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Chapter 3 Gathering Forces

I decided to take a walk through the beautiful City of Balmora before finding my quarters. It was a rather big city, sturdy houses made of some kind of yellowish stone were scattered on each side of a river. I did meet quite a lot of people strolling on the riverbank, and in the streets. Most of them were very friendly, with few exceptions, who were clad in a strange type of armor and called themselves “guards”.

There seemed to be a lot of service available here, armorer, outfitters, various shops and to my greatest satisfaction I found a book-store. Now I can´t resist visiting a book-store whenever I find one and this time was no exception.

“Balmora Bookstore – owner; Dorisa Darvel” the sign by the door said and I stepped inside, meeting a young Dunmer girl, looking up from a book she was reading, friendly smiling at me.

“Good evening to you” she said, “what can I do for you?”

She was beautiful and the kind tone in her greeting touched me, so I smiled back to her;

“ I love books” I said, not the most intelligent answer, but I was somewhat stunned by the open friendliness with which she addressed me. “I´d like to look around for a while if that´s Ok with you?”

“By all means Muthsera, you´re welcome, take your time” With those words she got back to her reading.

I turned to the books, there were a lot of them, many unknown to me but also some titles I remembered seeing in Cyrodiil, even in the Library of the prison. When strolling among the bookshelves I suddenly heard someone coughing, naturally I got terrified, I didn´t expect someone else to be there besides the lovely Dorisa, but now I spotted a “guard” in that weird armor I´d seen in the streets. “Well naturally”, I thought when my heart stopped pounding, “she had to have some kind of protection, so young and all alone in her store.”

I found a couple of useful books though; A Guide to Balmora, and then there was another one where the name of it caught my interest, it was a Guide to Ald´ruhn, Ald´ruhn…there it was again…..my fate was somewhat bound to this place I imagined, far too many coincidences lately! Then I had to stop buying books, if I should be able to pay for night-quarters. It was obvious that I must try to get some kind of a job because I´d soon run out of the few septims I had.

With my new books in my satchel I then took a hearty godbye of Dorisa Darvel, certain that I´d visit her store again and made my way down the street. I noticed that the Mage´s and the Fighter´s guilds were situated nearly right across the bookstore, that knowledge could eventually come in handy later on…..

Further down, the street broadened a bit, stairs leading down to the river Odai, that I just learnt from the Guide, and also stairs leading upwards, then again I didn´t bother exploring anymore of the city tonight, all I wanted now was a decent meal and a bed for the night.

From a distance you could hear the whereabouts of the inn “Eight Plates”, laughs and raised voices accompanied by some weird kind of “music”…sounded out from a building to the left of the street. I hesitated for a while but decided it couldn´t be all that bad so I went inside…..

It was an Inn alright, but quite different from those back in The Imperial City….This one was dark, there was a distinct mouldy smell oozing from the very walls, and there were not many guests, just two Dunmeri sitting at a table heavily arguing about someone sleeping with someone else´s wife…..another rather drunk man in an ever weirder armor than the outside guards, was pacing back and forth muttering and hissing at some invisible enemy. Then there was the landlady, a tall elderly Dunmeri woman with an extremely dark voice, shouting at the drunken man to shut up and sit down otherwise he would be expelled from the premises.

I stopped at the counter and asked for night-quarters. The landlady stopped yelling at the drunk and turned to me thoroughly examining me before saying;

“Nah look what we have here guys!, an Outlander….and a woman, now that´s quite extraordinary” She laughed and stared at me, undressing me with her looks and I felt quite bad. It was not a good idea of coming here, but what choice did I have?

“Nightquarters” she laughed….”the little lady wants a bed, right?..and maybe some company to go with it?”

“No, I just want somewhere to sleep and something to eat if it´s possible” I tried to keep calm and be polite, despite the rage I felt inside by this insulting comments.

The men who were arguing before sat silent now and watched me with curiousity, the armored drunk had finally given up, lying beside the wall heavily snoring.

“Women don´t come in here unless they want some company”, the landlady snapped at me, “but nevermind, I´ll let you have the room downstairs to the right”. She then handed me the key and turned away.

The room was very small, a bed, a chair and a little table at the bedside, and it was filled up. Now I didn´t mind that at all, all I needed was a bed, but I checked the lock on the door very thoroughly, didn´t want any visitors….

After putting my gear on the bed, I went upstairs to investigate the possibility of having something to eat. The landlady was not very pleased with the thought of cooking me a meal so she shook her head in a negative answer on my request.

“Now now Dulnea, what about those kwama-eggs I brought you this afternoon, you haven´t finished them already have you?” A soft voice came out of a dark corner of the inn, and a young man stepped forward. He was a Dunmer, tall and slender, of about my age, maybe a few years older, pointed cheekbones, a complexion fairly light grey, and a tribal tattoo on his forehead, his red-brownish hair glowed in the dim lights from the lanterns on the wall, his eyes were red but then very sad and he looked thoughtfully right into my face.

“Oh heck,” Dulnea snapped at him, “Very well I´ll fry some eggs then, you certainly are a strange kind of man, Sedrane Mirpal, always volunteering to aid, being a woman or an outlander, your father would be ashamed of you”…..

“You know perfectly well that I don´t have a father” he said harshly and then turned to me;

“I bid you welcome to Balmora lady, and do forgive Dulnea, she is a hag sometimes but basicly she has a heart of gold, by the way my name is Sedrane Mirpal” .The young Dunmer reached out his hand to me and looked me straight into the eyes.

I felt weak, my legs trembled as I took his hand; strong and warm…..I was all lost in his earnest gaze, my voice was not but a whisper when I told him my name.

I simply had to sit down, having no idea what was happening to me,…….

“Ok Serene, let´s put you to bed before you pass out”, Sedrane took my hand again and led me down the stairs to my room, “I´ll bring you the food in a minute, but I think you have to
lie down for a while”
Lying on my bed I let my thoughts wander…..No doubt I was attracted to Sedrane Mirpal, he was very handsome, and that dark low voice, so soothing so calming and so sexy……and his hands, strong, warm and supporting. I closed my eyes and let it come to me, the feeling of something not yet experienced but still I knew what it was….Love!


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minque   Serene of Cyrodiil, chapter 3 "Gathering Forces"   May 8 2005, 11:02 PM
Soulseeker3.0   very good Minque   May 8 2005, 11:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Minque, like how the "spirit" is in the Inn h...   May 9 2005, 02:03 PM
minque   Hey, thought I´d submit a picture of the young ash...   May 11 2005, 05:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice story... :goodjob: and nice made, wish I coul...   May 11 2005, 05:57 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow hes cool   May 11 2005, 09:31 PM
Aki   And the plot thickens... :D Heh, thats a nic et...   May 11 2005, 11:16 PM
minque   And the plot thickens... :D Heh, thats a nic et...   May 11 2005, 11:43 PM
Soulseeker3.0   i can see it now, an imperial with pointy ears and...   May 11 2005, 11:54 PM
minque   The door opened and Sedrane came in with a large b...   May 12 2005, 09:42 PM
jonajosa   keep it up please. I need somthing to read. Im get...   May 12 2005, 09:46 PM
minque   yay...you will update soon...? niiice......I´m wai...   May 12 2005, 09:49 PM
Soulseeker3.0   don't worry Minque take your time...... oh who am ...   May 13 2005, 01:21 AM
burntsierra   don't worry Minque take your time...... oh who am ...   May 15 2005, 12:28 AM
Elongar   (beg, beg, grovel, grovel) I think I'll follow ...   May 15 2005, 12:19 PM
minque   “ This must be a mistake,” I addressed Caius, “I a...   May 15 2005, 09:02 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Great Minque! :lickinglips2: Your stories are good...   May 15 2005, 09:08 PM
Aki   Very cool. :goodjob: Interesting interpretati...   May 15 2005, 10:30 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job MInque and is there by any chance that we...   May 15 2005, 10:35 PM
minque   Well Naturally! I´ll do anything for you... ;) ...   May 15 2005, 10:45 PM
burntsierra   Hm, I could do a Jona here. " :goodjob: " (tm...   May 16 2005, 12:39 AM
Soulseeker3.0   hot. :) http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/otn/wi...   May 16 2005, 02:38 AM
Ze Milanio   Finaly ! Our hero winds up in the good ol' Ald-Ruh...   May 16 2005, 03:10 PM
jonajosa   Hmm so thats a jonajosa.... Well then whats to sa...   May 16 2005, 10:44 PM
minque   Hmm so thats a jonajosa.... Well then whats to sa...   May 16 2005, 10:51 PM
jonajosa   Ill have to talk to him about his recent lazy natu...   May 16 2005, 11:06 PM
minque   well please do.....i don´t mind... :D i just write...   May 16 2005, 11:09 PM
Soulseeker3.0   HOLY, nice avatar Minque!!   May 17 2005, 12:35 AM
NEO256   Wow this is indeed some amazing stuf, but about th...   May 18 2005, 08:14 PM
minque   Neminda looked at me. ”Yes” she said,” please tell...   May 19 2005, 03:19 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Hehe :hearts: Nice written Minque, please post...   May 19 2005, 03:46 PM
treydog   It is hard for me to say more than I did at the "o...   May 19 2005, 04:49 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Great job Minque the General was a, errmm, very in...   May 19 2005, 09:33 PM
jonajosa   Or to put it in East Tennessean, "You done good!...   May 19 2005, 10:04 PM
minque   Great job Minque the General was a, errmm, very in...   May 19 2005, 10:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   fine :( i'll wait. lol no I didn't realy like him.   May 19 2005, 10:19 PM
burntsierra   Three days without coming online. Torture I tell y...   May 21 2005, 11:14 AM
Wolfie   I finally caught up with this story lol :D Great ...   May 21 2005, 03:36 PM
Elongar   One day, I will take this all, plonk it into a Wor...   May 25 2005, 06:22 PM
burntsierra   One day, I will take this all, plonk it into a Wor...   May 25 2005, 06:45 PM
Dantrag   Or the EASTERN North Carolinian. "Reading's fe...   May 25 2005, 08:14 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hey Minque why isn't there a new addition? :(   May 25 2005, 09:49 PM
jonajosa   Because Im working on it. :D   May 25 2005, 09:51 PM
JJPro612   Very Nice story, i like it alot, keep it up. aweso...   May 26 2005, 12:55 AM
Soulseeker3.0   Because [u]Im working on it. :D WHAT!?!?!?! So...   May 26 2005, 01:43 AM
jonajosa   you can spit out topics as soon as your done with ...   May 26 2005, 07:00 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oh ok thats good. :)   May 26 2005, 09:24 PM
minque   Covering my mouth and nose with a part of my cloak...   May 28 2005, 01:01 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Great Minque... :goodjob: Nix-Hounds give us dogs...   May 28 2005, 01:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hen all of a sudden I found out what a Nix-hound r...   May 28 2005, 06:55 PM
Stargazey   Very nice. You've inspired me to write more ;).   May 28 2005, 07:13 PM
Elongar   Very nice. You've inspired me to read more ;) He...   May 28 2005, 07:15 PM
jonajosa   Exactly my thoughts. :goodjob:   May 28 2005, 07:50 PM
burntsierra   Edwinna Elbert did not ask any questions as she ...   May 28 2005, 07:51 PM
Aki   Great Minque... :goodjob: Nix-Hounds give us dogs...   May 28 2005, 08:10 PM
Wolfie   Great work again Minque :D   May 30 2005, 02:01 AM
treydog   As always, your vivid descriptions make the story ...   May 31 2005, 01:37 PM
minque   The plan was to update now but there has been so m...   Jun 7 2005, 12:04 AM
Wolfie   I suppose we can forgive you lol :D   Jun 7 2005, 12:07 AM
minque   Might as well post this part once again, it was on...   Jun 20 2005, 11:48 PM
Mazuk   Wow. That is a very detailed and well laid out st...   Jun 21 2005, 12:21 AM
treydog   I am impressed by the way you were able to maintai...   Jun 22 2005, 04:08 PM
Fuzzy Knight   :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: ...   Jun 22 2005, 04:09 PM
Dantrag   I swear to god, I'm gonna catch up on thisstory so...   Jun 22 2005, 04:38 PM
minque   Thank you guys! Your comments are heart-warming! ...   Jun 22 2005, 04:40 PM
MerGirl   Thank you guys! Your comments are heart-warming! ...   Jun 22 2005, 04:55 PM
Wolfie   Sweet, an update :D   Jun 22 2005, 04:57 PM
minque   I promised an update...here it is..Enjoy! ”Wa...   Jun 22 2005, 10:57 PM
Mazuk   Wow another great update. Awesome job minque.   Jun 22 2005, 11:38 PM
Chumbaniya   I really like the story minque (I don't normally r...   Jun 23 2005, 12:01 AM
Wolfie   Cool :D And would The Lord Nerevar Reborn happen ...   Jun 23 2005, 12:18 AM
Dantrag   Cool :D And would The Lord Nerevar Reborn happen ...   Jun 23 2005, 02:06 AM
minque   I really like the story minque (I don't normally r...   Jun 23 2005, 08:55 AM
jonajosa   Shame treydog... shame. How could you miss that? L...   Jun 23 2005, 11:05 PM
Ze Milanio   Owwwww :shocked: this is beginning to look like Or...   Jun 23 2005, 11:38 PM
Lucidarius   I've read your story so far, minque, and I immense...   Jul 6 2005, 01:27 PM
minque   First of all I´ll thank you all for your nice fee...   Jul 6 2005, 06:08 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Minque... Great writing... as always :D Its n...   Jul 6 2005, 06:18 PM
jonajosa   :goodjob:   Jul 6 2005, 10:24 PM
MerGirl   *cries (in happiness, mind you!)* I'm so happy tha...   Jul 6 2005, 11:11 PM
Wolfie   Yay! Update! Great as always Minque :D   Jul 7 2005, 12:05 AM
treydog   Even after a long wait, your story immediately dra...   Jul 7 2005, 12:19 AM
minque   Thank you all for your wonderful comments, it´s re...   Jul 7 2005, 12:27 AM
jonajosa   Um. I hate to do this but..... I state this rul...   Jul 7 2005, 12:37 AM
Soulseeker3.0   Nice Minque I just caought up and is Lord Nerevar ...   Jul 7 2005, 10:39 PM
Wolfie   No, The Lord Nerevar Reborn is a young Breton who ...   Jul 7 2005, 10:43 PM
Soulseeker3.0   ya, I figured that out......   Jul 9 2005, 11:51 PM
minque   mmmm yup , clever minxes.....Lord Nerevar is Trey...   Jul 10 2005, 12:08 AM
Dantrag   it is trey...read trey's last entry///   Jul 10 2005, 12:08 AM
Soulseeker3.0   yes also lonewolf I ,er, made that statment before...   Jul 10 2005, 12:17 AM
Kiln   This story is completely awesome. I read a few ch...   Jul 10 2005, 08:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   sssooooo Minque..... when ya going to update it? T...   Jul 10 2005, 09:55 PM
minque   ahhhhh...well, I´ll have to tear myself away from ...   Jul 10 2005, 09:59 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oooh ok, which Rp? the Serene one or the rpg threa...   Jul 10 2005, 10:00 PM
minque   A Mystery unleashed..and yes Serene appears there ...   Jul 10 2005, 10:08 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oooh I see. the one I was in all of a suddeen stop...   Jul 10 2005, 10:52 PM
Lucidarius   Really nice update, mingue. The armor scene was ve...   Jul 11 2005, 08:11 PM
Dantrag   minque, prepared to be proud of me! I caught...   Jul 12 2005, 04:40 PM
minque   WoW...I´m not only proud I´m honoured as well...a...   Jul 12 2005, 09:40 PM
Kiln   Don't tease us like that. :P *Crowd gathers*...   Jul 13 2005, 12:33 AM
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