 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Two: Rise of the Black Hand. |
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| Black Hand |
 Jul 27 2006, 07:55 AM
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| Kiln |
Jul 27 2006, 05:03 PM
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I liked the reference with "A Game at Dinner" that you gave during a part of that last bit but the link didn't come out right.
 Anyways I think I missed the last update so I'm gonna read it as well.  -------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 27 2006, 05:11 PM
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Post machine indeed! Your pace is maddening!
All of them were consistantly strong as well (even the "sappy" one). There has to be posts like that sometimes, it shows that they're still people. I've been really enjoying reading this and can't for the next batch of posts. Digging the assassinations! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Lord Revan |
 Jul 27 2006, 06:21 PM
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cunning, you've made a great character out of Sethyas
PS: I wonder when he'll remember his little sister?  This post has been edited by Lord Revan: Jul 27 2006, 06:22 PM |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 27 2006, 07:08 PM
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| sins_to_dark |
Jul 29 2006, 05:43 PM
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ive been away for a week and im glad to see this story is still as amazing as ever keep up the good work looking forward to the next update
Great work-------------------- I don't think you trust, in, my, self rightious sucide, I, cry, when angels deserve to die
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| Black Hand |
Jul 30 2006, 12:28 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 30 2006, 07:12 PM
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A fantastic update with a neat little message, I liked that you explained why the creatures attack the necromancer. I had my ideas on why but I think that explanation was necessary. Good Job!
Oh yes, and this: QUOTE I was willing to imbibe, opening the window a crack to relieve myself, I gave little thought to the sanitary conditions outside. But the rain would wash it away anyway. Made me think of Family Guy: *window closes in front of Quagmire* Quagmire: Hello hospital? Yea it's Quagmire. It's stuck in the window this time... Hehe, fun stuff! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 30 2006, 09:41 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 30 2006, 11:24 PM
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Great work with this update. I was laughing out loud reading the urination part. Quite ingenius if you ask me. Also this growing involvement with the Dark Brotherhood is getting me anxious. I can't wait for the cresendo!
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Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 31 2006, 06:14 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 31 2006, 05:35 PM
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QUOTE “Oh, I see. That makes sense. But would you rather take on a flock of Cliff Racers, or one powerful battlemage?” I thought about his question for a second. “I’d take the battlemage.” “All right then, Go now.” Hahahahaha! Great! Sometimes I wish my fic could have less serious parts... but I guess that's why I did that one shot fic. Anyways, solid work here, I now want to know how Sethyas is going to save his sister from the Dark Brotherhood's dark clutches! And hopefully the battlemage doesn't summon up something too difficult to attempt to kill Sethyas with... This post has been edited by The Metal Mallet: Aug 1 2006, 05:12 PM -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| sins_to_dark |
Aug 1 2006, 04:07 PM
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Brillient updates this story is amazing, keep it up
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| Black Hand |
Aug 2 2006, 08:30 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Aug 2 2006, 06:24 PM
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Expertly done assassination. I feel sorry for the Bemis Gang, facing off against Sethyas is hopeless for them
 Can't wait to see it! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Aug 5 2006, 07:25 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Aug 5 2006, 02:41 PM
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QUOTE Now the war had truly begun Oh heck yes!! Bring it on! It's basically looking like it's going to be Mephala assassins versus Sithis assassins complimented with Daedra, and Daedra Worshippers.... That sounds tough. I'm still betting on the Tong though  Fantastic update as usual.-------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Aug 5 2006, 10:40 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Aug 6 2006, 04:29 AM
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QUOTE A true Assassins weapon Indeed it was, though personally I liked the "Fang" dagger you find in one of the Ash Vampire Lairs outside Red Mountain, not Korgorhu. Huge extra lightning damage. It's nice and ironic to be using a Mehrunes Dagon weapon against his own cultists -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Aug 7 2006, 11:53 AM
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You're still going strong. With Sethyas on their side, the Morag Tong have a huge advantage. Unless Setsuna is just as good. I hope that the inevitable showdown can be done without killing.
I hope he makes good use of the dagger. This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Aug 7 2006, 11:53 AM -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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