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| The Metal Mallet |
 Sep 12 2006, 10:26 PM
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Wow, this update was quite thrilling! I actually feared for Sethyas life!
I was wondering what scroll that possibly could've been. Personally, I thought it was going to be a restorative scroll, like one that would enhance strength and heal you. But the Summon Golden Saint Scroll was VERY satisfactory  It also interesting that you choose the method where you actually convinced Dren to be on your side, rather than incriminating him. I forsee interesting events just because of that. I can't wait to see if you do anything with that. First, save the world though  PS - I do believe I get to start page 4 -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Sep 13 2006, 08:39 PM
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Wooot, Golden Saint ot the rescue! The converting Dren to your side was interesting. I've tried that myself but always failed. Somehow, this oversized Claymore would always end up in Dren's neck. I wonder how.
 Dren sounds like an ally you shouldn't trust. Be on your guard at all times. Also, don't take any sleeping pills. Trust me, they're not healthy.  -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 14 2006, 02:31 AM
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| Black Hand |
Sep 14 2006, 04:39 AM
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| minque |
Sep 14 2006, 06:06 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Holy Muffin Blackie! This latest update was one of the finest I´ve read here on the boards! Your description of the conversation between Athyn Sarethi and Sethyas was wonderful. Yes I know I´m pretty fond of Redorans in general and Serjo Sarethi in particular, but still! I´m very impressed.....very...
Can´t wait to read about what will happen next! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 14 2006, 07:53 PM
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I sense that this chapter is drawing to a close from the last few updates. And it's doing so wonderfully, I whole-heartedly agree with minque about the conversation between Sethyas and Sarethi. It will be interesting to see the thought process behind Sethyas eventual choice.
I'm definitely looking forward to the next update(s)! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Black Hand |
Sep 15 2006, 03:49 PM
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| minque |
Sep 15 2006, 05:20 PM
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QUOTE(Black Hand @ Sep 15 2006, 04:49 PM)  SO my conversation with Athyn was better then my assassination of Yngling? Damn,... (THe following was just a joke.) Hehe..you see I´m a woman and a talkative one as well.....so I appreciate a good conversation when I see one! But of course your assassination was very well described! I just wanted to point out something else So when´s the next update? Can´t wait! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Sep 16 2006, 09:11 AM
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| minque |
Sep 16 2006, 01:16 PM
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Ahhhh......lots of emotions......*sob* Truly a wonderful description of Sethyas coming to the rescue of young Varvur. Continue please.....it´s just so great!
I think Sethyas will fit in just nice in the great House Redoran! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 16 2006, 02:44 PM
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Wow, I wish you could do that in the game (giving the ring to Varvur), I wouldn't have to slaughter a bunch of guards that way. I think last time I only had to kill one at least.
Anyways, this update is great like every one you do Black. This one contained a wonderful display of emotion that really fit the situation. It was written beautifully. Continue whenever you please. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 17 2006, 03:45 AM
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| Lord Revan |
Sep 17 2006, 03:58 AM
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man Black Hand, I guess you just taught me how heros had to do grunt work before they could be heros. Grunt work SUCKS!!! |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 17 2006, 04:10 AM
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Wow, just reading about all that work makes me feel tired. I liked how you did both of Drulan's missions at once; much more believable in my opinion. It seems the Redorans, and the Imperial Legion really like to sent you running all over the place. The Fighter's Guild does too if I remember correctly, stinking Vas...
PS - I got the message so I'll stick around. More commenting for me yay! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 17 2006, 05:07 AM
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| minque |
Sep 17 2006, 02:32 PM
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Lovely! I particularly like the interference that Sethyas encounter...two loyalties, that is indeed hard, but sofar our hero has handled it just wonderful. I´m sure he´ll continue doing it......
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 17 2006, 09:23 PM
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Hehe, I guess I took off a little too soon, but I'll comment now
Hopefully Sethyas won't become too conflicted between the two factions he resides in. So far, he has been lucky. The Oath Ceremony worked really well as well. Something different is always nice to read. I wait to see what's next for Sethyas in anticipation. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 18 2006, 03:30 AM
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