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Sinder Velvin
post Jul 7 2005, 12:28 PM
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Let's try playing a poetry game. This is similar to the three word story, except here you don't have to keep things at three lines - you need to keep the rhythm.

Also, we have to write quatrains in which the first line rhymes with the third, and the second rhymes with the fourth.

As if that wasn't enough, each quatrain has to make sense. The quatrains don't have to be related to each other, though.

So, I hope you're willing to try this out. smile.gif

Anyway here's the first line:

Through the darkness of the night,
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post Jul 7 2005, 12:36 PM
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post Jul 7 2005, 12:46 PM
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Which scared the squirrel outright,
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post Jul 7 2005, 01:01 PM
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post Jul 7 2005, 01:12 PM
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Nice. smile.gif

A new quatrain now. It's not related to the former one.

Standing still, it looked at the sky,
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post Jul 7 2005, 02:42 PM
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post Jul 7 2005, 03:01 PM
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post Jul 7 2005, 03:12 PM
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I'll let someone else begin the next quatrain. smile.gif
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post Jul 7 2005, 08:44 PM
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post Jul 7 2005, 09:11 PM
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listening to the whispers of the wind


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post Jul 8 2005, 05:55 AM
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post Jul 8 2005, 05:57 AM
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post Jul 8 2005, 07:57 AM
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post Jul 8 2005, 10:52 AM
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[quote=jonajosa]... to help me bake my cake... kvleft.gif[/quote]
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post Jul 8 2005, 12:26 PM
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post Jul 8 2005, 02:18 PM
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weren't we supposed to start a new one after my last post?? considering it is a quatrain - that means four lines.

and there our journey ends.

(new one now)


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post Jul 9 2005, 12:28 PM
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[quote=Dantrag]weren't we supposed to start a new one after my last post?? considering it is a quatrain - that means four lines.

and there our journey ends.

(new one now)[/quote]

Err... One more thing: within doesn't really rhyme with wind.
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post Jul 9 2005, 02:32 PM
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As mist descended upon his life,


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post Jul 9 2005, 02:41 PM
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and I went and found a poem in which 'wind' was rhymed with 'within' just to show that I'm not crazy.

LADY LADY
by Kevin Taylor

Lady
Lady
Wrote some verse.
Couldn't figure
which was worse;
Folks that laugh
or folks that curse.

She gently placed it
in a drawer
hidden there
with several more.
Hidden from the prying eyes,
Sheltered from such cruel lies.
A gentler death?
A sweeter sleep?
Her words unspoken
only weep
For wing and sky
to soar within;
to live or die
upon the wind!

So which the worse,
then - laugh or curse?
Or one who buries living verse?


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post Jul 9 2005, 03:22 PM
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