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The Metal Mallet
post Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
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Well, here's the link to the previous thread: Bloodlust - The Beginning

You can continue your praisings of my written words here. Expect an update next Saturday. I don't expect I'll get one out sooner. School starts again kvright.gif


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The Metal Mallet
post Feb 24 2007, 08:19 PM
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Well I decided to take another creative interpretation of a familiar Morrowind character (well, familiar for you Telvanni fans) for the sake of my story. Though I think it still fits, I guess I'll see how you're opinions go with it. On with the story!



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The annoying squawk of a cliffracer reminded Taris of some of the things he was glad he didn’t have to experience during his absence from Vvardenfell. Still, the pests of the sky were in the distance and Taris thought they would not be prone to attack him, especially since the ramparts of Moonmoth Legion Fort rested just on the other side of the foyoda. The Imperial Legion fort was not Taris’ destined location though, it was the nearby town of Balmora that Taris sought to enter. For it was there that he hoped to find someone to examine Silverbrand, and hopefully discern its properties.

The dagger was carefully sheathed upon his belt, hidden from view. He did not want any thieves attempting to pluck the valuable weapon from him before he found out all that he could about it. Taris was certain that by knowing how the dagger works, he’d be able to defeat Simion with the gathered information. Taris knew this was the only object that connected his father with Simion, this had to be what he was looking for! There was nothing trivial about this!

As he passed the fortress, which was cradled by the mountains separating the West Gash area from the Ascadian Isles region of Vvardenfell, he could see the shimmering reflection of the Odai River. In the distance he could see the palisade walls of Balmora, and the distant moaning of a Silt Strider.

Balmora was almost a third home to Taris, only precedent after his villa and the Guild Headquarters. His father had to travel to Balmora often to attend to House business and he would often bring Taris along with him. Taris would spend his time at the Council Hall, or simply roaming the city, studying its every intricacy. Over the years Taris had grown quite familiar with the layout of the city. He knew that the Thieves Guild ran the South Wall Cornerclub while the Commona Tong had been firmly established at the Council Club. An unknown assailant, thought to have been working out of interest of the Legion, had unceremoniously slaughtered the Commona Tong members. He also knew of the enchanters who held their practice in the city.

Taris knew that there were at least three enchanters in Balmora, the two obvious ones were the ones appointed to the Temple and the Mages Guild. The third though, Taris thought not too many people knew about. It was this enchanter that Taris hoped to see, though there was the possible chance that the Dunmer skipped town a wile ago.

Taris entered the familiar sight of the market square, his plain cloak wrapped around himself to conceal anything underneath it. Even though Guild duties had kept him away from Balmora for an extensive amount of time, the place still looked unchanged. He didn’t bask in the sight for long though, he had duties to accomplish. He walked behind the Mages Guild and arrived at the Odai, the river splitting the town in two. He kept on the same side of the river, heading for a collection of two story apartment homes instead of crossing over to the housing division of town. At the last house, Taris walked up the stairs and knocked on the door.

The distinctive rustling of someone moving within brought a slight smile to Taris’ face. He was still in town, which meant that the Telvanni had yet to bother him again.

The door creaked open and a suspicious Dunmer face peeked through the other side. As recognition registered, the Dunmer’s eyes widen and he threw open the door. “Taris, my friend! Come on in, and don’t mind the mess,” the enchanter said, ushering the assassin in with eager joy.

Taris carefully stepped over the junk littering the floor of “Fast Eddie’s “ apartment. Eddie was a former agent of the Telvanni until a slight with the wrong person left him banished from Telvanni-controlled cities like Sadrith Mora, and Tel Mora. Eddie had decided to reside in Balmora privately, but he still kept up the telltale Telvanni paranoia of expecting to be killed anytime. To say he was a little odd would be an understatement.

“So, sera, can I get you anything? Scrib jelly on bread? Some scuttle?” Eddie replied in his quick, raspy voice as he rummaged through his pantry.

“No thanks, Eddie, I actually want you to look at something for me,” Taris replied, getting straight to the point. He didn’t have the time for pleasantries.

Eddie caught onto Taris’ serious tone and his happy mood dampened to one that matched the situation. He pulled up a seat across from Taris and fixed him with an attentive stare. “Well, what is it?”

Taris reached into his cloak and removed the dagger, placing it on the table to his right. “I need to know anything to everything about this dagger. It’s called Silverbrand and I believe it’s related to the Daedric Lord Boethiah, I also think it connects with a current problem my Guild is facing,” Taris said plainly, not seeking to embellish anything.

Eddie studied the dagger from afar; his eyes fixed intently on the weapon. “I can hear its power ringing even from here,” he muttered as if he was talking to himself. He turned his attention back to Taris. “I’ll need time to study this, if indeed you say this is a weapon blessed by the Daedra. Come back in 24 hours and I’ll tell you what I’ve discovered.”

Taris rose from his seat, satisfied for now. A day wasn’t that big of a deal if progress was being made. As he approached the door he turned back around. “I’m sorry that we don’t have time to actually talk, but once this is over I’ll do my best to pay you a visit.”

“Yes, yes, I’m sure we will. Now leave me to my studying,” Eddie said in an annoyed tone, his eyes still fixed on the dagger and his hand waving in a “shooshing” motion.

A slight grin on his face, Taris closed the door.




Taris had spent the night at the Balmora chapter Guildhall. Free rooming and food was something one couldn’t just pass up. After that, he spent the morning walking around town. Reintroducing himself was what he felt like he was doing. In the afternoon he would stop by Eddie’s place.

When he knocked on the enchanter’s door, he was surprised to not get any answer. He knocked again and still no answer. Worry crept through him once again. He silently hoped that Eddie was just so focused in his studying that he couldn’t hear the knocking.

He tried the door and to his dismay he found it locked. Something wasn’t right. Eddie wouldn’t have his door locked at this time of the day. Cautiously, Taris scanned his surroundings for signs of guards. Feeling that he wasn’t being watched, he casually took out a lockpick and carefully went to picking the lock while trying to look inconspicuous. After several stressful moments, the door lock opened with a satisfied click. Taris eased the door open and went inside.

The sight that greeted him briefly stunned Taris. Eddie stood at the back of his home. His whole body was tense and rigid, and his eyes were glazed over in a trance-like state. Within his hand was Silverbrand, poised to strike directly into the mer’s heart.

Panic raced through Taris as he lunged across the room towards the enchanter. Before Eddie could plunge the dagger into himself, Taris crashed heavily with the Dunmer, taking them both to the ground. Silverbrand clattered to the floor beside him.

“What the hell were you thinking!?” Taris shouted at the dazed Eddie.

The glazed looked vanished from Eddie’s eyes as he looked around frightfully. His eyes finally made contact with Taris’ and he visually relaxed, sighing in relief. “Praise Azura you came!”

“What the hell were you doing!?” Taris said, deciding to reiterate his question.

Eddie blanched. “It wasn’t me doing it, Taris. It was the dagger,” he said nervously, casting his eyes towards the fallen dagger. His eyes returned back to Taris and Taris could see the fear plain and clear on the Dunmer’s face.

“That dagger, Taris, is bad news. Very bad news.”


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The Metal Mallet   Bloodlust - The Continuation   Jan 6 2007, 09:12 PM
jack cloudy   The losses were greater than expected. Savlian mu...   Jan 6 2007, 10:25 PM
Black Hand   Whoa....nicely done. Savage in its descriptions, b...   Jan 7 2007, 08:23 AM
canis216   Seems like everyone wants to visit Simion now... S...   Jan 7 2007, 08:31 AM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! First update on the new thread. I hope ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:27 PM
canis216   Hmm... is Simion trying to flee from The Voice? ...   Jan 13 2007, 09:32 PM
jack cloudy   I'm convinced that Savlian will meet the MT ag...   Jan 13 2007, 09:36 PM
Black Hand   Ohh, how could I have missed the update? Veerryy N...   Jan 18 2007, 06:22 PM
The Metal Mallet   The Bloodlust continues! Muahahaha! :D ...   Jan 20 2007, 07:56 PM
jack cloudy   Words of truth there, words of truth. Finding a di...   Jan 20 2007, 08:03 PM
minque   Niiiiiiice! I like it, as Jackie said the conv...   Jan 20 2007, 08:27 PM
Soulseeker3.0   took me long enough to read the updates. I love th...   Jan 22 2007, 01:53 AM
canis216   What Savlian really needs is a good alarm system, ...   Jan 22 2007, 02:02 AM
Black Hand   Man....I almost dont know who to root for.... May...   Jan 24 2007, 09:36 AM
The Metal Mallet   A black cloaked figured shuffled down the alleyway...   Jan 27 2007, 07:43 PM
Lord Revan   Excellant update MM, I foresee a collision course ...   Jan 27 2007, 07:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   It does make you think there will be a slash be...   Jan 27 2007, 08:48 PM
jack cloudy   The meeting of the assassins. Oh, boy. And Simion ...   Jan 27 2007, 10:33 PM
Malpense the Dark   Oh jeeze man this series is fantastic! :goodj...   Jan 28 2007, 02:22 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well, to answer your question Malpense, this story...   Jan 28 2007, 04:14 AM
canis216   :Hypnotism: Post-machine, Mallet, post-machine :Hy...   Jan 28 2007, 04:29 AM
Black Hand   Wow,....I have a term named after me now? **makes...   Jan 28 2007, 09:47 AM
Lord Revan   *loads a shot gun and slowly creeps up behind Blac...   Jan 28 2007, 08:46 PM
Black Hand   **Knows that Revan is there. Cuz, you cant sneak u...   Jan 28 2007, 08:55 PM
Lord Revan   Yeah, well it looked like you paused to think of s...   Jan 28 2007, 08:57 PM
jack cloudy   *A metal foot the size of Caius' house stomps ...   Jan 28 2007, 09:04 PM
The Metal Mallet   Why you smashing up my city! It's people ...   Feb 3 2007, 08:13 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, I didn't plan to! Seriously, you ha...   Feb 3 2007, 10:25 PM
canis216   Yeah, I'm wondering about that voice, too...   Feb 3 2007, 10:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Wow, creepy, and i too am looking differently at t...   Feb 3 2007, 10:49 PM
minque   Very nice and intriguing as always Mallie! You...   Feb 3 2007, 10:59 PM
Black Hand   Simion is getting more and more....mysterious...I ...   Feb 4 2007, 12:25 AM
The Metal Mallet   The plot thickens!!! I think.... I...   Feb 10 2007, 08:14 PM
canis216   Oh man, stories are crossing over and over... how ...   Feb 10 2007, 08:34 PM
jack cloudy   Ahah, my theories have not yet been revealed as wr...   Feb 10 2007, 09:19 PM
The Metal Mallet   Haha, yea canis, with all the crossovers there...   Feb 10 2007, 11:54 PM
canis216   Yeah, it's no problem--it just amuses me. :lol...   Feb 11 2007, 01:20 AM
Black Hand   Well, yeah. Technically in the Sethyas timeline Si...   Feb 11 2007, 08:34 AM
The Metal Mallet   Here's a little bit of a shorter one today. I...   Feb 17 2007, 08:08 PM
canis216   Ah, this is most interesting. Boethiah behind the ...   Feb 17 2007, 09:00 PM
jack cloudy   Self-mutilation to please a Daedra? Really, if it ...   Feb 17 2007, 10:57 PM
Black Hand   Going too far? I must disagree with the gentleman ...   Feb 18 2007, 07:46 AM
canis216   Dun-dun-dun! Very interesting indeed... I wo...   Feb 24 2007, 08:24 PM
Black Hand   Hmm. A 'Daedric' dagger so to speak....may...   Feb 24 2007, 08:53 PM
jack cloudy   That dagger is scaring me. Nice use of Eddie thoug...   Feb 24 2007, 09:19 PM
minque   EEEk! Hah! Nice interpretation of Fast Edd...   Feb 25 2007, 01:10 PM
The Metal Mallet   And now, to deviate a little! Hehehe! ...   Mar 3 2007, 07:08 PM
Black Hand   You cruel, cruel man! Taking away from the Tar...   Mar 3 2007, 07:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Sorry about the delay. Saturday was quite busy an...   Mar 14 2007, 09:01 PM
minque   Oh yeah....I think good writers could make up any ...   Mar 14 2007, 09:14 PM
canis216   Nice update! It's well worth the wait, Mal...   Mar 15 2007, 12:37 AM
jack cloudy   That was an interesting meeting. I've been th...   Mar 15 2007, 09:23 PM
The Metal Mallet   My thoughts exactly Jack. And as you'll find ...   Mar 17 2007, 07:27 PM
Black Hand   Duuuulce!   Mar 17 2007, 08:15 PM
The Metal Mallet   Duuuulce! ?????? Not quite sure what that...   Mar 17 2007, 08:27 PM
minque   It means something nice..it just has to...because ...   Mar 17 2007, 09:57 PM
Black Hand   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet.   Mar 17 2007, 11:05 PM
minque   Dulce is Sweet in spanish. Duuulce = Sweeeet. A...   Mar 17 2007, 11:17 PM
canis216   Sweet indeed... and it seems that the voice is som...   Mar 18 2007, 02:53 AM
The Metal Mallet   Another shorter one today. I hope you enjoy it al...   Mar 24 2007, 06:40 PM
Black Hand   Nice Depiction there! The Nerevarine sees thin...   Mar 24 2007, 06:51 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writt...   Mar 24 2007, 06:57 PM
Black Hand   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 06:18 AM
jack cloudy   For someone living in a world with a mage guild an...   Mar 24 2007, 11:17 PM
minque   Well, he does see Azura, and haven't you writ...   Mar 25 2007, 11:53 AM
mplantinga   I just got caught up, and I've really enjoyed ...   Mar 27 2007, 04:58 AM
The Metal Mallet   And we're back! Or should I say, I am bac...   Apr 7 2007, 08:03 PM
Lord Revan   Tension between Savlian and the Count. Sounds a l...   Apr 7 2007, 08:40 PM
jack cloudy   I was hoping that they'd become friends. Guess...   Apr 7 2007, 10:13 PM
Black Hand   Nice to see an update here, sorry that I've be...   Apr 8 2007, 06:51 AM
canis216   I've been lax myself... work is partly to blam...   Apr 8 2007, 07:40 AM
The Metal Mallet   All righty! Our slight detour is at an end. ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:03 PM
mplantinga   Another excellent update. I'm really enjoying ...   Apr 14 2007, 07:10 PM
Black Hand   AWE-some!! Keep it up mally!!   Apr 14 2007, 07:37 PM
jack cloudy   What the Hand said. Silverbrand just sounds scary ...   Apr 14 2007, 08:59 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, nearly a month since I last updated this. So...   May 12 2007, 06:41 PM
jack cloudy   Wow, that was great. I loved the Enchantment stone...   May 12 2007, 09:01 PM
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Black Hand   sweet jebus, that took forever to update!...   May 20 2007, 05:52 AM
minque   Yup....finally I read it through....and I agree wi...   May 27 2007, 04:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, I'll see if I can keep up with steady up...   May 27 2007, 10:51 PM
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