 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Two: In Service to Our Lady |
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| minque |
 Jun 23 2008, 08:40 PM
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Brilliant Blackie! As Dr Planty said, Seth's conversation with Lexie's watchdog was a masterpiece! I wonder what it will lead to....
QUOTE Remember, fellow Assassin, I have faced gods.” “Remember, fellow Assassin, that I serve one.” Hler said, not backing down.  wonderful!-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jun 26 2008, 12:42 AM
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| minque |
Jun 26 2008, 10:35 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
okay...so now they're off chasing goblins huh? I would be careful if I was Seth...or Rayne! yayy Blackie, more Seth please!
Btw, yes do take advantage of your own sub forum! I will!  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2008, 09:11 AM
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| minque |
Jul 1 2008, 07:39 PM
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You're a poet Blackie! Or at least you write almost poetical. I loved this update, I love how you describe the goblins, heh in fact I didn't know anything about them and I enjoyed to learn from you here.
Then I like that Rayne and Seth are having discussions and that they do not always believe in the same things. It makes them both very sympathetic to me. yeah yeah.....I'm in love with Seth.....say no more! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jul 10 2008, 05:11 PM
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| minque |
Jul 10 2008, 08:06 PM
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Sethy...tsk tsk...are you impressed by a large vicious army!
Well yeah you would I suppose.Now what I'm thinking is if Rayne will be partaking in the fight against Helseth. I mean ok she's a skilled assassin but she also is Seth's weakness, and the evil king could use that ...and he will! I wonder....  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 13 2008, 01:27 AM
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I'm caught up! And I have to say I'm quite impressed about what has happened since I've last visited. Excellent work my friend.
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Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| bbqplatypus |
Jul 13 2008, 05:33 AM
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I stumbled upon this story (and this forum, by contrast) about two days ago, and I spent pretty much all of my free time reading the entire story up to this point. Hell, I even registered for the express purpose of following this story and commenting about it (though I might stick around).
Anycrap, I'd just like to say that this is one of the best MW walkthrough/fanfics I've ever read. I've always felt that a "traditional" narrative based on the story of Morrowind requires a good sense of the shrewdness and ritualism of Dunmer society, and the alien-ness of said society as viewed by outsiders. Y'know, a stranger alone in a strange and harsh land. Sort of a cross between Dune and Lawrence of Arabia. But I never really thought of the whole assassin angle, which I think is really what makes your story unique. The quality of this story is making me want to actually FINISH the fanfic I started about four freakin' months ago... Geez, I'm rambling, aren't I? Well, just consider this my roundabout way of saying "Keep up the good work, Blackie!" |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 13 2008, 06:23 AM
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| minque |
Jul 13 2008, 07:20 PM
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QUOTE AH! A new fan! Thank you for your comments! The ego-feed does help motivate the story. So true! And you're well worth it... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jul 20 2008, 05:56 PM
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| minque |
Jul 20 2008, 06:08 PM
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Uhhhh..so you're just stopping after taking just two down, half of the bunch?
Evil, thy name is Blackie! Oh I am quite sure Seth and Rayne will do a good job with the others, but but.... Knowing you there might be some, shall we say, extra spice to it. So when's the next update coming up? -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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Jul 21 2008, 06:47 PM
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| minque |
Jul 21 2008, 10:50 PM
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Ahh, nice to see Raynie do so well! To see that the female part of the two to be the one who really did the hard job! Ohhh of course Seth did too but ....mmmm Rayne really showed herself to be an assassiness(?!) to be counted on...
Sweeet! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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Jul 25 2008, 02:04 AM
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| Kiln |
Jul 25 2008, 03:20 AM
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Great work mate the only thing I can really say is that I wish you'd do longer updates but I understand completely about time constraints and priorities.
Waiting4Updates. -------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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| Black Hand |
Jul 25 2008, 05:51 AM
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| minque |
Jul 26 2008, 06:57 AM
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QUOTE(Black Hand @ Jul 25 2008, 03:04 AM)  “Well. If we aren’t two very well-paid mercenaries!” Rayne exclaimed; running her fingers through the coins in the chest. I stood in a corner, leaning against the wall, arms crossed. “Keep the gold, Rayne.” She looked over with a perplexed look. “Don’t make offers that I’m not stupid enough to turn down. Fifty-fifty, come on. We’re partners!” I shook my head. “It’s yours. I don’t need it, and you deserve no less for your assistance down there.” She walked over slowly. “If that’s your way of saying thanks, let me say my thanks too.” Her walk towards me ending in an embrace and attempted kiss. “What’s wrong?” she asked, pulling back as I moved my face to the side. I faked a smile. “Nothing. Just a lot on my mind. You understand.” “I do. I have 15,000 things on my mind!” she quipped. “Then you go, and buy something nice for the place, for yourself, whatever, and I’ll use that time to clear my head.” “Deal.” She said with a quick peck on the lips. The pattern of being used was repeating itself. I did not take being used lightly, but I had seen with my own eyes was Helseth was willing to do, how far he was willing to go. The temple needed me, if at the very least my legend. The great Nerevarine who cast down Dagoth Ur with a terrible gaze, and an awesome cry. The great Nerevarine who could punch through Dwemer walls, and fell entire legions of Ash Ghouls with a stroke of his blade. Both the Temple and the Monarchy wanted to exploit me. I wanted to be left alone. Perhaps such a thing was not possible, I was in to deep. Prophecy wove my path ahead of me, the aftermath of my choices were never far behind. If there was a light at the end of the tunnel, there would be bloodshed before I got to it. The temple would keep me alive, so long as I proved useful. Helseth would seek to destroy me by any means. Of these options, I chose the one most beneficial to myself. So within the passing of the moons, we were summoned to the Temple once more. This time, the Archcanon, Gavas Drin himself sought us out; as he had a matter that he felt we could assist with. That was getting a bit old. I couldn't decide which lines to quote so I took it all! I really love this part, the conversation between them is so ....so gah, I can't find the proper words for it, but I have a feeling you sort of know what I mean. (You are a mind reader right?) QUOTE(Black Hand @ Jul 25 2008, 06:51 AM) I end up leving for about four months in the very near future. Oh, so there's no internet there, wherever you end up?  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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Jul 26 2008, 06:36 PM
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