 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Five: History Rewritten, and History Reborn |
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| jack cloudy |
 Dec 17 2006, 11:13 AM
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Haha, my hunch proved to be correct. All praise the hunch!
 Now, this update was excellent. The way Sethyas handled the problem was good, though he might want to make sure he doesn't always ask the councillors to trust him. He might lose their faith if everything he does goes directly against what they think. One final nitpick though. Did Sethyas just forget about Ilmeni? First he arrives at Bal Isra, all happy and stuff. Then he is forced to blink away. After finishing his bussiness, he goes to the Urshilaku instead of Bal Isra. Though I do believe that Bal Isra lies on the way there so he might drop by for a moment. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| mplantinga |
Dec 17 2006, 08:41 PM
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No offense to Serene (or her creator spirit Minque), but somehow I never really thought of Serene as Archmistress material. Perhaps my judgment is clouded by the usual "leadership through might" paradigm that dominates the game and most fanfics. Having said that, I think that in real life Serene would be exactly the right sort of person to lead; she is compassionate and caring, but also firm and capable.
I did enjoy how Sethyas convinced the council to accept Serene as Archmistress. I will look forward to hearing about his return to the Urshilaku. |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 17 2006, 08:51 PM
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A Serene cameo! And a good one at that! Their conversation and examination of each other was fantastically done. I feel that Serene would make a capable Archmaster though.
Keep up the great work, Black Hand! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Black Hand |
Dec 17 2006, 09:03 PM
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| Black Hand |
Dec 17 2006, 10:49 PM
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| jack cloudy |
Dec 17 2006, 11:07 PM
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Sethyas obviously doesn't like the temple. I can't blame him though. Still, wielding Sunder or Keening without Wraithguard is a dangerous idea. To get Wraithguard, he needs Vivec. (Though he doesn't know that yet.)
-------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 17 2006, 11:20 PM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Looks like Sethyas control over his emotions can be broken. Though, I admit, the Temple does have that affect to those claiming to be the Nerevarine. Excellently written display of this emotion all the same.
I wonder if Sethyas will actually pay a visit to Vivec out of his own free will now... -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| minque |
Dec 17 2006, 11:43 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Oh..My...Goodness...these two updates were really special! Your interpretation of my Serene was quite outstanding! The conversation between Seth and her was really good, now let´s hope she´ll be as good as Archmaster as they think!
The second update showed a very intriguing way of getting into Saryoni´s chambers! Great work Blackie! And those poems and the sermon....woah.... I´m just speechless! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| canis216 |
Dec 18 2006, 01:04 AM
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A truly amazing update. Wow.
-------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| Black Hand |
Dec 18 2006, 02:12 AM
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| canis216 |
Dec 18 2006, 03:12 AM
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Knower Joined: 28-March 06 From: Desert canyons without end. |
Three posts within the last 24 hours... you're on a roll.
Mighty proactive of V'Vehk, that letter. -------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 18 2006, 04:39 AM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
The Mighty Meeting with Vivec! I've been waiting for this! I always liked how a lot of answers are made when speaking with him, yet there's still some that go unanswered. You wrote that aspect perfectly.
I can't wait to see the building up to the conclusion of the main quest! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| mplantinga |
Dec 18 2006, 07:31 PM
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Thanks for a couple of spectatular installments. The meeting with Vivec was particularly enjoyable. I really liked the intercalation of Nerevar's thoughts and words into Sethyas' conversation with Vivec; it made me feel like he really was Nerevar reborn.
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| minque |
Dec 18 2006, 07:39 PM
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QUOTE(mplantinga @ Dec 18 2006, 07:31 PM)  Thanks for a couple of spectatular installments. The meeting with Vivec was particularly enjoyable. I really liked the intercalation of Nerevar's thoughts and words into Sethyas' conversation with Vivec; it made me feel like he really was Nerevar reborn. Oh aye...I agree ..I fully agree. To make Vivec that "alive" and conversate him like that it´s just wonderfully brilliant! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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