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Burnt Sierra
post Jun 11 2011, 07:59 PM
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Resurrection Dream - Part 1

Paris Texas taken to technological extremes
Communication without pain.
As we type
We watch you
Your movements
Your smiles
We hear your voice from our speakers
We can say
Whatever we want
No fear of reprisals
You don’t know who we are.
Are we in search of a life
Or just passing the time
One thing I know
You will live forever
Deep in my hard drive
This is my Resurrection Dream.

I like to turn off the volume
Listen to music instead
Playing along to your disembodied dance
Aimee Mann telling me I have no choice
Softly in the background
At times like this
It’s easy to believe
Your words appear on my screen
Giving me connection
You answer what I type
Who needs reality?
I can smoke without complaint
Let’s face it
You can’t smell it
My window’s wide open
The trees blocking the graveyard
Letting the spirits listen to Aimee
Whilst I feel full again.
It’s not a life
Maybe just existing
But it help’s to pass the time
Whilst we wait to be reborn
My Resurrection Dream.
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post Nov 16 2019, 02:23 AM
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Welcome back, Burnt Sierra!

I see your skill with verse has not abandoned you. I found Observation especially evocative and poignant.


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Burnt Sierra   Burnt Sierra's Poetry   Jun 11 2011, 07:59 PM
Burnt Sierra   Resurrection Dream - Part 2 The midst of a sleepl...   Mar 27 2013, 11:14 PM
Burnt Sierra   Gutter Glitter You say it’s all going to be...   Mar 27 2013, 11:23 PM
Burnt Sierra   At This Moment At this moment staring across fiel...   Mar 27 2013, 11:26 PM
Burnt Sierra   This Day It was supposed to be sad, this day, rem...   Mar 27 2013, 11:29 PM
Burnt Sierra   Sea Breeze A new incense today Sea breeze Light a...   Mar 27 2013, 11:33 PM
Burnt Sierra   The Mirror A distortion of reality Designed to in...   Mar 27 2013, 11:39 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   [b][u]The Mirror A distortion of reality Designe...   Mar 28 2013, 01:09 AM
mALX   I love this line! I am loving these poems...   Mar 29 2013, 02:32 AM
Burnt Sierra   Observation When I first started to write One of ...   Nov 16 2019, 01:32 AM
mALX   Ooh, you are writing your poetry again! WOO ...   Nov 16 2019, 02:10 AM
Burnt Sierra   Edited, as these two poems belong together. [u]Op...   May 20 2020, 10:14 PM
treydog   Another wrenching, deeply-felt masterpiece. Most e...   May 20 2020, 10:21 PM
SubRosa   That was a haunting ode to time and loss.   May 21 2020, 01:37 AM
Burnt Sierra   After a year in which everything turned, I ended u...   Jan 3 2021, 04:47 AM
Acadian   Welcome back, Burnt Sierra. Some really nice work...   Jan 3 2021, 09:30 PM
Renee   I've never 'spoken' to you online Sier...   Jan 5 2021, 04:35 PM
Burnt Sierra   And to bring the poetry up to date as well (as up-...   Mar 16 2024, 10:15 PM
Burnt Sierra   And finally, a few other oddities that I don't...   Mar 16 2024, 10:40 PM
Acadian   Nice to see you back. Last I read some of your po...   Mar 17 2024, 08:27 PM


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