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SubRosa Teresa of the Faint Smile Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Verlox Oooo, Verlox likes. This is most well written and ... Mar 19 2010, 11:10 PM Winter Wolf A prologue, a prologue, yipppeee!!!... Mar 20 2010, 01:03 AM treydog As you know, I have always loved your story and yo... Mar 20 2010, 02:28 AM Destri Melarg What a setup! Through vividly descriptive lan... Mar 20 2010, 09:32 AM haute ecole rider I like, I like! The chapter is tight, short, ... Mar 20 2010, 10:22 PM SubRosa Verlox: Thank you V. I am glad the chapter worked.... Mar 21 2010, 07:20 PM treydog You continue to keep me anxious for what happens n... Mar 21 2010, 08:05 PM canis216 This is quite nice. If I could be like Trey and r... Mar 21 2010, 09:13 PM haute ecole rider Again, well-written and descriptive! I did no... Mar 21 2010, 10:02 PM Olen I like how this is written, possibly the descripti... Mar 21 2010, 10:39 PM Destri Melarg Since it seems that all of the slight nits in this... Mar 22 2010, 12:50 AM minque Ohhhh, now this is just great, so well described, ... Mar 22 2010, 01:11 AM Jacki Dice I know I'm a little late, but I love the new b... Mar 22 2010, 05:37 AM Winter Wolf The rework of this chapter is perfect now. It ties... Mar 22 2010, 05:46 AM Remko With everyone here and re-writing/heavily editing ... Mar 23 2010, 12:37 PM SubRosa treydog: I hope it will be interesting for those p... Mar 23 2010, 04:53 PM D.Foxy Aaaaaan the vulpine voom voom has arrived!... Mar 23 2010, 05:13 PM Winter Wolf Most of Teresa's wonder and vulnerability real... Mar 24 2010, 06:54 AM Destri Melarg I Do hope, however, that you will keep the sense ... Mar 24 2010, 08:15 AM SubRosa D.Foxy: Thank you DF. I think what you are seeing... Mar 25 2010, 06:18 PM Olen Nice piece. I like how you're developing the ... Mar 25 2010, 10:30 PM Destri Melarg This entire chapter was extremely well written, bu... Mar 26 2010, 01:12 AM treydog You have absolutely excelled with the re-writes. ... Mar 26 2010, 04:56 PM SubRosa Olen: Thank you Olen. You are correct about the Em... Mar 27 2010, 06:08 PM D.Foxy Your combat this time around is much better - it s... Mar 27 2010, 06:13 PM haute ecole rider It's been a while since I read the original ch... Mar 27 2010, 06:30 PM Fiach Excellent work! Just read through it and I re... Mar 28 2010, 12:36 PM Winter Wolf The gutter rat of the Waterfront is proving that t... Mar 29 2010, 06:48 AM Destri Melarg I go to you and Acadian for inspiration in how to ... Mar 29 2010, 09:57 AM SubRosa D.Foxy & haute ecole rider: Thank you both. I... Mar 29 2010, 04:25 PM Winter Wolf That chapter was awesome. The pick of the bunch no... Mar 29 2010, 05:10 PM D.Foxy Ahhhh....feels like the first time I read your wri... Mar 29 2010, 04:35 PM haute ecole rider Oh, yes, that bath at the end of the sewers. That ... Mar 29 2010, 05:14 PM Olen The flow of this pieve is very good. It all reads... Mar 29 2010, 06:07 PM Destri Melarg We finally get a faint smile from Teresa! Thi... Mar 31 2010, 01:21 AM SubRosa Who said you can't go home again? That would ... Mar 31 2010, 05:48 PM haute ecole rider This was really good. I noticed the dream is new... Mar 31 2010, 10:00 PM Broken-Scale Ah, reading this brings me back to the first time ... Apr 1 2010, 05:51 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: You are right on all counts. Ne... Apr 2 2010, 04:58 PM Destri Melarg To quote mALX: “Grrr! Cliffhanger! ... Apr 2 2010, 09:35 PM canis216 Mmm... deer. Very tasty. Not as good as elk though... Apr 3 2010, 01:54 AM SubRosa Destri Melarg: Thank you D. Yes, the dreams will b... Apr 4 2010, 06:29 PM minque Ohhhh i...am also liking Teresa more and more, ... Apr 4 2010, 07:40 PM Olen Yes I must agree that you've handled the devel... Apr 4 2010, 08:33 PM Zalphon I like the description. Very nice work. Apr 5 2010, 12:03 AM Winter Wolf The thought of the guards caring about Teresa is h... Apr 5 2010, 06:33 AM Destri Melarg I think that might be the first time in your writi... Apr 6 2010, 08:44 AM SubRosa minque: Oblivion can be quite the resource hog. I ... Apr 6 2010, 09:05 PM Destri Melarg Wow! So much to praise about this chapter... Apr 8 2010, 08:59 AM D.Foxy Yay for Teresa Yay for Jools None can beat her Tha... Apr 7 2010, 01:01 AM haute ecole rider :salute: Apr 7 2010, 01:43 AM SubRosa D.Foxy: Well, if you meant fight a fish, that is c... Apr 8 2010, 04:55 PM D.Foxy D.Foxy: Well, if you meant fight a fish, that is c... Apr 9 2010, 12:22 PM Destri Melarg Teresa dressed in a cloak of feathers, standing on... Apr 10 2010, 12:35 AM SubRosa D.Foxy: Look and see, as Teresa joins the cast of ... Apr 10 2010, 07:05 PM Acadian I have been reading since you started, and your ne... Apr 11 2010, 04:10 PM minque Ohhhh wonderful! Yes tonight is my reading-nig... Apr 11 2010, 11:00 PM Remko You broughgt in Hautee's Julian? Nice! Now... Apr 12 2010, 11:46 AM SubRosa Acadian: Hey you old warhorse. Good to see you aga... Apr 13 2010, 12:39 AM Destri Melarg Chapter 5b: Teresa’s resourceful method of fishing... Apr 13 2010, 09:38 AM D.Foxy quiet bedroom district HUH? Wha.. D'you me... Apr 13 2010, 03:18 AM Olen Good as ever, you really have her character nailed... Apr 13 2010, 02:33 PM SubRosa D.Foxy: It is a variation of "bedroom communi... Apr 15 2010, 09:06 PM haute ecole rider I enjoyed the homecoming, because it highlights th... Apr 15 2010, 09:19 PM Remko I really liked this last part where she realises s... Apr 16 2010, 11:51 AM Destri Melarg An intriguing mystery in the first two paragraphs... Apr 17 2010, 10:07 AM minque Thank all mighty divines it's saturday and I h... Apr 17 2010, 01:07 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r., those were th... Apr 17 2010, 11:05 PM Olen You showed her return well, initially warm but rap... Apr 18 2010, 05:01 PM minque Mmm what a chapter! So wonderfully described, ... Apr 18 2010, 11:12 PM Destri Melarg I guess Thomas Wolfe was right when he wrote You C... Apr 19 2010, 01:22 AM Remko I truly adore the emotion in the last chapter. Fro... Apr 19 2010, 04:34 PM SubRosa Olen: Thank you Olen. Teresa is not quite totally ... Apr 19 2010, 05:51 PM minque Nice! Love your descriptions of the landscape ... Apr 19 2010, 08:24 PM Olen Great description of city isle, you amke the place... Apr 20 2010, 02:40 PM haute ecole rider This is new material, all right, and it shows. Wel... Apr 20 2010, 02:54 PM treydog I have at last caught up again- and it has been a ... Apr 21 2010, 09:27 PM Acadian Also caught up now. Very, very nicely done! ... Apr 22 2010, 03:43 AM SubRosa minque: Thank you minque. :) If your son has Obliv... Apr 22 2010, 04:29 PM Acadian This is wonderful. The mysterious raven dreams/fl... Apr 22 2010, 04:47 PM minque ohhh, very suggestive! I so like the dreams, m... Apr 23 2010, 12:15 AM haute ecole rider This is very well done. And you've given me an... Apr 23 2010, 03:44 AM Olen I like the ruin, you give them a much more intense... Apr 23 2010, 12:44 PM Winter Wolf Just when I thought that the Sage could not take h... Apr 24 2010, 01:39 AM SubRosa Acadian: Thank you A. Now we venture deeper into t... Apr 25 2010, 09:35 PM Olen Excellent update, you caught the tension very well... Apr 25 2010, 11:17 PM minque Down down in the damp mouldy crypts! I can see... Apr 25 2010, 11:37 PM Winter Wolf This was a very hard chapter to write because of a... Apr 25 2010, 11:46 PM haute ecole rider Well done. I liked your descriptions of the corpse... Apr 26 2010, 02:10 AM Acadian Oh, very well done! All of what minque said i... Apr 27 2010, 04:27 PM SubRosa Olen: Thank you O. I was making a concerted effort... Apr 28 2010, 05:26 PM haute ecole rider Darnnit! This was very well written, fast pac... Apr 28 2010, 06:43 PM Olen I agree, the length made that build into something... Apr 28 2010, 07:18 PM SubRosa Thank you haute and Olen. I will have proper repli... Apr 30 2010, 10:30 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. In my outline ... May 1 2010, 04:35 PM haute ecole rider An outstanding conclusion to a tense episode in wh... May 1 2010, 07:42 PM Olen A good bit of looting in conclusion to a dungeon r... May 1 2010, 10:06 PM Remko Damn... I soooo badly wanted Jalbert's bloody ... May 4 2010, 12:40 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. :) Vilverin ... May 4 2010, 04:28 PM 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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