 Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1 |
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| jchamber |
 Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM
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ah thank you lots
____ V V This post has been edited by jchamber: Feb 13 2006, 09:37 PM -------------------- This is AP Erebus's baby, but I intend to help
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| Tellie |
Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM
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Mouth  Joined: 10-November 05 From: Tel Delvanni |
DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the more popular and devestating weapons in the game.
It have an astonishing damage rate, but like alll Daedric, it weighs a bit much. -------------------- So I have resorted to advertising. My Fanfiction.net profile, there are a few other stories there as well.
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| Bolzmania |
Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM
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 Knower  Joined: 17-February 08 |
That was great! I'll be reading more from you.
//Daedroth -------------------- "When a man lies, he murders some part of the world"
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| SubRosa |
Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM
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 Ancient  Joined: 14-March 10 From: Between The Worlds |
I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a very likeable character, whom I can easily emphasize with. That is always a good sign, because only good writing can make one feel something (well, other than boredom!).
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| minque |
Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM
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 Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
@SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your time to read this my first try to write something! It's an honor for me to get positive feedback from an expert...
On a side note...I'm re-writing the first 3 chapters, in my opinion I've improved quite a lot since I wrote the first chapter..(oh my, am I cocky...  )-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| SubRosa |
Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM
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Ancient Joined: 14-March 10 From: Between The Worlds |
In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if you back it up (I left out the words the forum would play with
 )I should probably stop reading for the meanwhile then, until you start posting the new versions. *rubs hands together with glee at the idea* There was one thing I meant to ask. You described Serene as having long auburn hair. But in one of the pics of her she had black hair? -------------------- |
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| minque |
Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact color, so it had to be black. Besides my charachter Serene in-game isn't quite the same person as the one in the story..
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| mALX |
Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM
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 Ancient  Joined: 14-March 10 From: Cyrodiil, the Wastelands, and BFE TN |
I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and I see why you liked the one of my kitty, our characters seem to have similarities in their background! Awesome story and writing, I love this!
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| minque |
Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate it!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Remko |
Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM
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 Finder Joined: 17-March 10 From: Ald'ruhn, Vvardenfell |
Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! Loved how you eloborated on her prison stay.
On to chapter 2 and the rest... -------------------- Strength and honour, stranger!
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| mALX |
Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM
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Ancient Joined: 14-March 10 From: Cyrodiil, the Wastelands, and BFE TN |
I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and her father turned from her. Riveting writing!
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| minque |
Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story, it means a lot to me that you guys care to read about Serene!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Grits |
May 12 2011, 03:44 PM
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 Councilor  Joined: 6-November 10 From: The Gold Coast |
Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoying this story very much. On to Chapter Two!!
-------------------- Jerric's Story * Darnandex * Screenshot: Cyrodiil Meadow |
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