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treydog
post May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
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“But sir, if you would only give me a little more time, I am certain you would be interested in my proposition.”

“The answer is still ‘No’, Mr. Beauchamp. I have no desire to listen to anything you have to say. You may leave now.”

“If I gave offense by my earlier remarks, I apologize. It is simply that one sometimes hears things…. I know that financial remuneration is not important to you, but I thought that perhaps the spirit of adventure might be enough to entice you.”

“Mr. Beauchamp, I have everything I need right here. My family is here, my home is here, my life is here. I have no interest in the ‘spirit of adventure’. I have found that ‘adventure’ is simply another way of saying ‘a desperate attempt to survive the situation in which one has stupidly placed oneself’. You will leave now. That is not a request.”

I heard the front door open and close with a finality that punctuated those last words. Then another voice spoke up:

“Weren’t you perhaps a bit hard on him, dear?”

The response was a growl:

“You heard what he said as well as I did- ‘…your well-known talent for getting into and out of tight places….’ He called me a thief, is what he did.”

“Well, yes, but after all, you were a thief, you know. And he did come to you directly, not lurking behind some intermediary.”

“Perhaps I used to be a thief, but I hoped I had put all that behind me. And besides, he came to me arrogantly and rudely, just as if he were a bloody Imperial, instead of a fellow Breton."


“ ’A bloody Imperial?’ ” I could envision the raised eyebrow that accompanied that innocent question.

The voices moved away to another part of the house, and I could not make out the muttered words that I was sure were an apology. But that wasn’t important; I had already heard everything I needed to know. I had a name now and a goal. Louis Beauchamp- and Solstheim!

Leaving home is rarely easy, or at least so I have heard. But I felt as if I had to, as if I was slowly smothering. If I was going to do the things I wanted to do, I must get away. There were places I wanted to explore- places he had never been. How typical of him to disparage the idea of adventure- after he had lived the kind of life others only dreamed of! And then to just…stop. As if he could pretend that none of it had ever happened if he did not speak of it. But others spoke of it- oh yes. Louis Beauchamp certainly had that right- one did “hear things”. It was easy enough to tell others that the meat was no good when you had eaten your fill. But I had tasted nothing but the scraps of someone else’s greatness for my whole life and I could stand it no longer. I would leave that very night- but not for Solstheim, at least not yet. It would not do to arrive in that far place as a penniless beggar. Although we were comfortable, and never wanted for the necessities, money was not given to me in any quantity. And though I knew the location of the family treasury well enough, I would not steal. I would not be named a thief, no matter who my father was.

Once the house had quieted, I gathered a small pack of clothing, the few coins that were my own, and a well-worn quarterstaff. How I longed for a bright blade to hang at my side! How could a ready fellow such as I set off on a grand adventure without a trusty sword? But of course I had never been trained in the use of swords, and I recalled the answer when I asked:

“Violence is the result of a mistake. If you avoid mistakes, you can avoid fights. A good walking stick will serve you better. Anything that cannot be dealt with by a sharp rap on the snout is best avoided.”

As if I had never seen the scars that marked his body, never heard the stories that everyone knew by heart, never gazed at the virtual armory hidden throughout the house.
Most of the hidden weapons appeared to be no more than well-used examples of the crafter’s art…. But some of them seemed to… whisper among themselves and to move of their own volition. I know it sounds foolish, the overheated imagining of a child, but I swear it is true. He had never gotten those swords or those scars sitting in front of the fire, reading books. And yet, when he went to the corner club for a solitary drink, and the other men related their exploits, he said nothing. Instead, he simply sat in the shadows with a glass of wine. Even so, if ever a stranger came through and became too loud or boastful, someone would nod toward the quiet figure in the corner and whisper a few words. And then the braggart would fall silent, perhaps even turn a bit pale.

All of these thoughts and more tumbled through my head as I waited in the pre-dawn darkness for the silt-strider to arrive. Perhaps it was foolish to use such a public means of transport, but I wanted distance. And going to Balmora first would help throw off any pursuit. In any event, I doubted that there would be much concern, at least not for several days. When the strider driver saw me waiting, he grinned and said,

“Going on a trip are ye, young sir? I’ll have you in Balmora before you know it. Just sit back and relax.”

He waved away my offered fare with a jovial snort.

“Oh, no charge for you, young sir. Get yourself on up and we’ll be on our way.”

I took his generosity with bad grace, because I knew that it was not for my own sake that I did not have to pay my passage. I was nobody, nothing- just another who stood in the great man’s shadow. He was the hero of the age- everyone said so. Books and ballads had been written about him. And why not? After all, he was Trey of High Rock, Nerevar Reborn, savior of Vvardenfell. And I was his son.

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post Jul 15 2007, 07:29 PM
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Chapter 2


Although I had given my oath to General Darius, I would not formally become a recruit of the Imperial Legion until I had signed the roll. I hastened to the barracks to complete the process- and found that all was not as I had imagined. There was a huge contrast between the general and the trooper who enrolled me. He was a scruffy, unshaven individual, who constantly worked a wad of hackle-lo leaf from one jaw to the other. Some of the juice had dribbled into the whiskers on his chin. When I saluted, he waved a vague hand at me and then proffered the Legion register with a mumbled,

“Make yer mark, kid. ‘Less yer havin’ second thoughts?”

When I reached for the quill, he snickered,

“It’s yer funeral, Bub.”

Amongst the illegible scrawls and shaky “X’s” I wrote my full name:

Athlain ap Baria Treyson

The trooper stared at the neat writing with bemusement and then called over another rumpled Legionnaire. He pointed a grimy finger at my signature and said,

“Looka here, Troop. We got us officer material here. Look how pretty he writes! Is that right, boy? You figger yer officer material?”

This last was addressed to me, but I knew better than to respond. I could have told the lout that the Legion register was an official Imperial document and that it required my full name. I could have explained that I was named for Athyn Sarethi, for my mother and for my father. And I could have pointed out that the explosion of births following the passing of the Blight had necessitated schools- schools that my artist mother and writer/scholar/ warrior father had insisted I attend. But I did not. Some battles cannot be won- only endured. So I said nothing until they tired of their sport and directed me to the quartermaster to be outfitted.

That worthy proved to be a heavyset Breton with a face that had seen it all and liked none of it. He sized me up with a practiced eye and began pulling equipment from various racks and bins, all the while with a running commentary:

“Cuirass, chain mail, medium, slightly used, one each. Bloodstains will come out when you polish it. Greaves, steel, right and left, one each. Those go on your legs, right greave on the right leg, left greave on the left. Helmet, steel, one each. That’s to preserve what few brains you may have left. Boots, steel, right and left, one each. You’ll figure out which is which eventually. Spear, iron, one each. The pointy end goes toward the enemy; try not to put your eye out. Have a nice day.”

I staggered to my bunk under the weight of the assorted iron and steel, feeling uncomfortably like an overloaded tinker’s wagon. I consoled myself with the thought that the weight would feel less once I put everything on. Probably. I laid out all the rusty metal, noting that it bore little resemblance to the shining uniform of a Knight of the Legion. I poked a finger into the rents in the chain cuirass, rents that looked uncommonly like the marks of large, sharp teeth. Before I could pursue that line of thought further, a voice bellowed from behind me:

“Is the sun down, recruit? Did anyone tell you to go to bed? Did they tell you to put all this worthless junk on one of my nice, clean bunks? Well, did they?”

I whipped around to see a red-faced Imperial trooper glaring at me. As I tried to decide which question to answer first, he rolled his eyes skyward and intoned, as if to an uncaring god:

“Why do I always get the idiots? What have I done to get on General Darius’ list?”

He brought his eyes back to focus on me. With a couple of quick movements, he dumped the armor and spear onto the floor. Then he glared at me again. In a low growl, he said,

“That is the bunk of an Imperial trooper. You are NOT an Imperial trooper. You are a recruit. You are lower than the stuff I wipe off my boots after walking in the guar pen. You have not earned a bunk. You will be an Imperial trooper when I decide that you are ready, however doubtful that outcome may be. Now grab that pile of junk and follow me, recruit.”


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treydog   Blood on the Moon   May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
The Metal Mallet   Oooo, this is going to be a very interesting story...   May 13 2007, 12:37 AM
minque   Oh-My...YIPPEEEE!!!! treydog is ba...   May 13 2007, 09:12 AM
blockhead   This quote made me ponder though... So is the ...   May 13 2007, 03:56 PM
treydog   Blockhead- you have things exactly right... on a n...   May 13 2007, 04:00 PM
minque   Yes of course! Mama Baria is also Imperial, I ...   May 13 2007, 05:06 PM
blockhead   Yes of course! Mama Baria is also Imperial, I...   May 14 2007, 01:20 PM
minque   Yes of course! Mama Baria is also Imperial, ...   May 14 2007, 07:04 PM
jack cloudy   Great, the master has returned. So far, it has al...   May 13 2007, 07:47 PM
burntsierra   :blink: :blink: :blink: I did not expect to ...   May 14 2007, 10:15 PM
treydog   [center]Chapter 1 As always, Balmora was a welcom...   May 17 2007, 01:37 AM
The Metal Mallet   I guess it's not in Trey's character to tr...   May 17 2007, 03:15 AM
treydog   [center]Interlude 1 [i]From a broadsheet posted t...   May 18 2007, 12:29 AM
Lord Revan   It's not difficult to sympathize for Athlain w...   May 18 2007, 12:52 AM
The Metal Mallet   Ooo, an interlude eh? This is new from you. Glad...   May 18 2007, 12:57 AM
blockhead   So after two days of a stupid power outage, I come...   May 18 2007, 11:16 AM
jack cloudy   Really? I'd say that [2] would piss of pop as ...   May 18 2007, 01:46 PM
Black Hand   Dang! Can't believe I missed all this in t...   May 20 2007, 05:40 AM
minque   Oh Athlain, dear boy! I know it must be very h...   May 20 2007, 08:48 PM
Wolfie   Awesome! I come wandering into the Fan Fiction...   May 20 2007, 09:34 PM
treydog   The several days I spent on the trail to Seyda Nee...   May 25 2007, 12:15 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hehehe. That's one way to get in a potshot at...   May 25 2007, 01:00 AM
minque   Joining the Legion are we huh? Well well....Dad wo...   May 25 2007, 06:16 PM
treydog   One of my purposes in the town had been accomplish...   May 27 2007, 03:41 AM
Black Hand   Wow.   May 28 2007, 07:06 AM
minque   Ahhh, a glimpse from his hildhood! with all au...   May 29 2007, 10:39 PM
treydog   Yes, my father could do anything- or so it seemed....   Jun 3 2007, 01:12 AM
minque   Haha! Awesome! So Trey is kinda moody and ...   Jun 3 2007, 06:42 AM
Black Hand   "True to his values"? Oh man, the value ...   Jun 3 2007, 06:05 PM
treydog   @ minque- Of course you are far more than simply ...   Jun 3 2007, 07:09 PM
jack cloudy   It took him quite a while to deal with that ghost....   Jun 3 2007, 07:43 PM
The Metal Mallet   Very tricky, trey, nice little addition about Athl...   Jun 3 2007, 07:46 PM
Dire Cheesecake   Hm, I haven't played Morrowind in years, and I...   Jun 3 2007, 10:33 PM
canis216   Mentor's ring is indeed nice. And it was funny...   Jun 3 2007, 10:49 PM
Wolfie   Hehehe... I figured you weren't gonna let him ...   Jun 7 2007, 06:02 PM
treydog   A short one this time, without much action. This ...   Jun 17 2007, 11:25 PM
canis216   I wonder who is watching. I imagine that the son o...   Jun 18 2007, 01:05 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm, yes, can't forget about those guys. I ca...   Jun 18 2007, 02:47 AM
mplantinga   I was very excited to find a brand new story by Tr...   Jun 18 2007, 08:42 PM
jack cloudy   I liked the bit about the repairs. With the glue a...   Jun 18 2007, 08:50 PM
Avego   Heh! I love you Treydog! I've been a...   Jun 19 2007, 04:08 PM
treydog   Heh! I love you Treydog! I've been ...   Jun 20 2007, 02:19 PM
minque   Ahhh Athlain, I wonder whos eyes are watching you?...   Jun 19 2007, 07:08 PM
Avego   Thank you, it means alot to have a helping hand fr...   Jul 7 2007, 07:00 PM
treydog   Sorry for the long delay- I could plead RL compli...   Jul 9 2007, 01:09 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm, I wonder how long Athlain will still view the...   Jul 9 2007, 04:26 AM
jack cloudy   Well, I hope he won't get the rough treatment ...   Jul 9 2007, 09:17 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Call me a pessimist but i keep thinking that somet...   Jul 12 2007, 10:41 PM
treydog   Interlude the Second Contents of a note delivered...   Jul 14 2007, 11:39 PM
jack cloudy   Welcome to the army, kid. :D   Jul 15 2007, 09:03 PM
The Metal Mallet   Oh boy! I always love hard-nosed sergeants th...   Jul 15 2007, 11:54 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Very nice Character there Trey, gotta love that at...   Jul 17 2007, 09:29 PM
minque   Imperial Legion huh? Didn´t his dad tell him stori...   Jul 17 2007, 11:32 PM
burntsierra   This is shaping up to be as much as a classic as T...   Jul 21 2007, 03:32 PM
minque   This is shaping up to be as much as a classic as ...   Jul 21 2007, 03:54 PM
The Metal Mallet   Yes indeed minque, it would be awesome for you to ...   Jul 21 2007, 04:05 PM
canis216   Maybe now Athlain is seeing why his father (who is...   Jul 22 2007, 06:51 AM
treydog   Once we got outside the barracks, the angry Legion...   Jul 28 2007, 03:20 AM
Black Hand   Nice!   Jul 28 2007, 07:05 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, I think someone has watched Full Metal Jacke...   Jul 28 2007, 02:39 PM
treydog   When I awakened, it was to behold a circle of nigh...   Aug 4 2007, 03:52 AM
Black Hand   Impressive ,Trey. Most impressive.   Aug 4 2007, 02:12 PM
The Metal Mallet   Looks like things are beginning to swing on the up...   Aug 4 2007, 04:16 PM
canis216   Ha-Hah! The Legion needs Athlain! Nice, ni...   Aug 5 2007, 12:17 AM
minque   Now now, young Athlain! You just watch your ba...   Aug 5 2007, 01:59 PM
BSD-IES   It might just be me, but this story is getting eve...   Aug 13 2007, 11:52 PM
treydog   The work of training continued to be brutal, despi...   Aug 18 2007, 11:48 PM
The Metal Mallet   Uh-oh! Cliffhanger! A classic spot to en...   Aug 19 2007, 12:33 AM
BSD-IES   You know, I'm beginning to think there should ...   Aug 19 2007, 12:36 AM
minque   Uhhh? Most peculiar.....I wonder..I think there´s ...   Aug 19 2007, 11:48 AM
jack cloudy   Maybe promotion? If so, rejoice! Yet even heav...   Aug 19 2007, 11:58 AM
canis216   I too expect a promotion. The Legion likes to give...   Aug 19 2007, 06:10 PM
treydog   The words fell upon my ears like a hammer blow- “…...   Aug 26 2007, 08:17 PM
jack cloudy   An excellent update. I especially liked the warni...   Aug 26 2007, 09:05 PM
The Metal Mallet   I really like the fact that we delve more into Car...   Aug 26 2007, 09:36 PM
minque   Wise words from Carbo, just let´s hope young mr Tr...   Sep 24 2007, 08:54 PM
pdblake   Just wondering if anyone knows if Treydog is alrig...   Oct 24 2007, 08:39 AM
minque   Just wondering if anyone knows if Treydog is alri...   Oct 25 2007, 08:57 PM
pdblake   Just wondering if anyone knows if Treydog is alr...   Oct 26 2007, 09:06 AM
canis216   He posted in the Coffee Shop a matter of days ago....   Oct 26 2007, 03:15 AM
treydog   The answer to all of the above questions is ...   Oct 26 2007, 04:06 PM
treydog   A short installment that was too long in the makin...   Dec 15 2007, 05:30 AM
canis216   Ah, so very nice... and I see that Trey managed to...   Dec 15 2007, 10:59 AM
minque   Uhh....hehe so Athlain is no natural born swordsma...   Dec 16 2007, 08:50 PM
jack cloudy   The sword, the traditional hero's weapon. Meh...   Dec 16 2007, 08:54 PM
mplantinga   A short installment long in the making is always b...   Dec 17 2007, 05:20 PM
treydog   Interlude Three [i]A letter posted from Fort Dari...   Dec 20 2007, 02:22 PM
pdblake   Love the way the form already has the 'suspect...   Dec 20 2007, 03:49 PM
mplantinga   Leave it to the Legion to have a fill-in-the-blank...   Dec 20 2007, 04:18 PM
minque   Ahhhh just wonderful! Hmmmm Athinae huh? I won...   Dec 20 2007, 07:28 PM
The Metal Mallet   Excellent couple of posts. I really enjoyed the M...   Dec 20 2007, 08:57 PM
blockhead   Innnnnnteresting. Welcome back, Treydog :)   Dec 20 2007, 11:57 PM
treydog   I cannot relate the events that took place in Ashi...   Dec 31 2007, 08:46 PM
blockhead   And his eyes…. I know they’re brown; I’ve looked...   Jan 1 2008, 12:45 AM
jack cloudy   Supernatural focus? I seem to remember that Trey g...   Jan 1 2008, 12:10 AM
minque   Ohhhh....that was interesting! Does he know ...   Jan 1 2008, 01:02 AM
mplantinga   Face his mother indeed. She will not be happy, exc...   Jan 2 2008, 04:14 PM
treydog   The prospect of going home filled me with mixed em...   Jan 5 2008, 05:05 AM
Black Hand   Ahhhh, motherly love.....   Jan 5 2008, 05:24 AM
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