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post Sep 4 2005, 08:25 PM
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Excerpts From The Green Book Of Poems
By Wurlon Firethorn


(I'm Using This As A Writing Station Please)
(Brb Later, Out Of Ideas For now)


The Horse And The Rider

So sat the knight, whom was dressed in gray mail,
perched on a horse so through wind he would sail!
But through battle and war, his horse would bleed,
so the rider gave armor to his steed!
But heavy and thick, the horse made a jump,
and the rider fell a thunderous thump!
But through anger and hurt, he was still sane,
and simply smacked the horse on it's mane!




This post has been edited by Wurlon: Nov 6 2005, 06:45 PM


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Wurlon   Excerpts From The Green Book Of Poems   Sep 4 2005, 08:25 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not to bad. I don't like poems to much but yea...   Sep 5 2005, 01:54 AM
Wurlon   Thanks I changed that and it does sound better. ...   Sep 5 2005, 02:04 AM
stargate525   I tried reading them to myself, but found them kin...   Sep 6 2005, 10:44 PM
Wurlon   I"m not done, and I haven't been able t...   Sep 7 2005, 08:38 PM
stargate525   just a suggestion, not an accusation.   Sep 7 2005, 09:43 PM
Wurlon   Well naturally as the writer I can't see my ...   Sep 10 2005, 06:54 PM
Soulseeker3.0   well good luck wurlon   Sep 5 2005, 02:06 AM
Wurlon   There's no way I could win, I submitted a st...   Sep 5 2005, 02:27 AM
Soulseeker3.0   no problem just have fun. :D   Sep 5 2005, 03:13 AM
stargate525   Sure. Take this one for example... ... and obs...   Sep 14 2005, 05:03 PM
Wurlon   Grr I have to work to do, I'll get back to t...   Sep 17 2005, 12:08 AM
Wurlon   How about if I just make the first line longer ...   Nov 6 2005, 02:18 AM
Wurlon   Sorry guys I've been very busy with schoolwork...   Sep 24 2005, 02:20 PM
Wurlon   Forget it I can't do poetry right now, .. you ...   Nov 2 2005, 09:54 PM
stargate525   oh c'mon. Those are good. Better than most of...   Nov 2 2005, 09:59 PM
vaanic~one   What makes you think that?   Nov 3 2005, 09:00 PM
Wurlon   Well now there is no point, it would be late to se...   Nov 4 2005, 11:21 PM
stargate525   NO! The due date is for the competition ONLY....   Nov 4 2005, 11:28 PM
Wurlon   ohhh when is that lol?   Nov 5 2005, 03:42 PM
stargate525   about a half-hour after we get ready to playtest ...   Nov 5 2005, 05:01 PM
Wurlon   But I though you guys were going to edit the sto...   Nov 6 2005, 02:14 AM
stargate525   hah, you have no idea how fast I can edit somethi...   Nov 6 2005, 05:02 AM
vaanic~one   That's not a good thing to think. As far ...   Nov 8 2005, 08:36 PM
Wurlon   It does for me :mellow:   Nov 9 2005, 09:46 PM
Wurlon   Once again I'm sticking these here for referen...   Nov 6 2005, 06:36 PM
minque   Really? I´m impressed! So incredibly true...   Nov 9 2005, 10:10 PM
stargate525   of course, the chance of me missing something is ...   Nov 9 2005, 11:00 PM
Ola Martin   I think your poems are great :D   Mar 15 2006, 05:12 PM
Wurlon   I think your poems are great :D Lol thanks.. k...   Jul 20 2006, 06:59 PM


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