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	  Winter Wolf   Darkness Calls   Mar 28 2010, 12:55 AM    treydog   Loved it.  The discussion of "therapy" h...   Mar 28 2010, 01:48 AM    SubRosa   Ah, our favorite Bosmer assassin takes us to my fa...   Mar 28 2010, 05:36 AM    Fiach   “Oh bull dust.....” he muttered.
that's reall...   Mar 28 2010, 12:41 PM    mALX   You did it!!!!!!  Oh Thank...   Mar 28 2010, 02:46 PM    Destri Melarg   Hooray! Aradroth makes his meandering way to C...   Mar 28 2010, 07:04 PM    haute ecole rider   Ditto to all of the above!   Mar 28 2010, 07:24 PM    Jacki Dice   I also love the little poke at the psychic guards ...   Mar 28 2010, 08:09 PM    Olen   Nice piece, look forward to seeing more.
Just a ...   Mar 29 2010, 01:40 PM    Remko   I really liked that!   Mar 30 2010, 01:36 PM    D.Foxy   Just a nit...
I have had the good fortune to stud...   Mar 31 2010, 11:42 AM    Winter Wolf   - Treydog.
Thanks for the kind support oh son of T...   Apr 1 2010, 06:37 PM    haute ecole rider   This is a really good chapter. Even better than th...   Apr 1 2010, 08:01 PM    mALX   Oh Wolf, there are so many places I want to quote...   Apr 1 2010, 08:02 PM    SubRosa   Once more your use of metaphor is particularly out...   Apr 2 2010, 06:33 PM    Destri Melarg   The opening paragraph takes the breath away; it is...   Apr 2 2010, 09:38 PM    Winter Wolf   haute ecole rider -
Thanks for the support, it mea...   Apr 5 2010, 02:05 AM    Olen   Good piece, I like this.  The characterisation of ...   Apr 5 2010, 12:02 PM    mALX   Oh Wolf, I love this chapter!  Your detail on ...   Apr 5 2010, 01:03 PM    minque   Ahhh another piece of great writing! oh my hav...   Apr 5 2010, 03:40 PM    SubRosa   More strong metaphors, as we have come to expect f...   Apr 5 2010, 05:16 PM    haute ecole rider   I think you have improved greatly since the first ...   Apr 5 2010, 08:21 PM    Destri Melarg   The others have already commented on how well you ...   Apr 6 2010, 08:39 AM    treydog   You really do a wonderful job of moving the story ...   Apr 10 2010, 08:16 PM    Acadian   Wolf, you have done a wonderful job of bringing Ar...   Apr 11 2010, 04:18 PM    Winter Wolf   Olen -
Thanks for stopping in. The hard part about...   Apr 24 2010, 09:44 AM    mALX   This is the absolute best depiction I have ever re...   Apr 24 2010, 03:35 PM    SubRosa   I find a good way to tell if you need a comma or n...   Apr 24 2010, 09:16 PM    haute ecole rider   This is great! I loved that you wrote this fro...   Apr 24 2010, 11:29 PM    Acadian   1.  Thank you for your kind words regarding Buffy....   Apr 27 2010, 04:05 PM    Zalphon   Nice description :)   May 1 2010, 06:49 PM    Destri Melarg   I am stunned at how well put together this chapter...   May 8 2010, 12:21 AM    Remko   I envy your usage of clear, powerful metaphors. An...   Jun 17 2010, 10:34 AM    Winter Wolf   mALX -
I am very glad that you enjoyed my take on ...   Jun 27 2010, 12:36 AM    haute ecole rider   Changing the POV would ordinarily irritate me, but...   Jun 27 2010, 01:04 AM    SubRosa   Very exciting chase! I loved Dar Jee's cra...   Jun 27 2010, 01:38 AM    Acadian   Loads of action here and well-painted.  Aradroth i...   Jun 27 2010, 01:49 AM    Olen   An update, bravo!  I like this piece it has a ...   Jun 27 2010, 09:48 PM    Destri Melarg   The details made this chapter for me.  The thump t...   Jun 30 2010, 01:22 AM    Winter Wolf   Haute ecole rider-
Thanks for the support of the P...   Jul 4 2010, 12:59 AM    haute ecole rider   Funny. You have almost the same perception of Cael...   Jul 4 2010, 02:02 AM    SubRosa   Poor Dar Jee! They have a secret torture room ...   Jul 4 2010, 03:22 AM    Acadian   Very neat!  Captivatingly immersive, in fact.
...   Jul 4 2010, 03:30 AM    Remko   Aaargh, you make me want to play Oblivion and star...   Jul 5 2010, 12:07 PM    Olen   Nicely written part.  It worked well keeping the r...   Jul 5 2010, 02:44 PM    Destri Melarg   Positively chilling!  I don’t know what’s wors...   Jul 14 2010, 12:29 AM    Winter Wolf   Haute Ecole Rider-
Thanks for your comment. Caelia...   Jul 18 2010, 01:28 AM    haute ecole rider   ooh, a manhunt!
This Pashan sounds like a for...   Jul 18 2010, 02:16 AM    SubRosa   I agree with haute, this Pashan seems like an inte...   Jul 18 2010, 03:06 AM    Acadian   Wolf, I really liked everything about this!  Y...   Jul 18 2010, 04:15 AM    Olen   Nice part, there were some great little details th...   Jul 18 2010, 05:02 PM    Destri Melarg   Everything Acadian said goes for me too! In Pa...   Jul 23 2010, 11:37 PM    mALX   
I thought this paragraph described an assassin...   Aug 7 2010, 10:58 PM    Winter Wolf   haute ecole rider -Thanks! My goal when I star...   Aug 15 2010, 08:45 AM    Olen   Good to see a continuation to this, certainly I th...   Aug 15 2010, 10:58 AM    haute ecole rider   I liked the slower pacing here - a nice interlude ...   Aug 15 2010, 02:04 PM    Acadian   Oooh, I love this, Wolf!    
In the first par...   Aug 15 2010, 05:41 PM    SubRosa   Vance is another interesting character. I loved hi...   Aug 15 2010, 06:47 PM    mALX   Woo Hoo !!!!  A Buffy Tribute...   Aug 17 2010, 12:40 AM    Destri Melarg   I am curious to se what role Vance plays amongst t...   Aug 17 2010, 07:55 AM    treydog   Bad doggie for somehow forgetting to comment! ...   Aug 19 2010, 09:25 PM![]()     mALX   
After killing the badly misguided bandit, you h...   Aug 20 2010, 05:20 PM    Winter Wolf   Olen-Thanks for the kind words. The head-hunters s...   Dec 21 2010, 02:48 AM    Acadian   This is full of mysteries!  The hunt for Aradr...   Dec 21 2010, 03:19 AM    SubRosa   Yay, Darkness called once more. Thank goodness I p...   Dec 21 2010, 03:26 AM    mALX   I have so missed your ability to weave words into ...   Dec 21 2010, 05:46 AM    Olen   Oooh I missed this update.  Great stuff again, the...   Dec 29 2010, 04:45 PM    Winter Wolf   Acadian-Thanks for your kind words on the feeling ...   Jan 6 2011, 11:39 PM    SubRosa   A pulse-pounding fight in the bandit camp! One...   Jan 7 2011, 03:05 AM    Acadian   Such a warm welcome back to you!  I am so deli...   Jan 7 2011, 03:32 AM    Olen   A pulse rising part indeed, good stuff.  It worked...   Jan 7 2011, 02:56 PM    mALX   GAAAH!   Pashan is a paradox that can ponder t...   Jan 7 2011, 08:18 PM
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