 The Tale Of Jerrick, Prologue |
| Shinnok |
 Apr 7 2007, 12:40 AM
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This is my first Fan Fic so be brutally honest please.
________________________________________________________________________________ ____________ The cold rain wiped the blood off my face. I felt stained by the death of others, for death should not be feared all things die but it is the one that causes death who should feared. I've faced death before, and im lucky i've come out with nothing worse than a few scars. I start to remember how it all started. The Drama that is my life. |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Apr 7 2007, 05:01 PM
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Well, since it seems like you're seeking comments, I guess I'll give you one. I need to see more than one paragraph to give you a fair comment on your writing or story or content, etc. I read every single fan fic that's one this forum (well I guess I don't read the a lot of the stuff that came out before I arrived here) and I often comment on them, so don't worry about me not commenting on your story. I was just holding out for more substance.
So, continue, then I'll give you a "real" comment!  Welcome to the forums! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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Shinnok The Tale Of Jerrick Apr 7 2007, 12:40 AM
jack cloudy Well, right now there is storywise not much to com... Apr 7 2007, 09:33 AM Shinnok Thank you Jack for the positive reinforcement. Im... Apr 7 2007, 03:55 PM minque Ah! A new writer! Welcome to the fan-fic-f... Apr 7 2007, 04:39 PM
Shinnok Thank you all. Im going to take Metal Mallets advi... Apr 7 2007, 05:20 PM minque
Thank you all. Im going to take Metal Mallets adv... Apr 7 2007, 05:22 PM |
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