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The Metal Mallet
post Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
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Well, here's the link to the previous thread: Bloodlust - The Beginning

You can continue your praisings of my written words here. Expect an update next Saturday. I don't expect I'll get one out sooner. School starts again kvright.gif


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post Feb 17 2007, 08:08 PM
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Here's a little bit of a shorter one today. I have projects to do this long weekend, so I figured I'd try to belt out a quick one. It still ends on a appropriate note though tongue.gif



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Taris had wasted no time in his preparation to leaving Cyrodiil. After being released from the barracks, he had immediately travelled to “The Flying Bosmer” to gather his things. After that, he paid off the inn owner and swiftly vacated the town of Kvatch.

Now, he stood off in the woods nearby the main road that led to Chorrol. Taris made sure that no one was nearby, taking heed of Savlian’s warning about the use of teleportation magic. Certain that the area was clear of prying eyes, Taris activated his recall spell.

A wave of awkwardness attacked Taris’ senses briefly; adding that to a sense of weightlessness before Taris found himself standing in his office within his villa. The place looked exactly how he left it. The shelves of books still resided in the northern corner of the room, his desk, placed in front of a large window for its use of natural light, still had the jar of ink and cliffracer quills placed upon it. Everything was dust free as well. It meant that Freda was still doing her job.

Taris examined himself and realised that his clothes were still bloodstained from the altercation in the alley with Simion. Taris had been in such a hurry to get going, he had forgotten about the blood. Well, he was going to remedy that.

Taris left his office and began to head to his room. Along the way, an older looking Dunmer female rounded the corner carrying a load of clothing. At the sight of Taris, the startled Dunmer dropped her load of clothing; a high pitch squeak gave voice to her fright. Taris stopped and raised his hands to chest level, showing that he was unarmed.

“It’s just me, Freda. And the blood isn’t mine,” Taris said in a calming manner.

Freda’s eyes took a moment to recognise the master of the villa she worked for. Once they did, her eyes narrowed.

“I consider it quite inappropriate to spook your servants like that, serjo Dren!” she said sternly as she bent down to pick up the clothing she dropped, “Now I’ll have to clean some of these all over again.”

Taris helped Freda with picking up the clothing. Placing the last article on top of the pile, Taris gave his servant a small embrace.

“I’m sorry to have scared you, Freda. It was not my intention, and I wasn’t exactly planning on arriving back so soon.”

Freda eyed the assassin suspiciously. “You’re not in trouble with the law are you? By that blood on you, it looks like you’ve visited a slaughterhouse,” she exclaimed, her expression turning worrisome.

“It’s not like that. Actually, I’m kinda working with the law this time. Still, the reason for me being here is serious all the same.”

“Well I best stay out of your way then,” Freda said, beginning to head off. Taris stopped her though.

“Freda, if you have the time, could you locate any of my father’s possessions that we’ve kept in the villa?” he asked.

Freda looked about to ask Taris something, but stopped. Instead she simply nodded before leaving.




Taris stood in Orvas Dren’s room, his eyes taking in every nook and cranny of the room. Taris had decided to leave the room virtually untouched after his father’s death; he didn’t wish to sleep in the room of one who willingly caused those beneath him intense suffering.

The bed, long left untouched, was still made neatly. A stand of shelves still contained bits of various armours that Orvas had prided himself in collecting. One of his most cherished pieces, a pair of Daedric greaves, had been sent with his body to the Dren Ancestral Tomb. Taris hoped that he would not have to travel there to find his answer. It would only take away from the time he required to travel back to Kvatch.

The creaking of floorboards signalled Freda’s arrival. She carried a small crate, which rattled as the contents within moved about. Freda dropped the crate upon the bed unceremoniously. Brushing the dust off her hands, she looked to Taris.

“Well, that’s all that’s left here. Hopefully you find what you’re looking for,” she said, her voice hinting at worry, “Just be careful though; some memories aren’t meant to be remembered.”

Taris thanked the old Dunmer for her assistance. As she walked off, Taris opened up the crate and examined its contents. Inside there contained a couple of books, many of them religious books from the basically defunct Temple, and off the “good” Daedra. It also contained some exquisite jewellery and also an intricate looking dagger.

The dagger itself caught Taris’ attention. He picked up the weapon and read its inscription: “Silverbrand”. The name of the weapon further piqued Taris’ interest. The weapon was closely named to the legendary longsword, “Goldbrand”, which had been blessed by the Daedric Lord, Boethiah. Could this perhaps be a weapon also blessed by Boethiah?

Taris could understand why he father would possess such a weapon, should his speculation be correct. As a devout homeland Dunmer, Orvas held strong belief in traditional Dunmer religious, particularly the worship of what the Dunmer considered were the “Good Daedra”: Azura, Mephala, and Boethiah. Possessing anything blessed by those Daedra would be ample proof of Orvas’ devotion to tradition Dunmer values.

Taris placed the dagger aside and picked up one of the books. It happened to be about the Daedra, so he flipped to Boethiah’s page. What he read about the Daedric Lord got him thinking. Boethiah seemed to love violence, as if he revelled in the suffering of others. His attention returned to the dagger. It seemed more familiar now…

It was familiar! He had seen use it once before, in fact, he had seen Orvas drawing the blade across his forearm. Taris had peered into his father’s study, as he had thought he had heard a noise. Indeed the noise was the heavy breathing of Orvas, since he was cutting himself with the blade in some sort of ritualistic manner. The smell of burning flesh had been rank on his senses, but it was the crazed look in his father’s eyes that had scared him away. The same look that Simion has been using.

It looked like the answer was beginning to pull itself together.


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The Metal Mallet   Bloodlust - The Continuation   Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
jack cloudy   The losses were greater than expected. Savlian mu...   Jan 6 2007, 10:25 PM
Black Hand   Whoa....nicely done. Savage in its descriptions, b...   Jan 7 2007, 08:23 AM
canis216   Seems like everyone wants to visit Simion now... S...   Jan 7 2007, 08:31 AM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! First update on the new thread. I hope ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:27 PM
canis216   Hmm... is Simion trying to flee from The Voice? ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:32 PM
jack cloudy   I'm convinced that Savlian will meet the MT ag...   Jan 13 2007, 09:36 PM
Black Hand   Ohh, how could I have missed the update? Veerryy N...   Jan 18 2007, 06:22 PM
The Metal Mallet   The Bloodlust continues! Muahahaha! :D ...   Jan 20 2007, 07:56 PM
jack cloudy   Words of truth there, words of truth. Finding a di...   Jan 20 2007, 08:03 PM
minque   Niiiiiiice! I like it, as Jackie said the conv...   Jan 20 2007, 08:27 PM
Soulseeker3.0   took me long enough to read the updates. I love th...   Jan 22 2007, 01:53 AM
canis216   What Savlian really needs is a good alarm system, ...   Jan 22 2007, 02:02 AM
Black Hand   Man....I almost dont know who to root for.... May...   Jan 24 2007, 09:36 AM
The Metal Mallet   A black cloaked figured shuffled down the alleyway...   Jan 27 2007, 07:43 PM
Lord Revan   Excellant update MM, I foresee a collision course ...   Jan 27 2007, 07:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   It does make you think there will be a slash be...   Jan 27 2007, 08:48 PM
jack cloudy   The meeting of the assassins. Oh, boy. And Simion ...   Jan 27 2007, 10:33 PM
Malpense the Dark   Oh jeeze man this series is fantastic! :goodj...   Jan 28 2007, 02:22 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well, to answer your question Malpense, this story...   Jan 28 2007, 04:14 AM
canis216   :Hypnotism: Post-machine, Mallet, post-machine :Hy...   Jan 28 2007, 04:29 AM
Black Hand   Wow,....I have a term named after me now? **makes...   Jan 28 2007, 09:47 AM
Lord Revan   *loads a shot gun and slowly creeps up behind Blac...   Jan 28 2007, 08:46 PM
Black Hand   **Knows that Revan is there. Cuz, you cant sneak u...   Jan 28 2007, 08:55 PM
Lord Revan   Yeah, well it looked like you paused to think of s...   Jan 28 2007, 08:57 PM
jack cloudy   *A metal foot the size of Caius' house stomps ...   Jan 28 2007, 09:04 PM
The Metal Mallet   Why you smashing up my city! It's people ...   Feb 3 2007, 08:13 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, I didn't plan to! Seriously, you ha...   Feb 3 2007, 10:25 PM
canis216   Yeah, I'm wondering about that voice, too...   Feb 3 2007, 10:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Wow, creepy, and i too am looking differently at t...   Feb 3 2007, 10:49 PM
minque   Very nice and intriguing as always Mallie! You...   Feb 3 2007, 10:59 PM
Black Hand   Simion is getting more and more....mysterious...I ...   Feb 4 2007, 12:25 AM
The Metal Mallet   The plot thickens!!! I think.... I...   Feb 10 2007, 08:14 PM
canis216   Oh man, stories are crossing over and over... how ...   Feb 10 2007, 08:34 PM
jack cloudy   Ahah, my theories have not yet been revealed as wr...   Feb 10 2007, 09:19 PM
The Metal Mallet   Haha, yea canis, with all the crossovers there...   Feb 10 2007, 11:54 PM
canis216   Yeah, it's no problem--it just amuses me. :lol...   Feb 11 2007, 01:20 AM
Black Hand   Well, yeah. Technically in the Sethyas timeline Si...   Feb 11 2007, 08:34 AM
canis216   Ah, this is most interesting. Boethiah behind the ...   Feb 17 2007, 09:00 PM
jack cloudy   Self-mutilation to please a Daedra? Really, if it ...   Feb 17 2007, 10:57 PM
Black Hand   Going too far? I must disagree with the gentleman ...   Feb 18 2007, 07:46 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well I decided to take another creative interpreta...   Feb 24 2007, 08:19 PM
canis216   Dun-dun-dun! Very interesting indeed... I wo...   Feb 24 2007, 08:24 PM
Black Hand   Hmm. A 'Daedric' dagger so to speak....may...   Feb 24 2007, 08:53 PM
jack cloudy   That dagger is scaring me. Nice use of Eddie thoug...   Feb 24 2007, 09:19 PM
minque   EEEk! Hah! Nice interpretation of Fast Edd...   Feb 25 2007, 01:10 PM
The Metal Mallet   And now, to deviate a little! Hehehe! ...   Mar 3 2007, 07:08 PM
Black Hand   You cruel, cruel man! Taking away from the Tar...   Mar 3 2007, 07:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Sorry about the delay. Saturday was quite busy an...   Mar 14 2007, 09:01 PM
minque   Oh yeah....I think good writers could make up any ...   Mar 14 2007, 09:14 PM
canis216   Nice update! It's well worth the wait, Mal...   Mar 15 2007, 12:37 AM
jack cloudy   That was an interesting meeting. I've been th...   Mar 15 2007, 09:23 PM
The Metal Mallet   My thoughts exactly Jack. And as you'll find ...   Mar 17 2007, 07:27 PM
Black Hand   Duuuulce!   Mar 17 2007, 08:15 PM
The Metal Mallet   Duuuulce! ?????? Not quite sure what that...   Mar 17 2007, 08:27 PM
minque   It means something nice..it just has to...because ...   Mar 17 2007, 09:57 PM
Black Hand   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet.   Mar 17 2007, 11:05 PM
minque   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet. A...   Mar 17 2007, 11:17 PM
canis216   Sweet indeed... and it seems that the voice is som...   Mar 18 2007, 02:53 AM
The Metal Mallet   Another shorter one today. I hope you enjoy it al...   Mar 24 2007, 06:40 PM
Black Hand   Nice Depiction there! The Nerevarine sees thin...   Mar 24 2007, 06:51 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writt...   Mar 24 2007, 06:57 PM
Black Hand   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 06:18 AM
jack cloudy   For someone living in a world with a mage guild an...   Mar 24 2007, 11:17 PM
minque   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 11:53 AM
mplantinga   I just got caught up, and I've really enjoyed ...   Mar 27 2007, 04:58 AM
The Metal Mallet   And we're back! Or should I say, I am bac...   Apr 7 2007, 08:03 PM
Lord Revan   Tension between Savlian and the Count. Sounds a l...   Apr 7 2007, 08:40 PM
jack cloudy   I was hoping that they'd become friends. Guess...   Apr 7 2007, 10:13 PM
Black Hand   Nice to see an update here, sorry that I've be...   Apr 8 2007, 06:51 AM
canis216   I've been lax myself... work is partly to blam...   Apr 8 2007, 07:40 AM
The Metal Mallet   All righty! Our slight detour is at an end. ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:03 PM
mplantinga   Another excellent update. I'm really enjoying ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:10 PM
Black Hand   AWE-some!! Keep it up mally!!   Apr 14 2007, 07:37 PM
jack cloudy   What the Hand said. Silverbrand just sounds scary ...   Apr 14 2007, 08:59 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, nearly a month since I last updated this. So...   May 12 2007, 06:41 PM
jack cloudy   Wow, that was great. I loved the Enchantment stone...   May 12 2007, 09:01 PM
The Metal Mallet   Man, it feels like I'm getting close to ending...   May 19 2007, 06:46 PM
jack cloudy   Oh boy, things are heating up, big time. I see wha...   May 19 2007, 09:31 PM
Black Hand   sweet jebus, that took forever to update!...   May 20 2007, 05:52 AM
minque   Yup....finally I read it through....and I agree wi...   May 27 2007, 04:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, I'll see if I can keep up with steady up...   May 27 2007, 10:51 PM
The Metal Mallet   All right, time to continue this thing after anoth...   Jun 16 2007, 06:34 PM
Lord Revan   Tsk, Tsk, Captain Savlian, no appreciation for thi...   Jun 16 2007, 06:56 PM
jack cloudy   Why oh why do I have the feeling that the guards a...   Jun 16 2007, 06:57 PM
canis216   Oh man, the ending is so close now... but what wil...   Jun 16 2007, 07:45 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow. I just caught up and i'd like to say that...   Jul 12 2007, 02:40 AM
Lord Revan   I have to agree with SoulSeeker, our favorite guar...   Jul 12 2007, 07:21 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well after another respite, I'm back with a sm...   Jul 14 2007, 05:21 PM
jack cloudy   Good to see that they made up, bad to see more Imp...   Jul 14 2007, 06:08 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Well, I can only hope that the Tong gets to Simion...   Jul 15 2007, 02:22 AM
Black Hand   Very well written in the introduction there. Broug...   Jul 15 2007, 09:35 AM
The Metal Mallet   Due to my current internet problem at home (I stil...   Jul 28 2007, 02:45 PM
minque   When you wait for something good.....they say...An...   Aug 5 2007, 02:21 PM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! With restored internet connection comes ...   Aug 11 2007, 05:58 PM
canis216   Oh man... it is on.   Aug 11 2007, 07:34 PM
Black Hand   Keep it coming!   Aug 11 2007, 07:44 PM
The Metal Mallet   The sudden killing of one of the guardsmen made th...   Aug 18 2007, 06:47 PM
jack cloudy   The anticipation is killing me! Ok, either Kv...   Aug 18 2007, 09:44 PM
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