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> Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Four: An Assassin Amongst Us.....
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post Sep 18 2006, 03:28 AM
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post Sep 18 2006, 03:37 AM
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Yesssss.......truly great! Ah how I like the conversations you describe! In a very clever and interesting way you describe his ways with the Redorans....A great night-read!


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post Sep 18 2006, 06:13 AM
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So chapter four begins... and begins well! Very effective conversations about the cunning taking place and a very amusing duel. Hlaalu's aren't made for those types of things tongue.gif

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post Sep 24 2006, 07:35 AM
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post Sep 24 2006, 11:08 AM
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As wonderful as ever! You really make the most of it Blackie, I so much enjoy to read your story, well written, a good pace and the personal additions to the storyline makes it a great read

Thank you for sharing it with us!


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post Sep 25 2006, 12:55 AM
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Wow, there's always just so much good stuff to comment on in each of your updates that I can't figure out where to start!

We get a little action, a little intrigue, and wonderful, wonderful emotion. You can really feel the stress that Sethyas is going through.

Maybe all he needs is a nice, candle-lit bubble bath. tongue.gif


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post Sep 26 2006, 02:34 AM
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Yeah, and his girlfriend back laugh.gif laugh.gif wink.gif

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post Sep 30 2006, 07:30 PM
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post Sep 30 2006, 08:08 PM
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Rather cool use of a cameo Black Hand, both authors wrote wonderfully in this update.

But I have to say this might be the coolest line I've ever read:

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What I NEED is a hot bath and a cure common disease potion, but the names will suffice.


That put a smile to my face and a chuckle as soon as I read it. Good stuff. Very inspirational.

I guess I'll forgive you for posting right after I update, ruining the chance at having my fic right at the top tongue.gif

PS- when you mean "all that Trey said was written by Trey" does that include the note? Just a curious question.

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post Oct 2 2006, 07:58 PM
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Oh, what we don't do to save the planet. smile.gif I pity Sethyas for not having a James Bond view of things. He is making his life a living hell like this. (Though I think Bond's behaviour is disgusting so maybe it's just better like this.)


Woot! Trey cameo! Now the proof has been given. Nirn does excist in multiple dimensions. biggrin.gif

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post Oct 4 2006, 03:28 AM
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Oh my gosh......what a wonderful surprise to see Trey in your story as well! That and the most interesting encounter with Fathasa Llethri. The promiscuous life of old Bolly surely inspires to some neat twists huh?

Wonderful work Blackie!


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post Oct 7 2006, 09:31 AM
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post Oct 7 2006, 02:42 PM
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Oooo the political intrigue is getting thick. Also Ranye seems to be a rather interesting character as well, she seems to be a saucy one tongue.gif

Keep up the excellent work, Black. You're consistant as always.


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post Oct 10 2006, 10:19 PM
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I wish I had more time to comment on the excellent writing on display- RL is a pain....

But to speak particularly to Black Hand's work- I was flattered to be asked for the cameo & glad to add my few words to this epic story. The cooperative spirit amongst our writers is one of the best parts of our community- if work and life ever let me up long enough to participate more fully, I will do so.

But, for now, know that I am following the stories and am impressed with the talent and imagination shown in them.


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post Oct 11 2006, 02:56 AM
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post Oct 11 2006, 03:12 AM
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It's always great to read another Sethyas update. I liked the way Sethyas handled Venim and I especially enjoyed reading the conversation with Sarethi afterwards. That was written wonderfully.

But soon we're going to get back to action, which is always fun to read as well. Firstly, we'll see if anything embarassing or/and awkward will happen in Ebonhart. Hopefully Ilmeni hasn't decided to visit her father on the particular day Sethyas shows up.


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post Oct 11 2006, 04:55 AM
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post Oct 11 2006, 07:32 PM
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Oooo, did I notice a mention of Simion? Cool!

Another excellent update Black! The interaction with Sethyas and Rayne was both intriguing and amusing.

The conversation with Sethyas and Dren was also really good; I wasn't expecting that. I guess I was thinking he was going to be more fire and brimstone due to the estrangement between his daughter and Sethyas, but the way you did it worked effectively.

I await the next update.

Reading your updates always makes me want to go off and write an update of my own, but then I remember the ton of chemistry homework I have to do. Then I sigh and wish it was Saturday so I could write.

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post Oct 15 2006, 11:30 AM
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