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Agent Griff
post May 27 2007, 12:35 PM
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So this is the beggining of chapter 2. I hope you will like Preston and his rather awkward personality. He is inspired from the personal frustrations I'm sure we all had at one time or another.

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The Pelican dropship finally landed after an hour-long descent from the Atlas. As Randall and Mike got off, Mike threw a quick glance towards the sky thinking about Quinn's fleet which was leaving them to fend for themselves. Even though he regretted leaving the safety of the ships above, he wanted to find his "brother" just as much. So did Randall.

As soon as they got off the Pelican, Randall ordered the pilot to maneuvre the dropship somewhere where it would be out of view. Stealth was of the essence. Covenant ships could appear any time, and Randall did not want to risk being discovered. As soon as all the necesary preparations were made, Randall, Mike and the 6 Marines accompanying them went off to find Tom.

Meanwhile, in the cave, Tom was having a rather odd discussion with his new found companion Preston.

"So you mean to say that there was a colony here, and that you were one of the colonists?" Tom asked, perplexed by Preston's reply to one of his questions.

"Yes, how many times do I have to tell you so you can believe me? I was a member of the colony, until...until it happened." Preston said with a rather fearful voice.

"What happened? Was it when the other colonists dissapeared?" Tom asked.

"Yes...yes it was. I don't really know what happened. I just found myself, lying on the ground and bleeding and they were all gone. A strange smell was in the air, it didn't feel like something...natural. I looked for days and days but I couldn't find them. They might not have been very nice to me, but at least I wasn't alone. I didn't know what to do after they dissapeared." Preston said with a rather confused voice.

"So how did you end up here?" Tom asked. His suspicions grew with every one of Preston's replies.

"I...um...I...don't actually remember. I just woke up in this cave one morning. The colony was miles away and I didn't remember how I had gotten here. Before I found you, I used to wander back and forth between the colony and this cave. When I found you, I decided to drag you here, since the cave was closer. If you want, we can go back to the colony though it isn't in a pretty good state." Preston said.

"Hm, now that's pretty odd. Durendal, run a check and see if what he's saying is true. Back to my questions, what did you do with my weapons?" Tom asked, after asking his AI to see if what Preston was saying was true.

"They're in here, in the cave. I held them for you since you were unconscious. You can have them back, I have no need for them anymore...I mean, I don't need them." Preston said after gasping quickly. It seemed that he did not mean to say something.

"What do you mean...you don't need my guns anymore? What did you do with them?" Tom asked in an edgy voice.

"Nothing...nothing...I mean that there are no...um, lifeforms on this planet to warrant a need for...weapons. Here, take them. They're all yours." Preston said.

"Hm, I think I'll just go...rest a little. I want to be by myself and think. You...go back to whatever you were doing before I woke up." Tom said as he left Preston. Tom started thinking that Preston was to blame for the dissapearance of his fellow colonists. Tom also wanted to contact his "brothers" as soon as possible to see if a rescue team had been sent.

As soon as Tom had left, Preston began mumbling something to himself. After a while, he started talking to himself in an eery way.

"That went...well. Don't you think?" Preston said. After a short moment of silence, he started talking once more. "No, I don't think he's figured it out yet. But I don't want to be here when he does." After a while of silence, he started talking again. "No! It's your problem! I don't want anything more to do with it! We shouldn't have done what we did from the start! It was too extreme." Preston said with an angry tone. After a while he started talking once more. "Oh, just shut up. I'm tired of you. I'm alone because of you! I have no friends because of you! It's just your fault. Leave me alone."

As Preston was arguing...with himself in the other chamber, Tom was trying to contact Randall and Mike.

"Yes, I detect the presence of both Grendel and Achilles. And they're also rather close-by. I'll try to contact Grendel. Anything else?" Durendal asked Tom as he was doing what was asked of him.

"Yes. What did you come up with regarding the colony Preston was talking about?" Tom asked.

"I found something regarding a minor facility here exploiting some natural gases. All contact with it was lost several years ago, after which it was officially shut down. There are some official records regarding the colonists, but they are limited. I can't find any mention whatsoever about any Preston character. There are only some 12 personnel listed." Durendal said.

"Hm...strange. What do you think of this Preston guy?" Tom asked.

"I find him rather harmless, yet potentially threatening at the same time. I find it highly suspicious that he was the sole survivor after the dissapearance of the other colonists." Durendal said. Durendal had a built-in tone analyzer which analyzed the tone in which someone spoke, deciding at the same time if the person was lying or not. Based on this, Durendal was an accurate judge of character and motive.

"I don't think we should linger here too much. The sooner we're away from Preston the better. Have you managed to make a link with Randall?" Tom asked, returning to the most important manner at hand.

"Not yet. There seems to be a storm outside which is causing interference. We'll have to wait for it to pass." Durendal said.

"Very well then. As soon as this storm passes, we're out of here." Tom said as he lied down to rest.

While Tom was waiting for the storm to pass, Randall and Mike were exploring the nearby landscape. They had made their base camp inside the Pelican, which had been nestled in between some rocky outcrops. As they searched more and more for Tom, they were hit by the storm which prevented Durendal from communicating with their AIs. Wishing to take cover, they dashed for the nearest rocky outcropping.

Soon enough, they found a small cave. Curious to see what was inside, Randall, Mike and the 6 Marines entered. As they made their way further and further inside the cave, the enviroment was beginning to have an eery purple colour about it. Wires and metal soon started appearing as well. Before they could realize it, Randall and Mike had ended up inside the ruin of the Sacred Promise. Inside, they found the mangled remains of hundreds of Covenant and the burnt remnants of their once-mighty ship.

As the squad explored the ship, they also found some Covenant ship-board computers which were still working. The controls however were too alien for a human to wield. Based on their surroundings, Randall and the others figured that they were inside what used to be the bridge of the ship. As they explored further, they also discovered a small box-shaped apparatus of a bright colour. It stood out between the charred purple metal around it.

After a few minutes of tinkering with the device, Mike managed to activate it. From the noise it made, it was clear soon enough that the device was a black box which recorded the final moments of the ship. It started playing a recording of the final moments of the ship. Everyone stood and listened in awe.

"DAMAGE CONTROL: Fire! Fire! Multiple hull breaches aft of meridian control surfaces, decks seven through twelve!

CAPTAIN: Jettison chemical weapons stores and take all other weapons systems, deck four through sixteen, offline.

WEAPON CONTROL: Doing so...

ENGINEERING: [simultaneous with above] It is done!

CAPT: Bring Devotion in close to protect our dead zone... request additional fighter support from Commitment and Patience...

COMMUNICATIONS: Devotion, this is Sacred Promise... request close support our stern. I repeat. Sacred Promise requesting close support our stern.

COMM. (Devotion): Sacred Promise, this is Devotion... will arrive in 1200 seconds. This is Devotion, in transit now-arrival in 1190 seconds.

COMM.: Commitment and Patience, this is Sacred Promise... request additional fighter coverage. I repeat. Sacred Promise requesting additional fighter coverage.

COMM. (Commitment and Patience): Sacred Promise, say again... your signal is breaking up.

NAVIGATION (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] Contact alpha has fired its main weapon!

DC (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] ...solid projectiles closing at 18 kilometers per second. Their trajectory will carry them through main engineering and drive section... brace for impact!

COMM.: [simultaneous with above] Commitment and Patience, this is Sacred Promise... are you receiving me? Over.

NAV. (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] I've lost attitude control...

DC (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] Engineering is gone, Sir! Main drive is offline-I'm reading a fuel cell rupture! Fuel cell rupture, Sir!

CAPT. (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] Sound general alarm! All hands abandon ship!

COMM.: [simultaneous with above] Commitment and Patience, this is Sacred Promise... are you receiving me? Over.

COMM. (Commitment and Patience): [overheard] squeal! {Sound is most likely communications equipment failure due to near instantaneous vaporization of ship.}

NAV.: Commitment and Patience has suffered full fuel cell containment failure - brace for impact in 5... 4... 3... 2...

{Interruption: Klaxons and other warning sirens activate}

DC: Hull integrity compromised on all decks aft of meridian control surfaces!

NAV.: [simultaneous with above] Drive control completely offline!

CAPT.: Sound general alarm! All hands move forward of meridian, prepare to abandon ship!

NAV.: Sir! We are accelerating towards primary planet!

DC: [simultaneous with above] We have a catastrophic over-surge event in drive section! Main drive has entered runaway state!

CAPT.: Set shields full forward! All hands abandon ship! Engineering; jettison fuel cells!

NAV.: [simultaneous with above] We will be entering the primary planet's atmosphere in less than three minutes... still accelerating, Sir!

CAPT.: All hands not yet evacuated prepare for emergency atmospheric landing!

DC: Sir, structural integrity is under 63%-we have multiple hull breaches spanning several decks-the planet's atmosphere is apparently stable...

CAPT.: [simultaneous with above] Redirect 20% shields aft, if we survive atmospheric entry you may distribute shields as you see fit.

NAV.: Brace for atmospheric entry in 9... 8... 7... 6...

SECURITY: [simultaneous with above] Sir, still no response from engineering!

CAPT.: What?!

SEC.: [simultaneous with above] There are no life-signs in engineering and I'm reading all fuel cells are still on board!

NAV.: [simultaneous with above] 5... 4... 3... 2..."

With the recording over, the squad could only think about the fate of the crew of the ship. One thing however bothered Mike greatly. What if the captain was still alive. The Ship Master of a Covenant ship was always a foe to be reckoned with. Unbeknownst to Mike, and the rest of the squad, a few of the crew members had survived the crash and Fleet Master Kusovai was among them. Kusovai, together with Voro and a few other Elites had survived the impending crash and were now recovering from the shock of crash landing on the planet.

As the 2 different groups were exploring the ship for 2 different purposes, the humans trying to discover as many things about it as possible, and the Elites trying to get off, a meeting would inevitable...
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I hope you liked this part of Gray Team.


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Agent Griff
post Jun 12 2007, 05:44 PM
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I see you've discovered how I based Ramirez on the leader of the Helljumpers from Halo CE. A pretty cheap metaphor, eh? Well, I try to give refferences to the Halo games. I'm glad you liked the update though. I'm also sure that you'll come to realize that Gray Team aren't very much like regular Spartans. They are somewhat...special.

And what do you mean by "melancholy as opposed to melancholic"?

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Agent Griff   Gray Team   May 27 2007, 12:35 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmmm, sounds like the next update is going to get ...   May 27 2007, 06:33 PM
Agent Griff   The next part of chapter 2. Enjoy. ~~~ Kusovai, w...   Jun 3 2007, 07:09 PM
jack cloudy   Woah, things got a little hectic back there. I...   Jun 3 2007, 07:44 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow the tension during the faceoff scene was great...   Jun 3 2007, 07:59 PM
Agent Griff   This part will introduce yet another character whi...   Jun 4 2007, 02:20 PM
Lord Revan   Well, here's suggestion: remember that Brutes ...   Jun 4 2007, 02:44 PM
Agent Griff   Yeah, I though about the Covenant names like Unggo...   Jun 4 2007, 06:24 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmmm lots of maneuvering going on in this update. ...   Jun 7 2007, 01:07 AM
Lord Revan   Yeah, the SPARTANs are equal in strength, agility,...   Jun 7 2007, 04:16 AM
Agent Griff   The next part. ~~~ Back on the Brute-controlled CC...   Jun 12 2007, 08:09 AM
Lord Revan   Excellent work, melancholy as opposed to melanchol...   Jun 12 2007, 04:56 PM
Lord Revan   I do not think that melancholic is a word. Ah, you...   Jun 12 2007, 05:49 PM
Agent Griff   I've read about her in passing but I've no...   Jun 12 2007, 08:38 PM
Lord Revan   Hmm..... Lieutenant McKay was Silva's second i...   Jun 12 2007, 09:33 PM
The Metal Mallet   Another solid update. Definitely a realistic prot...   Jun 13 2007, 12:24 AM
Lord Revan   No, Elites are also rather fanatical at times. Bu...   Jun 13 2007, 12:28 AM
The Metal Mallet   I've only seen the Elites go fanatical when th...   Jun 13 2007, 12:46 AM
Lord Revan   Yeah, in the game you never see something (other t...   Jun 13 2007, 12:51 AM
Agent Griff   Well, I've never actually seen anything run ou...   Jun 13 2007, 07:07 AM
Lord Revan   Yeah, I imagine the entire Covenant and all of hum...   Jun 13 2007, 08:05 PM
jack cloudy   I liked the banter with Achilles though I doubt if...   Jun 13 2007, 09:42 PM


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