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Dantrag
post Jul 15 2005, 01:52 PM
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Here's the beginning - I promised I would post it before leaving for the week.

Chapter 9
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Valnor and Nyph stood behind Lergo from a distance, still skeptical about what the mage said he could do.

There were one hundred training dummies all in a group, with Lergo facing them about a hundred feet away. The mage began chanting loudly with both hands raised to the sky. The sound of his voice got louder and louder as the spell gained in intensity. A swirl of black clouds appeared over the dummies, and Lergo stopped chanting. When the cloud stood still over the targets, he slowly put his hands down and walked back to Valnor and Nyph.

"Just wait a second." he said with a wink.

Immediately after Lergo turned around, one hundred bolts of lighting came down, hitting every single dummy - a powerful spell to say the least, but it had taken the mage over thirty minutes to cast it.

Valnor and Nyph stood speechless as Lergo walked towards his tent, mumbling about how hungry he was.

As soon as the utter amazement subsided, Valnor grew more serious. "I think it's time to begin the attacks on the tribes again." he said to Nyph once Lergo had gone.

He had raised quite an army - not large enough for any full-scale war, but more than enough to eradicate the ashlanders. They had gained more people by hiring sellswords, and had kept them here with fulfilled promises of plunder - they had raided many a daedric shrine, dwemer ruin, and even some of the old dunmer strongholds. One such stronghold, Rotheran, served as their home for now.

"Start with the Erabenimsun. They have to be dealt with first, before they hear that we are acting again. If we start with another tribe, they will hear of the attack from word of mouth, and prepare. I would like to see them unprepared." Nyph said with a smile as he stroked the edge of his dagger.

Valnor shrugged. "Hmmm...your idea may work, though the Erabenimsun camp is a little far away from Rotheran."

"It will be a long way to get to any of the camps." Nyph replied. "But this way, we get rid of the most difficult tribe while our numbers are at their highest."

"I'll think on it." he said, walking back inside the fortress to eat some dinner.

Nyph still stood outside, watching as a hundred straw dummies burned in the distance.

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Enjoy.

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Dantrag   Ahnaressu's Travels Ch.9   Jul 15 2005, 01:52 PM
Wolfie   Cool :D Read mine too please, i posted an update   Jul 15 2005, 02:02 PM
minque   Yay Dantrag! Very nice, and I´m glad you keep ...   Jul 15 2005, 02:31 PM
Dantrag   I see how it is....you wait until I'm gone t...   Jul 15 2005, 06:50 PM
Dantrag   Valnor had indeed taken Nyph's adivce. The ver...   Jul 25 2005, 07:15 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice written Dantrag.. ;) A little short, in my op...   Jul 25 2005, 10:10 PM
Wolfie   cool :D you better give us a good battle though [i...   Jul 25 2005, 11:30 PM
Dantrag   Maybe there won't be a battle at all ;)   Jul 25 2005, 11:41 PM
Dantrag   okay, so I was wrong.... :D ------ Valnor's...   Jul 26 2005, 05:40 PM
MerGirl   Ooh, ooh! Good update! :goodjob: A bit sh...   Jul 27 2005, 08:08 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree... ;)   Jul 27 2005, 09:57 PM
Wolfie   Cool, me wants more   Jul 27 2005, 10:17 PM
jonajosa   Nice.... Very nice. Almost speechless. :goodjob:   Jul 28 2005, 07:39 AM
Dantrag   Nyph sat smoking his skooma pipe in Valnor's t...   Jul 30 2005, 03:19 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Interesting, I like how your shaping the story now...   Jul 30 2005, 01:17 PM
Dantrag   Please ignore typos made from typing at night. B...   Jul 30 2005, 10:34 PM
Kiln   Just caught this update, it's easy to visualiz...   Jul 31 2005, 04:36 AM
Wolfie   Cool, but how do they intend to get around the Zai...   Jul 31 2005, 09:50 PM
Dantrag   They weren't choosing ahemussa for how lcose...   Jul 31 2005, 10:47 PM
Mazuk   Wow nice story and some good updates. Great writi...   Aug 1 2005, 09:20 PM
Dantrag   Nyph kept to the shadows of the daedric ruin. Afte...   Aug 4 2005, 05:28 AM
treydog   As ever, vivid and exciting story-telling. Intere...   Aug 4 2005, 04:35 PM
Mazuk   Humm smelled an update, had to come and read.. Nic...   Aug 5 2005, 06:41 PM
minque   Yeah right my friend!!! Who´s been up...   Aug 6 2005, 10:22 PM
Dantrag   the reason - Valnor had to eradicate something.   Aug 8 2005, 11:20 PM
Wolfie   hehe if the Urshilaku die Jonacin is gonna have to...   Aug 8 2005, 11:34 PM
Dantrag   Valnor stepped in his small boat to leave the isla...   Aug 9 2005, 08:28 PM
Kiln   Nice update Dantrag, why must you kill the ashland...   Aug 10 2005, 12:57 PM
minque   Ahhh Dantrag......the killer of Ashlanders....but ...   Aug 10 2005, 01:21 PM


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