The Tale Of Jerrick, Prologue Options

[Shinnok]

This is my first Fan Fic so be brutally honest please.
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The cold rain wiped the blood off my face. I felt stained by the death of others, for death should not be feared all things die but it is the one that causes death who should feared.
I've faced death before, and im lucky i've come out with nothing worse than a few scars. I start to remember how it all started. The Drama that is my life.

[jack cloudy]

Well, right now there is storywise not much to comment on because it is a short prologue. I'll keep from commenting till you've posted the next update. So far, it appears we're dealing with someone who has issues over his own killing. Those characters are always very interesting to read about if they're done right. There are a few small grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing serious enough to get angry about. Why, I bet I've made a few mistakes in this post already.

Anyway, continue whenever you want.