Shortly after Rah’mirr and Taris resumed their searching, a cry sounded from an adjacent alley, followed by the sound of metal crashing against metal. Instantly both assassins had their weapons drawn.

“That sounded like…” Taris trailed off as it dawned on him what was happening. Immediately, he took off at a sprint towards the source of the struggle. Plain looking brink blurred past his vision as he progressed his way through the dank alleyways. The only sound indicating that Rah’mirr was followed was the odd tapping of claws upon the ground.

Twisting around the corner, Taris arrived to a bloody scene. Two bodies were collapsed against the ground, one of them Taris didn’t know, but he quickly surmised that he was homeless. The other body was that of one of the Dunmer assassins. Blood covered the front of his body, as it appeared that a single sword slash to the body had taken his life.

In front of Taris, Simion stood locking blades with the other assassin, who was desperately trying to withstand Simion’s strength. His knees were buckling under the effort.

Simion’s eyes made briefly made contact with Taris’. In that instant, Taris stopped dead in his tracks. Something was horrifyingly familiar in that look. Something that he would have never thought he would see again.

“Father!?” he whispered in shock and fear.

It was Rah’mirr that snapped him from his discovery. “We must aid our Brother, young Taris!” he said harshly, leaping ahead of Taris to get to Simion. Taris quickly followed suit and chased after the Khajiit.

Simion caught sight of the approaching assassins. He had merely been toying with this one and decided it was time to stop playing. With one fluid motion, he shifted his pressing blade and using his momentum, he swirled past the assassin. Simion’s sword swirled in a beautiful arc and with a quick thrust backwards, the sword drove itself through the assassin’s body, piercing out the other side. The assassin gasped in pain and stared down at the crimson stained metal jutting out of his torso before his life escaped him and he slumped upon the blade.

“I have no time for you right now!” Simion shouted at the approaching assassins before hurling the corpse towards them.

Both assassins were caught off guard by the tactic and the corpse crashed into both of them, sending them both to the ground. Taris and Rah’mirr struggled between themselves and the body as they tried to get up. Once they did only the silence of the alley greeted them. Simion had disappeared.

Rah’mirr shouted a curse and kicked a nearby crate, smashing it to splinters. Taris could only look in horror as the deaths of his comrades finally registered in his brain.

“They’re dead! He killed them as if they were nothing!” Taris sobbed as he stared at the forming pool of blood enveloping the body of the recently killed assassin.

Rah’mirr came to Taris’ side, his eyes still burning with anger. “They have gone to somewhere where they shall feel no more pain. May Mephala bless them,” he said in a sombre tone, offering a prayer to their patron for their fallen comrade’s safe passage to the other side.

Taris added his own prayer before picking up his fallen comrade. “They are Dunmer, they’ll need to be taken to their appropriate ancestral tomb,” he told Rah’mirr, who went and picked up their other fallen comrade.

“We must inform the Grandmaster,” Rah’mirr said softly as Taris nodded in reply.

It was then that the sound of armoured footsteps was heard echoing off the alley walls. Rah’mirr cursed again. The Town Guard had arrived.

A pair of Imperials decked out in chain mail and the emblem of Kvatch emblazoned on their breastplate jogged into view. Instantly, they had their broadswords out and pointed at the assassins.

“Stay where you are!” the foremost guard ordered as they approached slowly.

Taris stood still and maintained a harmless stance. “We don’t intend to do you any harm sirs,” he said as nicely as possible.

“Then relieve yourself of any weapons!” the guard ordered.

Taris placed his fallen comrade softly on the ground and nodded to Rah’mirr to do the same. He did so reluctantly.

Taris handed his short sword and daggers to the other guard. “Take us to Captain Savlian; we must speak to him about this,” he said in an even voice.

The guard who had been speaking so far arched an eyebrow. “You know Captain Savlian?” he asked with some scepticism.

“We have met and spoken before,” Taris replied.

The guard paused and seemed to be thinking about something. “You’ll have to leave those bodies here for now; they’re apart of a crime scene now. We’ll escort you to the barracks instead of arresting you for the moment. Don’t try any funny business, you understand?” the guard said sternly after he had made up his mind.

“I won’t do anything,” Taris assured them, Rah’mirr nodding to the same words.

“All right, let’s go,” the guard said, ushering the two assassins in front of him.

As Taris was led along by the guards towards the barracks he hoped that he would be able to convince Savlian to get Sethyas. For he suspected he would not be able to leave the barracks anytime soon. He needed to report to Sethyas about what he saw in Simion’s eyes. He knew that look, as he had often seen the exact same expression upon his father’s face, particularly after a messy deed had been committed. Something more than simple revenge was going on here and Taris was sure this link with his father might have something to do with it.

Hopefully, he’ll be able to speak with Sethyas.




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The Metal Mallet   Bloodlust - The Continuation   Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
jack cloudy   The losses were greater than expected. Savlian mu...   Jan 6 2007, 10:25 PM
Black Hand   Whoa....nicely done. Savage in its descriptions, b...   Jan 7 2007, 08:23 AM
canis216   Seems like everyone wants to visit Simion now... S...   Jan 7 2007, 08:31 AM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! First update on the new thread. I hope ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:27 PM
canis216   Hmm... is Simion trying to flee from The Voice? ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:32 PM
jack cloudy   I'm convinced that Savlian will meet the MT ag...   Jan 13 2007, 09:36 PM
Black Hand   Ohh, how could I have missed the update? Veerryy N...   Jan 18 2007, 06:22 PM
The Metal Mallet   The Bloodlust continues! Muahahaha! :D ...   Jan 20 2007, 07:56 PM
jack cloudy   Words of truth there, words of truth. Finding a di...   Jan 20 2007, 08:03 PM
minque   Niiiiiiice! I like it, as Jackie said the conv...   Jan 20 2007, 08:27 PM
Soulseeker3.0   took me long enough to read the updates. I love th...   Jan 22 2007, 01:53 AM
canis216   What Savlian really needs is a good alarm system, ...   Jan 22 2007, 02:02 AM
Black Hand   Man....I almost dont know who to root for.... May...   Jan 24 2007, 09:36 AM
The Metal Mallet   A black cloaked figured shuffled down the alleyway...   Jan 27 2007, 07:43 PM
Lord Revan   Excellant update MM, I foresee a collision course ...   Jan 27 2007, 07:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   It does make you think there will be a slash be...   Jan 27 2007, 08:48 PM
jack cloudy   The meeting of the assassins. Oh, boy. And Simion ...   Jan 27 2007, 10:33 PM
Malpense the Dark   Oh jeeze man this series is fantastic! :goodj...   Jan 28 2007, 02:22 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well, to answer your question Malpense, this story...   Jan 28 2007, 04:14 AM
canis216   :Hypnotism: Post-machine, Mallet, post-machine :Hy...   Jan 28 2007, 04:29 AM
Black Hand   Wow,....I have a term named after me now? **makes...   Jan 28 2007, 09:47 AM
Lord Revan   *loads a shot gun and slowly creeps up behind Blac...   Jan 28 2007, 08:46 PM
Black Hand   **Knows that Revan is there. Cuz, you cant sneak u...   Jan 28 2007, 08:55 PM
Lord Revan   Yeah, well it looked like you paused to think of s...   Jan 28 2007, 08:57 PM
jack cloudy   *A metal foot the size of Caius' house stomps ...   Jan 28 2007, 09:04 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, I didn't plan to! Seriously, you ha...   Feb 3 2007, 10:25 PM
canis216   Yeah, I'm wondering about that voice, too...   Feb 3 2007, 10:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Wow, creepy, and i too am looking differently at t...   Feb 3 2007, 10:49 PM
minque   Very nice and intriguing as always Mallie! You...   Feb 3 2007, 10:59 PM
Black Hand   Simion is getting more and more....mysterious...I ...   Feb 4 2007, 12:25 AM
The Metal Mallet   The plot thickens!!! I think.... I...   Feb 10 2007, 08:14 PM
canis216   Oh man, stories are crossing over and over... how ...   Feb 10 2007, 08:34 PM
jack cloudy   Ahah, my theories have not yet been revealed as wr...   Feb 10 2007, 09:19 PM
The Metal Mallet   Haha, yea canis, with all the crossovers there...   Feb 10 2007, 11:54 PM
canis216   Yeah, it's no problem--it just amuses me. :lol...   Feb 11 2007, 01:20 AM
Black Hand   Well, yeah. Technically in the Sethyas timeline Si...   Feb 11 2007, 08:34 AM
The Metal Mallet   Here's a little bit of a shorter one today. I...   Feb 17 2007, 08:08 PM
canis216   Ah, this is most interesting. Boethiah behind the ...   Feb 17 2007, 09:00 PM
jack cloudy   Self-mutilation to please a Daedra? Really, if it ...   Feb 17 2007, 10:57 PM
Black Hand   Going too far? I must disagree with the gentleman ...   Feb 18 2007, 07:46 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well I decided to take another creative interpreta...   Feb 24 2007, 08:19 PM
canis216   Dun-dun-dun! Very interesting indeed... I wo...   Feb 24 2007, 08:24 PM
Black Hand   Hmm. A 'Daedric' dagger so to speak....may...   Feb 24 2007, 08:53 PM
jack cloudy   That dagger is scaring me. Nice use of Eddie thoug...   Feb 24 2007, 09:19 PM
minque   EEEk! Hah! Nice interpretation of Fast Edd...   Feb 25 2007, 01:10 PM
The Metal Mallet   And now, to deviate a little! Hehehe! ...   Mar 3 2007, 07:08 PM
Black Hand   You cruel, cruel man! Taking away from the Tar...   Mar 3 2007, 07:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Sorry about the delay. Saturday was quite busy an...   Mar 14 2007, 09:01 PM
minque   Oh yeah....I think good writers could make up any ...   Mar 14 2007, 09:14 PM
canis216   Nice update! It's well worth the wait, Mal...   Mar 15 2007, 12:37 AM
jack cloudy   That was an interesting meeting. I've been th...   Mar 15 2007, 09:23 PM
The Metal Mallet   My thoughts exactly Jack. And as you'll find ...   Mar 17 2007, 07:27 PM
Black Hand   Duuuulce!   Mar 17 2007, 08:15 PM
The Metal Mallet   Duuuulce! ?????? Not quite sure what that...   Mar 17 2007, 08:27 PM
minque   It means something nice..it just has to...because ...   Mar 17 2007, 09:57 PM
Black Hand   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet.   Mar 17 2007, 11:05 PM
minque   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet. A...   Mar 17 2007, 11:17 PM
canis216   Sweet indeed... and it seems that the voice is som...   Mar 18 2007, 02:53 AM
The Metal Mallet   Another shorter one today. I hope you enjoy it al...   Mar 24 2007, 06:40 PM
Black Hand   Nice Depiction there! The Nerevarine sees thin...   Mar 24 2007, 06:51 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writt...   Mar 24 2007, 06:57 PM
Black Hand   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 06:18 AM
jack cloudy   For someone living in a world with a mage guild an...   Mar 24 2007, 11:17 PM
minque   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 11:53 AM
mplantinga   I just got caught up, and I've really enjoyed ...   Mar 27 2007, 04:58 AM
The Metal Mallet   And we're back! Or should I say, I am bac...   Apr 7 2007, 08:03 PM
Lord Revan   Tension between Savlian and the Count. Sounds a l...   Apr 7 2007, 08:40 PM
jack cloudy   I was hoping that they'd become friends. Guess...   Apr 7 2007, 10:13 PM
Black Hand   Nice to see an update here, sorry that I've be...   Apr 8 2007, 06:51 AM
canis216   I've been lax myself... work is partly to blam...   Apr 8 2007, 07:40 AM
The Metal Mallet   All righty! Our slight detour is at an end. ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:03 PM
mplantinga   Another excellent update. I'm really enjoying ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:10 PM
Black Hand   AWE-some!! Keep it up mally!!   Apr 14 2007, 07:37 PM
jack cloudy   What the Hand said. Silverbrand just sounds scary ...   Apr 14 2007, 08:59 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, nearly a month since I last updated this. So...   May 12 2007, 06:41 PM
jack cloudy   Wow, that was great. I loved the Enchantment stone...   May 12 2007, 09:01 PM
The Metal Mallet   Man, it feels like I'm getting close to ending...   May 19 2007, 06:46 PM
jack cloudy   Oh boy, things are heating up, big time. I see wha...   May 19 2007, 09:31 PM
Black Hand   sweet jebus, that took forever to update!...   May 20 2007, 05:52 AM
minque   Yup....finally I read it through....and I agree wi...   May 27 2007, 04:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, I'll see if I can keep up with steady up...   May 27 2007, 10:51 PM
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Lord Revan   Tsk, Tsk, Captain Savlian, no appreciation for thi...   Jun 16 2007, 06:56 PM
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The Metal Mallet   Due to my current internet problem at home (I stil...   Jul 28 2007, 02:45 PM
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