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Sirin
post Apr 26 2006, 11:32 PM
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Well, I found myself lacking in Mabriel's story.... After I bought Oblivion (which, oddly enough, doesn't want to work for me...) I lost track of her. So here's Sirin.

I sat motionless, staring at the blank, stone wall. This wall is all that separates me from the outside. I didn't blink. I didn't even bother to breathe. Life seemed to stop. Here I had sat, in the Imperial prison, for three weeks. Why? I was a criminal. Prison is where all criminals wound up. Foolish reason.... I had asked myself this question for all of the twenty one days I had sat in my cell. Sure, criminals get locked up, but why am I in here? I suddenly drew in a sharp breath. Memories flooded in my mind's eye. I had been betrayed...

Three weeks ago, I, Sirin Kalimian, was a free Redguard. A free, wealthy Redguard, at that. I had led a dishonest, but profitable lifestyle. I had been involved in smuggling, theft, and other various vices. It was risky, yes, but I was good at it. Was good at it. An Imperial patrol had discovered crates of skooma in some commoner's home. The commoner had made a plea to the Thieve's guild before the patrol raided his house. He had needed the money from skooma badly, and would be killed without it. He was reminded that he would be imprisoned, and ran little risk of being murdered. However, he had claimed that he owed the money to the Dark Brotherhood. That's a serious problem... The guild had sent me to retrieve the skooma while it was en route to Castle Anvil. I HAD retrieved the skooma, but had been ambushed afterwards.

The Imperial fools had used the "commoner" to catch me. The Thieve's guild had even helped them, intentionally sending me to my grave, so to speak. I had been beaten and dragged into the prison. So, here I sat. Before I was aware of what I was doing, I caught myself scrawling on the rough stone wall. "Vengeance" "That's right," I said, "I will have vengeance."


That's all I got for now. Evening. I love comments!!! biggrin.gif


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Sirin   Sirin   Apr 26 2006, 11:32 PM
Kayla   Excellent beginning! ^_^ I will read more...   Apr 27 2006, 12:13 AM
minque   Nice! good start, keep it up, mate just you ke...   Apr 27 2006, 10:19 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with the other posts here, very nice and dis...   Apr 28 2006, 01:02 PM
jack cloudy   Oh, Vengeance is a deadly motiv. Great start.   Apr 29 2006, 10:36 AM
Sirin   Ah.... Update... I love it.... :D Part 2 I star...   May 4 2006, 10:28 PM
jack cloudy   I enjoy it. :) Those guards had better be nice to...   May 5 2006, 08:01 PM
Elidor   Hehe I like it. I'll be following it so keep u...   May 6 2006, 07:51 AM
Sirin   Part 3 I awoke suddenly, but I wasn't sure if...   May 6 2006, 04:05 PM
Taillus   This has the feelings of a spectacular story in th...   May 6 2006, 04:37 PM
minque   Mmmm what Taillus just said! And I agree...con...   May 6 2006, 08:48 PM
Sirin   Thanks for the comments and such. Gves me inspirat...   May 7 2006, 04:09 PM
Mazelure   Nice... I realy like were this is going. Kudos Si...   May 7 2006, 05:03 PM
DarkHunter   Excellent! Sorry i didn't notice it earlir...   May 7 2006, 05:29 PM
jack cloudy   Now now, I am so getting interested. Keep it up. B...   May 8 2006, 08:14 PM
Kiln   Great job Sirin, hope you find the time to continu...   May 9 2006, 07:14 PM
Sirin   Thanks, guys, for all the comments and stuff. I re...   May 10 2006, 01:18 PM
Taillus   Way to go Sirin! It seems that the next genera...   May 10 2006, 05:03 PM
minque   Very good update Sirin, well written and so intrig...   May 10 2006, 06:46 PM
Sirin   Buahahahaha! Update! Well, I'm gonna t...   May 10 2006, 10:49 PM
DarkHunter   Lol, a encounted with a Were eh? This should be fu...   May 11 2006, 12:18 AM
Sirin   Yeah... I kinda got sick (no offense) of the slew ...   May 11 2006, 02:19 AM
DarkHunter   No Worries I LOVE those Lycans!!! :D   May 12 2006, 12:42 AM
Sirin   Er... I'll try to put something out quickly...   May 15 2006, 10:35 PM
Mazelure   Man I love how you discribed the transformation fr...   May 16 2006, 12:13 AM
Sirin   Glad you liked it, Mazelure. I sort of hated it, a...   May 17 2006, 02:44 AM
DarkHunter   Wow... I like the beserker thing! Blood-Vision...   May 17 2006, 10:57 AM
Sirin   Glad you caught the blood vision. I hoped that was...   May 17 2006, 12:57 PM
REAPER54321   Hey dude, great story, just read what you have put...   Jun 11 2006, 12:18 PM
Mazelure   Hey Reaper, Sirin has not been in for a long while...   Jun 19 2006, 05:41 PM
Sirin   Sorry guys. I actually am OK :D . Thanks. I just e...   Jun 19 2006, 10:18 PM
Mazelure   Na... take your time dude... as you can see I have...   Jun 19 2006, 11:36 PM
Sirin   Here we go then! An update for my meager, yet ...   Jun 20 2006, 12:53 AM
The Metal Mallet   So the plot thickens... Nice to see ya getting ba...   Jun 20 2006, 12:59 AM
jack cloudy   That's right. ,,Why me?" Well, because yo...   Jun 20 2006, 11:13 AM
Sirin   Update!! Update!!! Have fun, m...   Jun 26 2006, 01:30 AM
treydog   Nice updates- glad to see you back and still writi...   Jun 26 2006, 01:58 AM
DarkHunter   Nice to see that the Were Story hasn't ended. ...   Jun 26 2006, 02:34 AM
The Metal Mallet   Get hairy with it! ...Sorry that was terrible...   Jun 26 2006, 04:28 AM
Mazelure   Great story man... this is some great stuff right ...   Jun 26 2006, 06:40 PM
mplantinga   One man to rule them all, one disease to bind them...   Jun 26 2006, 07:51 PM
minque   Nice......or ehh creepy?! Anyway itīs nice th...   Jun 26 2006, 08:24 PM
jack cloudy   So you continued? Good to hear. Looks like Sirin i...   Jun 26 2006, 09:34 PM
Sirin   Cold...Everything's so cold. My eyes burst ope...   Jul 26 2006, 04:29 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wooo an update! Really nice one liners in thi...   Jul 26 2006, 04:35 PM
minque   Ahhh the continuation! Very interesting, I enj...   Aug 20 2006, 03:20 PM


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