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mplantinga
post Mar 9 2006, 08:04 PM
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I like where this is going. You've done your best to make us feel like Elessar is thinking carefully about what he is getting himself into, but I think he may be underestimating this woman. If he decides to go with her, he had better be on his guard.
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jack cloudy
post Mar 9 2006, 09:59 PM
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I warned you before. Stay on your guard and keep your blade within reach at all times. (But out of her reach. Getting killed with your own weapon is kind of emberassing)

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post Mar 23 2006, 08:22 PM
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So can we expect another update soon...I want more of one of my favourite stories...soplease update soon...wub.gif


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Kiln
post Mar 26 2006, 07:12 PM
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An interesting twist is revealed in the last update, though I wonder what the girl's motive is...I'm a bit suspicious. Maybe its nothing, either way update soon.


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post Mar 29 2006, 08:34 PM
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QUOTE(Kiln @ Mar 26 2006, 07:12 PM)
An interesting twist is revealed in the last update, though I wonder what the girl's motive is...I'm a bit suspicious.  Maybe its nothing, either way update soon.
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What Mr Oven said.......*waiting eagerly* viking.gif


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