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Captain Hammer
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Author’s Note: What follows is the story based on my TES IV: Oblivion character. I decided to write this when, after reading Infernal City, I realized that my first fanfic had just been torpedoed. Additionally, I felt that yet another Morrowind fanfic would pale in the presence of some of the other, very well-written pieces on this site (Black Hand, Treydog, I’m looking at you). Any and all differences not found accessible in the vanilla game are based on too great a number of mods for me to effectively list here. Enjoy.

Prologue:
For Myself.


I was dreaming again. But this was different. A man stood alone in the dark, the sole source of light coming from the massive ruby on his chest. I had been through the legions, I knew both by sight, if not by heart. The Emperor and the Amulet. He turned, as if to face me, and words I barely heard and registered filled my head. Something about dreams and rule, reigning and sleeping and dying. The vision shifted, to what I knew to be a view of the planes of Oblivion. Daedra, angry and armed, marched towards a glowing portal, a massive machine moving behind them on insect like legs. As they approached the gate, I felt the malicious presence that guided them. Even as they began to enter the portal, the view collapsed into a storm and fog. It faded to white, and when the misty haze cleared I was looking down at the Imperial City as though I were some spirit, the massive tower of the Imperial Palace before me. I seemed to float—no, fly—in and circled around the different districts of the city. As I flew, the emperor’s voice came in again, this time clearer. He said the date, and then something I will never forget. He told me that the Third Era was ending, and that it would be the last day of his life. Almost immediately, I could hear the Imperial Fanfare swell up, the noise odd, but strangely comforting. As I flew around the city, I left on a tangent, arcing out to head in a straight line towards the window of a small cell on the island that held the Imperial Prison. My cell…

I sat up, breathing hard. For a while I had forgotten where I was, but looking around I recalled vividly the events that had brought me here, the odd images of the dream temporarily set aside. I was Awtwyr Draghoyn, Breton, Champion (ret.) of the Eighth Imperial Legion, Hammerfell and Morrowind Tours. My life story prior to this was as dull as one could imagine. I had been born in my people’s home of High Rock, to a farming family, first of four children. After me came a sister, then a brother, and then another sister. Gwen, the elder, had married off at eighteen, my younger brother Roland had chosen to continue with the family’s farm, and my youngest sister Bethany was probably just now being courted by the eligible young men from the local villages. My father had always remarked that being the eldest made me grow up the fastest, and like his elder brother, who was my favorite uncle, I decided to make something of myself in the Legions.

I spent two tours of duty in service, found out that I made a decent navigator when sailing, and managed to acquire the basic skills in both heavy and light armor, swordsmanship, blocking, blacksmithing, marksmanship, and athletic conditioning to make me generally fit for service. Those eight years had been spent hunting bandits, hunting deer for the officers’ table, and “expanding the protection of the Empire” whenever a minor noble started making enough trouble for his liege-lord to call us in. The first re-up for duty meant a nice pay increase and better choice of tasks. A second one was out of the question. I wasn’t what they called “partial to the necessities of knighthood,” which meant that even though I had fighting skills, I had little skills in the politics of the service, and they knew that too much of my leave time had been spent studying magic, a field that was always in my focus. Bretons and High Elves will always argue about who makes a better mage. But I was determined to prove, at least to myself, that a properly trained Breton would be able to not only make the best Altmer go the distance, but that in the end the Breton would win.

Once I got out, I visited home, and realizing that there was little for me by way of employment or marriage prospects (I was just shy of my twenty-fourth name-day, and all eligible women in that small town were either young or ugly), I headed off to that great bastion of all that I had fought for: the capital. When I got there, I rented a room at the King and Queen Inn, and spent a week touring the city, eyeing the baubles in the market, wagering away almost a fifth of my accumulated pay at the arena, and seeing if I could reignite some form of piety when visiting the temple district.

But all good things, it seemed, must come to an end. After a week, I had grown less satisfied with the city, and in a great way, with myself. I had been drinking progressively more and more each night, and on that fateful night, I heard somebody make a remark about my kind that I didn’t take too kindly. I wasn’t much of a brawler, but I went at him anyways, aiming my right hand straight across his jaw. He staggered back, was caught by one of his friends, and before I knew it I was facing a couple of pissed off Dunmer, with a big Nord standing next to me angry about something that one of the aforementioned Dark Elves had thrown. Based on the flecks of clay in his hair, I assumed that a mug aimed at me had gone stray from the alcohol-induced aim. I nodded to my sudden ally, and went low, he high. My target saw it coming, and rushed to meet me. But I was a trained Legion soldier, and had made friends easy enough in the unofficial boxing matches that the officers didn’t look for too carefully. As he dove at me, I smashed my knee into the ashborn’s face, hooked my right arm around him, and leveraged my body and left arm to flip him up, over, and straight into the stone floor.

I turned to try and help my ally, only to feel five strong arms pull me back and shove me to the ground. I recognized the technique, I could do it myself, and the steel behind the wrestling movement confirmed what I was dealing with. The Imperial City Guard. Despite the alcohol, I knew trouble when it hit me. I looked up to see about six men break up the remaining combatants and sit everybody down. Then a man in the silver and white finery of a captain came in, looking at us all with the strong jawline of a poster boy for the law. “I am Captain Hieronymous Lex,” he said with that voice of enforced authority. “I want to know what happened here.”

After several people came forward to identify that I had started the brawl, Lex turned to question me. I identified myself, and claimed that I was merely defending my honor. “In the Legion, somebody insulted your blood, the captain would let the men settle it themselves. I’m not a man for letting things slide.”

“Well, citizen, you’re not a soldier now, this isn’t the legion depot, and these others aren’t trained fighters. You can’t hold your drink, you should maybe look for another place to stay. Meanwhile, you’ve cost me and my men valuable time. I had information that the Grey Fox was in the city tonight, and now I’m spending my time dealing with you. Do You Have Any Idea WHAT YOU’VE COST ME?!?!?” Lex was getting himself red in the face.

I couldn’t but help the reply. “You know most people accept the fact that the Grey Fox is just a myth, right? That’s what common sense says, anyway.” That was a mistake on my part.

“I will not tolerate this type of insurrection! You show disgrace to your comrades and your colors! I’m placing you under arrest for disturbing the peace, drunk and disorderly conduct, and inciting violent mayhem. You want to come easy, or do we drag you out by your heels?" Lex looked ready, as though I had personally killed his mother. But then I realized that killing his mother might not have been as harmful to him as taking away his chance at fame.

“I’ll go quiet,” I said.

They half-escorted me, half-carried me through the city towards the prison. It wasn’t my fault, I had taken a few nasty blows, and that combined with the alcohol promised to make my steps falter. When they got me to the cells, they had trouble with the locks on a few, finally deciding to throw me into the one that seemed least used, and never once cleaned. They handed me a foul concoction, one that restored my health but left me drained of strength, shackled my arms, and left, talking about moving me out first thing in the morning to go before the Imperial Justice. Across from me was a Dark Elf, who looked to have made this his long term residence. I ignored him, climbed into my bunk, and went to sleep.

When my dream had woken me, I stood, feeling slightly better. The sun had risen and was already at midday, which meant that the guards had not taken me before the magistrate that morning. I stretched, and the Dark Elf gestured to me, asking me to move closer. I shuffled up to the bars, and he promptly launched into a stream of invectives at getting a better look at me. Something about being his sworn enemy and me staying while he would get out to enjoy the world again. I suppose now would be as good a time to describe myself as any. I was taller than many a Breton, and between that and the brownish-red hair that graced my head I knew myself to have some amount of Nord blood in me. My eyes were the bright grey-green of my father, my hair and expression that of his father, and my mother had often said that when I scowled, my entire jaw could have matched her father. Thus, I was pretty much guaranteed that my father was indeed my father, with the same holding true for my grandfathers, a true-born peasant of true-born peasants.

As the Dark Elf continued his rant, the doors at the end of the hall opened, and an Imperial male and Breton female in ornate, steel battle armor with an Akivir Katana came to my cell. Apparently, neither I, nor anybody else, was supposed to be in that cell, but there I was. I was ordered back underneath the window, and knowing a superior swordsman when I saw the Imperial's grip on his own blade, I backed off. He could have killed me if he wished it. Once I was safely back, he opened the cell door, and steeped forward to prevent me from moving. Behind him came the other armored figure, escorting an aged man in purple robes…Emperor Uriel Septim the Seventh, Ruler of all Tamriel.


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Author's Post Script: Any and all comments or recommendations are welcome. Criticisms, especially stuff missed by a spell-checker, are appreciated.

This post has been edited by Captain Hammer: Aug 10 2010, 07:17 PM


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Captain Hammer   For My Brother, For Glory, For Tamriel (Vol. 1)   Dec 29 2009, 06:32 AM
ureniashtram   `Tis a very good opening, Capt'n. Especial...   Dec 30 2009, 08:03 PM
Captain Hammer   [center][b]Chapter 1: For the Emperor. The two me...   Dec 31 2009, 08:22 AM
Captain Hammer   [b]Author's Note: I had a rather productive ni...   Dec 31 2009, 09:06 PM
ureniashtram   :D Very, very nice, man. I like it. Well, hope you...   Jan 4 2010, 07:37 PM
Captain Hammer   :D Very, very nice, man. I like it. Well, hope yo...   Jan 4 2010, 09:37 PM
Olen   Good stuff. I am reading now but your right, a lo...   Jan 5 2010, 05:18 PM
Protector152   97 views says people are reading it, most of us ju...   Jan 6 2010, 01:08 AM
minque   97 views says people are reading it, most of us j...   Jan 8 2010, 07:18 PM
ureniashtram   Protector152 says it all. Yes, I might be the only...   Jan 6 2010, 04:19 AM
Captain Hammer   Fine, fine, fine. Naggers. Sheesh, I try to wait t...   Jan 6 2010, 06:30 PM
Protector152   i have yet to find a good story that i stop readin...   Jan 7 2010, 02:18 PM
Captain Hammer   PLACEHOLDER!!! Sorry 'bout the de...   Jan 9 2010, 03:01 AM
Captain Hammer   And...I'm back. Sorry this took so long, but t...   Apr 21 2010, 06:47 AM
ureniashtram   THE CAPTAIN IS BAAACCKK!! It's been to...   Apr 21 2010, 09:04 AM
mALX   I loved your "How I got in jail in the first ...   Apr 21 2010, 01:19 PM
Olen   Good to see you back at this, the last piece was q...   Apr 21 2010, 02:49 PM
Captain Hammer   Good to see you back at this, the last piece was ...   Apr 21 2010, 05:23 PM
haute ecole rider   I really liked the explanation of how armor is dif...   Apr 21 2010, 05:37 PM
Captain Hammer   Author's Note: Credit to the guys at the Imper...   Apr 22 2010, 03:26 AM
mALX   I'm impressed by your attention to detail in t...   Apr 22 2010, 05:07 PM
Captain Hammer   @mALX: Thanks, it's something I try to work in...   Apr 23 2010, 09:20 PM
Captain Hammer   For a Cross-Country Journey: I didn’t know a Nigh...   Aug 7 2010, 04:15 AM
Ornamental Nonsense   I just started reading this, and let me say that t...   Aug 7 2010, 03:25 PM
Captain Hammer   @ Ornamental Nonsense: Thanks for joining, and you...   Aug 7 2010, 04:30 PM
mALX   I love what you are doing with this! Your att...   Aug 8 2010, 01:55 AM
Captain Hammer   @Destri: I know, I know, your comment is below, bu...   Aug 8 2010, 07:13 AM
Destri Melarg   I have only read the first chapter so far. Here a...   Aug 10 2010, 12:02 AM
Captain Hammer   Author's Note: This next sequence is extremely...   Aug 12 2010, 12:27 AM
Destri Melarg   Okay, I am all caught up. I took some notes on ea...   Aug 13 2010, 12:34 AM
Captain Hammer   @Destri: Don't worry. I'm typing on a lapt...   Aug 13 2010, 02:43 AM
treydog   Good introduction to the character of Awtwyr. The...   Aug 13 2010, 03:53 PM
mALX   Your fight scenes are great!   Aug 20 2010, 07:24 PM
Captain Hammer   @ mALX: Thanks for reading, and your compliments. ...   Oct 24 2010, 08:11 PM
treydog   Excellent fights. I also loved the internal dialo...   Oct 25 2010, 02:32 PM
Destri Melarg   Like trey, I loved the fights and Awtwyr’s infiltr...   Oct 25 2010, 09:45 PM
Captain Hammer   @ Trey, Destri: Thanks guys. Dealing with Menien w...   Oct 26 2010, 03:20 AM
mALX   Oh, you are one of those writers like Olen that ma...   Oct 26 2010, 06:37 AM
Ginner   I enjoyed reading this,its the main questline from...   Oct 27 2010, 12:39 AM
Captain Hammer   All: I've gone back and re-written some of the...   Oct 27 2010, 06:33 AM
Captain Hammer   [b]For Kvatch!! Part III The smell hit fi...   Jan 25 2011, 07:25 AM
mALX   WOO HOO !!! You did it again !...   Jan 25 2011, 11:35 PM
Acadian   Finally caught up with you! I loved, in the...   Feb 11 2011, 03:19 AM
Grits   Captain Hammer, I have read your story up to date ...   Feb 11 2011, 05:00 AM
TheOtherRick   I have added this one to my list of readings. Nice...   Feb 13 2011, 06:21 PM
Captain Hammer   @mALX: Thank you. Your responses have always been ...   Feb 26 2011, 06:29 AM
Cardboard Box   “[u]Fare travels, Awtwyr.” Should be [i]Fair. T...   Feb 26 2011, 10:32 AM
haute ecole rider   Good write here - I liked how the hero Awtwyr gave...   Feb 26 2011, 07:30 PM
Grits   Well, Jerric could easily have been the big Nord s...   Feb 26 2011, 10:23 PM
Acadian   A wonderful blend of quest with your character. O...   Feb 27 2011, 01:16 AM
mALX   Your last line is a gem! Awesome Write!...   Feb 28 2011, 04:48 PM
TheOtherRick   I will echo the sentiments of the other comments. ...   Mar 7 2011, 05:29 AM
Captain Hammer   @Cardboard Box: Thanks for noticing, the nit has b...   May 17 2011, 10:42 AM
haute ecole rider   Let's get the nit out of the way first: Seems...   May 17 2011, 06:38 PM
Acadian   I enjoyed the logic in deciding who rode the horse...   May 18 2011, 12:49 AM
Captain Hammer   @ Acadian: I figured I should have added an in-gam...   May 24 2011, 08:56 AM
haute ecole rider   Let's start by saying I really enjoyed this ch...   May 24 2011, 03:11 PM
Acadian   This is a really interesting journey. It's ni...   May 25 2011, 12:27 AM
Thomas Kaira   I am reading, and for death, for glory, for Chorro...   May 25 2011, 01:47 AM
Grits   My concern with the November happening is that peo...   May 28 2011, 04:33 PM
Thomas Kaira   My concern with the November happening is that pe...   May 28 2011, 05:47 PM
haute ecole rider   I might get Skyrim, but definitely not right away....   May 28 2011, 06:03 PM
mALX   ROFL !!! Sanguine's assistance, l...   May 29 2011, 07:03 AM
Captain Hammer   Well, I'm back. I've left appropriate upda...   Dec 18 2011, 10:46 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! I haven't installed Morrowind yet...   Dec 18 2011, 03:57 PM
Acadian   ’Martin sent a small stream of energy into the fir...   Dec 19 2011, 01:58 AM
Grits   Wrapping up the fireside talk with the concept of ...   Dec 28 2011, 01:09 AM
McBadgere   :blink: ... *Tries desperately to say something t...   Dec 28 2011, 04:35 AM
Captain Hammer   All: Eight months. Too long. Time to fix that. Ma...   Aug 22 2012, 06:15 AM
Colonel Mustard   Just read through from start to finish this mornin...   Aug 22 2012, 10:41 AM
Acadian   Interesting discussion about the Empire’s future p...   Aug 23 2012, 12:06 AM
Grits   I’m so glad to see some more story. :) I like h...   Aug 25 2012, 03:47 PM
Captain Hammer   Well, it's been forever and a half since I...   Aug 2 2013, 05:10 AM
Colonel Mustard   Hey, I remember this. It was a story, which had......   Aug 3 2013, 01:11 PM
Grits   It was the softness in Jauffre’s voice that surpr...   Aug 4 2013, 12:28 AM
Acadian   Welcome back to you and this story. This was a t...   Aug 7 2013, 03:14 PM
Captain Hammer   Grits, Colonel, Acadian: You've all pretty muc...   Aug 10 2013, 10:52 AM
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Colonel Mustard   I absolutely loved this little bit of description...   Aug 11 2013, 02:33 AM
Acadian   I love the details involved in hiding Cloud Ruler ...   Aug 11 2013, 04:44 PM


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