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Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Four: An Assassin Amongst Us..... |
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The Metal Mallet |
Sep 25 2006, 12:55 AM
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Wow, there's always just so much good stuff to comment on in each of your updates that I can't figure out where to start! We get a little action, a little intrigue, and wonderful, wonderful emotion. You can really feel the stress that Sethyas is going through. Maybe all he needs is a nice, candle-lit bubble bath.
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The Metal Mallet |
Sep 30 2006, 08:08 PM
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Joined: 18-June 06
From: Kitchener, ON, Canada
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Rather cool use of a cameo Black Hand, both authors wrote wonderfully in this update. But I have to say this might be the coolest line I've ever read: QUOTE ”What I NEED is a hot bath and a cure common disease potion, but the names will suffice.” That put a smile to my face and a chuckle as soon as I read it. Good stuff. Very inspirational. I guess I'll forgive you for posting right after I update, ruining the chance at having my fic right at the top PS- when you mean "all that Trey said was written by Trey" does that include the note? Just a curious question. This post has been edited by The Metal Mallet: Sep 30 2006, 08:10 PM
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I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola. Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus"
"This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones)
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jack cloudy |
Oct 2 2006, 07:58 PM
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Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.
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Oh, what we don't do to save the planet. I pity Sethyas for not having a James Bond view of things. He is making his life a living hell like this. (Though I think Bond's behaviour is disgusting so maybe it's just better like this.) Woot! Trey cameo! Now the proof has been given. Nirn does excist in multiple dimensions. This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Oct 2 2006, 07:59 PM
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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