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Dantrag
post Dec 29 2006, 05:04 PM
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This is in no way TES related, but I figured I'd share anyway. It's already finished, but I'm going to post it in small parts so that it's easier to read.

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“You’ll do it, or you will face a court marshal.” The gruff General McDowell commanded threateningly.

“It’s a civilian ship!” replied a young man of eighteen, sitting in a chair with numerous electrodes attached to his head.

“Damn it, Cedric, the Russians are using it to transport weapons! Fire now!” McDowell shouted angrily.

“Yes, Sir.” Cedric replied reluctantly as he flipped the single switch on the arm of his chair.

Instantly, the image of General McDowell’s angry face was replaced with a view of outer space from the vantage point of a starship’s bridge. He was seeing through the eyes of the ship’s captain, made possible through the use of a chip surgically implanted in the Captain’s brain. Cedric was now accustomed to the feeling of having a passive role in someone else’s body, but at first it had been one of the strangest feelings he had ever experienced.

“Fire.” He commanded, repeating the general’s order through the captain’s earpiece.

“Yes, Sir.” The Captain replied.

Cedric had no sooner seen the explosion than an entire fleet of Russian ships pounced on them, seemingly out of nowhere. The United States had attacked a civilian starship. More than enough cause for war.

“Retreat!” Cedric shouted at the captain.

The captain hesitated, panic obviously setting in.

“Retreat!” he repeated again, this time more forcefully. Cedric’s vision was reduced to static before he flipped the switch to return to his own body.

“Wake up, Cedric,” a thick German accent woke him.


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Dantrag   Scapegoat   Dec 29 2006, 05:04 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, this introduction is quite appealing. Seems ...   Dec 29 2006, 06:02 PM
minque   Waaay to go Danny! I´m glad to see you writing...   Dec 29 2006, 08:06 PM
jack cloudy   I'm particularly intrigued by how the ships ar...   Dec 29 2006, 08:22 PM
Dantrag   here you go, maybe it will answer some questions. ...   Dec 30 2006, 06:30 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm, all this information about Cedric slowly bein...   Dec 30 2006, 06:41 AM
jack cloudy   Hmm, that came as a surprise. Sounds like a pretty...   Dec 30 2006, 12:45 PM
Dantrag   “I don’t want any trouble.” Cedric stammered, unsu...   Dec 31 2006, 12:57 AM
treydog   This is some excellent sci-fi work. Intrigue abou...   Dec 31 2006, 05:25 PM
minque   Ahhh.....this is really getting exciting....and as...   Dec 31 2006, 10:37 PM
The Metal Mallet   The plot thickens or so they say. Things are look...   Dec 31 2006, 11:29 PM
jack cloudy   Dang, I don't trust the new guy. Frankly, is t...   Jan 1 2007, 12:17 AM
Dantrag   Wow. I forgot I waws sharing this one. Here's ...   Apr 15 2007, 04:04 AM
The Metal Mallet   About time Dantrag! Hehe, anyways. Nice to s...   Apr 15 2007, 04:22 AM
Dantrag   “Sit down, Mr. Black.” “But-“ “If you’re worr...   Apr 22 2007, 06:01 AM
minque   Uff! Now then? Jeez.....what will become of Ce...   Apr 22 2007, 04:20 PM
The Metal Mallet   Heh, looks like my suspicions were correct. Scape...   Apr 29 2007, 11:33 PM
Dire Cheesecake   Well, sucks to be Cedric huh? Fell for the same t...   May 1 2007, 10:02 AM


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