 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Four: Binds the Broken... |
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| minque |
 May 31 2010, 10:19 PM
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ah, the clockwork city....well I've never seen it so this is going to be a treat! Let's hope Pene will be of some good assistance, I think Seth's gonna need it...
QUOTE Upon thy return, you shall know the love of Almalexia! Now what does that mean?...Hehe -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Olen |
Jun 3 2010, 08:02 PM
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Woo good stuff, I haven't commented for a while but I have been reading about Seth's exploits. That bit of retcon lore piqued my interest too... Solstheim... Interesting.
Great stuff, your description of the clockwork city is already good and I'm fascinated to read more. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| Black Hand |
Jun 5 2010, 10:34 AM
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| Olen |
Jun 5 2010, 09:46 PM
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Great stuff, using their own traps against them is always a good tactic and always entertaining to read.
The interplay between Seth and Pene is well done, she's becoming steadily less condescending and more open, especially with her examination of the dead fabricant and wondering what made it go. The comment about their ruins was brilliant too  -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| minque |
Jun 11 2010, 12:10 AM
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Ohhh excellent writing! So good descriptions of the devices and stuff..hehe could almost see them jump through those swinging blades. That reminds me of something....a movie I think but I don't remember
S.G.M -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Remko |
Jul 20 2010, 02:02 PM
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And then..... nothing...... aaaaarrgghhhhh
I loved it Black Hand! -------------------- Strength and honour, stranger!
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| Black Hand |
Jul 21 2010, 05:20 AM
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| Remko |
Jul 21 2010, 09:55 AM
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What do you think? Of course I read the whole thing
-------------------- Strength and honour, stranger!
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| Black Hand |
Jul 21 2010, 06:40 PM
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| Remko |
Jul 22 2010, 11:32 AM
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An update soon? YAY!!
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| minque |
Aug 10 2010, 08:50 PM
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QUOTE I'm also waiting on minque to hurry up on her story so I can officially reveal some secrets.... OMG!!! Ehhh....well I'll better....  DO something then...-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Doommeister |
Nov 6 2010, 09:49 AM
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Argh cliffie!! Please, more? And if your relying on minque to update, then please beg her.
Excellent stories black hand. Loved it all This post has been edited by Doommeister: Dec 1 2010, 02:05 PM -------------------- As the assassin draws near, despair!
As the assassin draws near, pray for mercy! As the assassin draws near, beg for your life! The hands of fate have been cruel to you my friend. I will grant you a quick and painless death. |
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| minque |
Nov 9 2010, 01:14 AM
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QUOTE(Doommeister @ Nov 6 2010, 09:49 AM)  Argh cliffie!! Please, more? And if your relying on minque to update, then please beg her. Excellent stories blacked. Loved it all Ewww I know!!! I should...I will...soon,  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Feb 16 2011, 10:40 PM
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| minque |
Feb 17 2011, 10:01 PM
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Iiiyaaa! Darling Seth is back! AND managed to stay alive despite the ghastly contraption! yay....that creature Pene can be very useful...mmmm I can se that.
Wonderful to see an update on my favvvo story -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Apr 26 2011, 06:13 PM
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| minque |
Apr 29 2011, 10:09 PM
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QUOTE(Black Hand @ Apr 26 2011, 07:13 PM) Whoops! Was messing around with my new phone. Will update very soon. Is that a promise? And those words come from me??  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jun 6 2011, 12:02 AM
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| Burnt Sierra |
Jun 7 2011, 12:25 AM
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First up - great to see this continuing. And nice to see the screenshots too, Sethyas is one intimidating looking dude! Well, so he should...
But, I digress. I read the update. Then I reread the last few updates before it. Then I entered the timewarp. The year? 2006. I've spent the last few hours starting from the very beginning again and just reached Kogoruhn. And by the way, how fast did you used to write? I'd forgotten that! Will spend the next few days catching up on it all, so it's all fresh in my mind once again. Hard life I tell ya  |
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| Olen |
Jun 7 2011, 11:35 AM
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What he said about the continuance of this. I like Sethyas and am glad to see this is still going. It appears I didn't comment after the last part, but I was reading I assure you.
I like the puzzle element you bring forward in it, it makes the clockwork city more than it was in game. And good screenies! -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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