Welcome back as Haa-Rei continues his adventure!
This was wonderful to read, partly because Buffy will join Martin’s army for the Battle of Bruma within a couple more episodes of her current book. I love how each of us who feature this famous battle in our stories keep it very recognizable but apply our own take, twists and turns to it.
You did a great job giving us a feel for the violence, magnitude, noise and confusion so appropriate for such an epic battle.
Oh, I hope Buffy’s fellow tiny sister Bosmer mage, Finriel, survives.
So Haa-Rei plans to enter that massive gate. Yikes!
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