The Official conversational and constructive, critisicm thread for Black Hand's realm. Options

[Black Hand]

Hello Fans and detractors!

Well, I didn't necessarily ask for my own sub forum, along with many of the other great writers here, but I like the idea more and more, and have decided to exploit, capitalize, and take advantage of it!

So we'll make this a little thread to kick me in the teeth with fuzzy pink slippers. Now, I've been part of the peaceful, say only nice things crowd for a bit, I called down the hammer during a bad spell I was having a while back, but I have come to realize that to improve, one must know what to fix.


This statement in particular intrigued me:

I was a little disappointed to see the matter of the adamantium scimitar more or less unresolved. It felt, to me, like we weren't quite finished with that at the end of the previous installment, but there was no mention of it in this one. Regardless, I'm hoping for a suitably amazing description of its first battle encounter.

No, no. Im not complaining. Please, tell me how the scimitar entry could have been better! I command it!

But hopefully we can get planty in here, and kick things off in the spirit of self-improvement.

[minque]

So we'll make this a little thread to kick me in the teeth with fuzzy pink slippers

Ok....*kick!!!* How's that feel??

Nope I'm not going to critisize, because I'm too involved with Seth, besides my eyes are covered with that pinkish vail so I'm really not the one who should do it anyway.

No...I think BSD-IES should be bribed to come here, he's very good at giving constructive feedback, believe me. He's a professional so his comments are really good.

Maybe a tiny hint will lead him here.....