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> Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1
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post Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM
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post Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM
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DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the more popular and devestating weapons in the game.

It have an astonishing damage rate, but like alll Daedric, it weighs a bit much.


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post Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM
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That was great! I'll be reading more from you.


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post Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM
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I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a very likeable character, whom I can easily emphasize with. That is always a good sign, because only good writing can make one feel something (well, other than boredom!).


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post Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM
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@SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your time to read this my first try to write something! It's an honor for me to get positive feedback from an expert...

On a side note...I'm re-writing the first 3 chapters, in my opinion I've improved quite a lot since I wrote the first chapter..(oh my, am I cocky... ohmy.gif )


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post Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM
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In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if you back it up (I left out the words the forum would play with wink.gif)

I should probably stop reading for the meanwhile then, until you start posting the new versions. *rubs hands together with glee at the idea*

There was one thing I meant to ask. You described Serene as having long auburn hair. But in one of the pics of her she had black hair?


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post Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM
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Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact color, so it had to be black. Besides my charachter Serene in-game isn't quite the same person as the one in the story.. wink.gif


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post Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM
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I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and I see why you liked the one of my kitty, our characters seem to have similarities in their background! Awesome story and writing, I love this!


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post Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM
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mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate it!


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post Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM
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Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! Loved how you eloborated on her prison stay.
On to chapter 2 and the rest...


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post Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM
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I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and her father turned from her. Riveting writing!


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post Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM
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mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story, it means a lot to me that you guys care to read about Serene!


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post May 12 2011, 03:44 PM
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Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoying this story very much. On to Chapter Two!!


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