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Lopov
post Mar 22 2013, 11:19 AM
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Hello everyone,

this is my first attempt at writing in fan fiction. I've been regularly posting updates on Beth forums but since I recently started a new character, I decided to share his stories here. He's a High Elf and everything else of importance will be revealed through his stories. I'm playing dead-is-dead which means no reloading under any circumstance - if he dies, his adventures are over. English is not my first language, so there will definitely be some grammar mistakes but at least in the first short story most of them are intentional.

The Introduction

Anvil, Cyrodiil, 27th of Last Seed 3€433…

On 27th of Last Seed 3€433 an old ship sailed into Anvil docks. A few Redguard sailors had jumped overboard, tied the ship up and began unloading a cargo. The merchant ship was called ‘Child of Ra Gada’ and it belonged to captain Amut (known simply as The Capt’n), sailing between Hammerfell, Summerset Isles and Cyrodiil. But this time it was besides the cargo ‘transpouting’ someone else.

Firsthold, Summerset Isles, a week before…

“Nou,” said The Capt’n, a little angry because young High Elf obviously didn’t hear him the first time. “We’re nout transpoutin’ people, ye know, jest cargoo…”

“I’d really like to get to Anvil as soon as possible. I can pay you, of course,” quickly answered young red-haired High Elf. The Capt’n was all ears!

“Paaay me? Hmmmm… lemme fink nou… ther’ might be sam place fer ya, young oun… but it depends – hou mouch are ye willing too paaay?”

“Will hundred septims do?”

“A hoondred, ye say… hmmm… mrmmm… ufhm…”

“Two hundred?”

“Twoo… like twoo… hmmm…. that’s bett’r, young oun… but… hrmmm…”

“Three hundred then. My last offer.”

“Free hundred, young oun?! Ye’ve got yeself a deal, young oun! Junp aboard, we’re leeving soon…”
The Capt’n couldn’t know that a ‘young oun’ would be prepared to pay much more than three hundred septims just to get away from The Summerset Isles but luckily, that was not necessary. He jumped on ‘Child of Ra Gada’ and after a few minutes the ship sailed from the docks and headed for Cyrodiil. As High Elf was standing on the stern and watching his homeland disappearing in the distance, he felt heavy burden being lifted from his shoulders.

Anvil, Cyrodiil, 27th of Last Seed 3€433…

While sailors were unloading the cargo, young High Elf handed a small pouch to The Capt'n. In the last week he got quite attached to the funny captain, his accent and the sailors - they were a merry bunch, particularly compared to his family.

“Thank ye, kind oun! And don’t get yo’self kill’d in the cap’tal, ye knou…”

“I’ll do my best. Thank you and… happy sails!” Having said that, a young High Elf left ‘Child of Ra Gada’. Immediately after he left, first mate Smoush approached The Capt’n.

“Take a good look at him, Capt’n, because that’s the last time you see this young man.”

“Ay knou, Smoush… poor kid, hi’ll get hisself kill’d in a matt’r of days… aye, a pity, hi looooks nice and well-mann’d. ”

“Indeed, Capt’n. But he must be as mad as the hatter! He hopes to succeed in the Arena! The A-r-e-n-a! Have you ever heard of a High Elf who survived the Arena? The A-r-e-n-a?!”

“Stoup spellin’ on mee, I get ye’… I couoldn’t belief heem when hi said that hi’s goin’ to the Arena. Imag’ne, a High Elf… I tould heem hi was bo’n t’be a mage, magus, whateveh… but hi j’st smiled and car’lessly waved hees hant… bout hi wasn’t a snobby one leyk most of them ar’!”

“Yes, he seemed down-to-earth. Aye, aye, poor kid…”

“Pour indeeyd…”

“Yay, yay…”

“That’s enoughg! I’ll sta't creyin’ if I jest fink abaut heem a littl’ lounger… let’s unload th’t cargoo, th’n we’re leevin’…”

“Yes, Capt’n!”

And while ‘Child of Ra Gada’ was sailing from Anvil, young High Elf was still standing on the pier… admiring the sunny sky, people chattering and strange yet amazing architecture of a town called Anvil. He felt a stunning relief, being far away from the Summerset Isles… and his family.

A little insecure because of the new land but cheerful at the same time, Loypuur headed down the pier.


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post Mar 23 2013, 01:16 PM
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I'm glad you're writing a story for your new character, Lopov. An Arena bound Altmer with a good attitude, sounds great! smile.gif I look forward to more of Loypuur's adventures.

Also I love the way you used a screen shot in the story!


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post Mar 23 2013, 03:03 PM
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QUOTE(Grits @ Mar 23 2013, 08:16 AM) *

Also I love the way you used a screen shot in the story!


Yeah, and is that a dragonfly in that pic? smile.gif




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post Mar 23 2013, 03:55 PM
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QUOTE(Grits @ Mar 23 2013, 01:16 PM) *

I'm glad you're writing a story for your new character, Lopov. An Arena bound Altmer with a good attitude, sounds great! smile.gif I look forward to more of Loypuur's adventures.

Also I love the way you used a screen shot in the story!


Thanks. First few updates will be general, mostly descriptions of encounters, daily events etc to get basic feeling of Loypuur's personality and morale. I have a plan to make more detailed updates later, with more references to his past.

QUOTE(Renee Gade IV @ Mar 23 2013, 03:03 PM) *

Yeah, and is that a dragonfly in that pic? smile.gif


Could be, honestly I didn't notice it when I took a screenshot, I saw it later when uploading it.

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post Mar 23 2013, 04:19 PM
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First steps

Anvil, Cyrodiil, 27th of Last Seed 3€433


Loypuur didn't feel especially self-confident while walking down the pier. While relieved to be far away from his homeland, he also felt alone. But that was not necessarily a bad thing, after all at least in Cyrodiil nobody knew him. For the first time in his life, he wasn't wearing exquisite robes and shiny shoes. He wasn't used to his new haircut as he was never allowed to have so short hair before. Before departing Summerset Isles, Loypuur changed his appearance as much as possible. He cut his long upswept hair and threw fancy robes through the window of his tower so they disappeared in the heavy seas below. Then he 'borrowed' a common green wool shirt from servant's quarters and equipped rusty armor that he had been hiding in his room... an armor that was given to him by his mentor many years ago.

It was practically useless by now but it was a disguise good enough to leave heavily guarded estate of his father. He was afraid that his height might reveal his identity but luckily the guard on duty didn't pay special attention to him.

As his thoughts were shifting from past to present, he noticed a woman painting not far away. Loypuur came closer and stood behind her. After admiring her creation which was obviously the lighthouse in the background, he decided to initiate a conversation.

“Nice painting.”

Astia Inventus turned around in a surprise – it’s been a long time since somebody commented on her drawings. A tall High Elf with very short vividly red hair and boyish face was standing behind her and looking at the picture. Astia immediately introduced herself and told him about her husband Pinarus and Anvil being quite lovely town if one doesn’t mind scruffy and smelly sailors. Loypuur didn't know if that's habit in Cyrodiil that people introduce to each other immediately but he kindly introduced himself in return and told her that he hails from Summerset Isles. After a short chat about latest rumors, Astia continued with her hobby and High Elf continued his walk through Anvil. He hasn't seen a similar town before and it seemed very warm and welcoming. His father would definitely call it shabby and dirty and that was for Loypuur another reason to like it.

He had a brief chat with Newheim the Portly - the harbormaster, afterwards he asked a friendly guard about the services in Anvil and tried a little flirting with Isolde but she wasn’t particularly interested in him and didn’t want to be his guide through the town – Loypuur ascribed her decline to his non-manly look. He later greeted a young Bosmer that was gardening behind her house, admired the statue of Dibella and her luxuriant curves… [ahem]… and chatted with Dumania Jirich, a primate of Dibella who told him that she was chosen as a primate because of her loving nature and striking looks. While Loypuur found that middle-aged blonde Imperial attractive, he preferred exotic ones like afore-mentioned Isolde for instance.

After a short visit to the castle courtyard, Loypuur returned to the town and made a day for Penniless Olvus, but not by giving him a coin… no, it was because Loypuur asked for his name. Olvus was surprised at first and thought that he didn’t hear it right but High Elf repeated his question. “Olvus… Penniless Olvus… that’s me.” High Elf smiled, introduced himself as Loypuur and then continued his walk. Olvus was speechless – he didn’t remember when a stranger asked for his name and then even told him his own in return! And a High Elf, can you imagine? Olvus didn’t know many High Elves but most of them were snobby and haughty and didn’t even take a look at him!

Loypuur paid a short visit to the chapel of Dibella, he had hoped to see Dumania again, perhaps she could share some Dibellian advice… but when he saw beautiful glass carvings of the Divines, he forgot about Dumania. He took a good look at each of them, particularly the Talos’ one. As unusual as it sounds, Loypuur the High Elf worshipped Talos. Thinking back, he didn’t know whether he did it to oppose his family or was he really interested in The Ninth Divine, but in time he became accustomed to it and it suited his lifestyle. Compared to his siblings and most of his race, Loypuur was never interested in magic and except knowing some alternating and restoring spells, he didn’t have the slightest idea about the other schools.

Sun was slowly setting as Loypuur entered The Count’s Arms, rented a room with ‘an excellent view of the city’ as promised by the innkeeper, dropped off his rusty mace, shield and gauntlets and returned downstairs for a supper. After some chatting with Wilbur and S’shani who told him that ‘this one’ was once a captain, High Elf went upstairs to his room and after reading the news about the Emperor’s assassination, he went to bed. He couldn’t sleep because of the excitement and… relief.

There was no need to pretend anymore. No need to play a role that he despised. No need to wear the finest clothes and socialize with the stupid nobility of Summerset Isles. Now he could wear a wool shirt, rusty armor and talk to commoners, even beggars. If his father saw him doing that, he would renounce him. What he probably already did after he had found a farewell letter. But Loypuur felt much better in Cyrodiil as he had in his homeland.

Much better.

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post Mar 23 2013, 04:50 PM
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Loypuur the Rat savior

Anvil, Cyrodiil, 28th of Last Seed 3€433


On his 2nd day in Anvil, Loypuur learnt that one should be very careful when renting a room in Cyrodiil and leaving some of the stuff inside with an intention to pick it up later. But first things first.

After well-deserved sleep Loypuur visited the chapel of Dibella and prayed for the Emperor as advised by some Chancellor Ocato in The Black Horse Courier newspaper. Loypuur never really had a feeling that there was an Emperor in Cyrodiil, especially because he was born in an aristocratic and racist family that never acknowledged Uriel Septim VII as the Emperor. That was in fact another reason why Loypuur became interested in the Emperor, often embarrassing his father with the questions about Uriel Septim and the Empire. After spending some time in the chapel he wanted to purchase some spells from Trevaia – the only one that seemed worth buying was a powerful healing spell called Heal Major Wounds. But since he didn’t have 394 septims to buy it, he decided to postpone the purchase. Curious about what lies on the other side of Anvil’s main gate, he wandered there and noticed… stables! There were many beautiful white horses that seemed fast and hardy. Loypuur loved animals, particularly horses and he decided to purchase one.

Well, things didn’t go as planned and he couldn’t afford a horse with only 174 septims. The good-looking Redguard horse seller demanded 4000 gold for one of her white beauties and Loypuur came to a realization that he’ll probably have to walk to the Imperial City. All in all, at least he could take a good look at the horse seller and he wondered whether she’s as wild as horse when in bed. Thoughtful about the horse seller he returned to Anvil and paid a visit to Morvayn’s peacemakers and fell in love with… two-handed silver battle axe! He just had to have it and after some bartering (Loypuur was obviously more successful with men than with women - something he wasn’t very proud of) he purchased a shiny axe for 170 septims. He decided to sell his rusty mace and shield that he left behind in his room at The Count’s Arms. But alas, that was not so easy. The innkeeper Wilbur already locked up his room and he didn’t let Loypuur in, no matter what. He demanded a full price of 25 gold which Loypuur couldn’t afford, having only 4 gold in his pockets.

Not worrying too much about the situation, young High Elf decided to look for some work (to earn at least 25 septims), there was definitely someone who would require his services, perhaps even a pretty damsel in distress… who would faint in his arms when he had saved her from whatever peril plagued her… Lost in his dreams he decided to ask for some work at the lighthouse. But there was no one and after admiring Anvil from the top of the tower, he returned to the docks. There he was approached by a rather strange-looking Bosmer who demanded that Loypuur guesses his name. He gave him two possible choices – Caenlorn or Maenlorn. ‘Must be one of those freaks that can be met in the docks’ thought Loypuur but decided to guess nonetheless since the fellow was likeable. And he was correct – it was Caenlorn! Caenlorn praised him and his good memory but Loypuur was pretty sure that the two had never met before. Anyway, what mattered was that Caenlorn directed Loypuur to the Fighters guild if he’s looking for work and has stones for it. As already mentioned, Loypuur always felt that he was born to be a warrior, so he headed to the Guild.

He was accepted into the Guild immediately and his superior Azzan had a first contract for him ready – apparently there were some rats that needed to be killed! ‘Should be fun’ thought Loypuur and looked for the house of madam Thelas. How very wrong he was! He didn’t need to kill the rats, he had to protect them! It didn’t matter to Loypuur as long as he’ll earn something and get an access to his room at The Count’s Arms so he went to the basement. There fell a first victim of his new silver axe – the starving mountain lion. It was beautiful yet deadly-looking animal and Loypuur never saw its kind before. But as it turned out, madam Thelas with a high-pitched voice wanted Loypuur to get rid of every possible mountain lion in the vicinity. She advised him to seek Pinarus Inventius for help. ‘Inventius? That must be the painter’s husband’ thought Loypuur but unfortunately their house was locked. After a fruitless search through Anvil, specifically The Flowing Bowl and a strange place that started with ‘F’, Loypuur finally found the esteemed hunter close to the main gate. They made a short work of the mountain lions but even that was not enough to please madam Thelas. ‘No wonder she’s living with rats, probably no man could please her… ever’ thought Loypuur but decided to return a smile even when she ordered him to spy on the back of her house because there was supposedly one of her neighbors sneaking around. As unbelievable as it sounded, there was in fact an Argonian behind her house, placing some meat close to the hole that led directly to Arvena’s basement. Having no choice, Loypuur confronted her.

As it turned out, the Argonian in question was no other than Quill-Weave, an obviously famous writer about whom Loypuur read yesterday. Since her voice was a balm to his ears (not high-pitched) and since he believed her that she didn’t know that her meat had attracted mountain lions to the town, Loypuur decided not to betray her. She promised him a reward at her house but this time Loypuur hoped that it’s not what he had thought it was. In the end, everyone was happy. Mountain lions were slain so madam Thelas gave Loypuur a hundred septims, more than enough to extend the lodging at The Count’s Arms. Quill-Weave’s secret was not made public and she taught Loypuur a few good acrobatic moves. Loypuur was finally able to gain an access to his room and after supper he went to his comfortable bed. It was funny and memorable day and thinking back Loypuur came to a conclusion that if Wilbur hadn’t locked him out of his room in the morning, then mountain lions would have killed madam Thelas’ rats.

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post Mar 24 2013, 03:53 PM
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Welcome to the arena of fanfic, Lopov! You’ve done a nice job of getting Loypurr into Cyrodiil as you begin to introduce him to us. We learn that he has an eye for the ladies, even if he doesn't quite have the luck to match his taste. Introducing himself to a beggar is a wonderful way of showing us that he is serious about wanting to be rid of his haughty high elven upbringing. And, alas, he soon runs into the economic reality of Cyrodiil as he longs for a white horse. So, naturally, he uses his stones to take on a rat quest for hire!

In your episode called ‘First Steps’, you do some what we call ‘head hopping’. That is, clearly this episode is meant to be from Loypurr’s perspective, yet we are somehow aware of what both Astia and Penniless are thinking. Although the ‘omniscient’ point of view can be used, very few writers do so because it not only removes the mystery of what others are thinking, but is a constant reminder that we are reading the work of an all-knowing scribe instead of being fully immersed into the limited perspective of one character. You may want to google ‘fiction pov’ and review more details on perspective in fiction.

Best wishes, and be careful that Dead-is-Dead does not force a premature end to your Altmer’s tale! tongue.gif


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post Mar 24 2013, 04:04 PM
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Although the ‘omniscient’ point of view can be used, very few writers do so because it not only removes the mystery of what others are thinking, but is a constant reminder that we are reading the work of an all-knowing scribe instead of being fully immersed into the limited perspective of one character. You may want to google ‘fiction pov’ and review more details on perspective in fiction.


A very valuable advice, I will do some googling and adjust my writing in the future updates.

Thanks for a kind welcome and response!

P.S.
I corrected some grammar mistakes and added two screenies, one in each update.


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post Mar 25 2013, 09:28 AM
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Watchman of the merCandise

Anvil, Cyrodiil, 29th of Last Seed 3€433


It was around 11 am when Loypuur, now an apprentice of the Fighters guild, entered Lelles’ quality MerCandise. The architectural design of the store was something that Loypuur didn’t get used to yet. In the crystalline towers where he spent most of youth, the ceilings were so high that it was hard to see how far they extend. In Anvil, for instance, ceilings were so low that he had to be careful not to bump his head into them. As he introduced himself to the Breton trader and told him why he had arrived, he couldn’t help but notice that Norbert Lelles wasn’t impressed. Loypuur couldn’t blame him, after all a High Elf wielding a battle axe was not something one could see every day. ‘Perhaps he expected a bulky Nord or tough Orc’. However, Lelles entrusted him with watching over his store and told him to seek him out at The Flowing Bowl when / if he solves the break-ins.

As he left, Loypuur felt that gentle feeling of being a little nervous. It happened rarely that he was entrusted with something important and although Lelles told him that break-ins happen during the night, Loypuur decided to take his assignment very seriously and patrol also during the day. When he thoroughly searched for all possible entrances to the store, he sat down in a wooden chair behind the counter. From the chair he had a good view at the back entrance and the main room at the same time.

To pass the time, he read Provinces of Tamriel and admitted that a description of his homeland was quite accurate:

»… and the natives are unwelcoming to foreigners, so the ancient, chivalric high culture of the Aldmeri is little affected by modern Imperial mercantilism«

Yes, very true. Loypuur sometimes wondered if he should consider himself as a mistake of the nature since he was not alike majority of his race. When his brothers and sisters were practicing magic, he was skipping the lessons and preferred spending time with his father’s warriors. At first they thought that Loypuur’s father, a powerful and cruel mage, is sending his son down to spy on them but once they realized that Loypuur is with them at his own will, they gladly accepted him. Even when Loypuur saw that not all of them were performing their duties as they should and didn’t turn them in, some of them especially their superior Khedira, repaid his kindness – they taught him what he wanted to do the most –to fight. To feel like a true warrior. Loypuur smiled whenever he remembered those warriors but his smile waned because he always remembered their demise. The demise for which he was responsible. He suddenly heard the door creaking and his thoughts quickly shifted from past to present… someone just entered.

As it turned out, it was one of the customers - Mirabelle Monet whom Loypuur had yesterday while looking for Pinarus. Loypuur explained to her that the shop is closed today but Mirabelle decided to spend some there nonetheless. Loypuur didn’t object of course, he preferred some company and although they were mostly silent, Loypuur often took a look at her. A quilted doublet fit her nicely. He received two more visits during the watch. The next one was S’shani, a Khajiit whom he met at The Count’s Arms. And the last one was no other than Quill-Weave, famous writer whose secret was safe with Loypuur. High Elf had to admit to himself that he made quite some ‘friends’ in his short stay in the Imperial Province - folk in Anvil was nice and easy-going.

He had a supper at the counter and since nighttime was slowly approaching, he decided to equip the rest of his battle gear – rusty gauntlets and a helmet. He positioned himself next to the display case in the corner to have even better control over the store. As he noticed his reflection in the glass of the display case, he leaned closer to see how he looks like – and once again he had to admit that he couldn’t look intimidating no matter what. Rusty helm made his bright blue eyes even more noticeable and his very thin face looked even thinner. Loypuur wondered if he’ll look the same clumsy in the Arena. In the end, that’s why he came to Cyrodiil. To prove to himself that he can succeed as a warrior. As a fighter. As a duelist.

Back in Summerset Isles, a Redguard warrior Khedira, who worked for Loypuur’s father, once called him a ‘duelist’ because Loypuur was very good with a mace in an amateur duel against Khedira’s kid Sami. The name stuck with Loypuur and he later became a trainee of the afore-mentioned Khedira. So despite his non-intimidating appearance Loypuur was (for a High Elf) quite skilled with blunt weapons. The only weakness, as told by his mentor Khedira, was that Loypuur hesitated too long before attacking. He was too often dodging the attacks and moving around instead of being offensive. But when he attacked – nothing could stop him. Loypuur smiled when he remembered his mentor and his son but once again his smile waned away. And once again he heard the door creaking…

He quickly turned around and noticed a bulky Nord sneaking inside. ‘Now, now, what do we have here’ thought Loypuur and stepped in front of the Nord.

“Good evening! What are you doing in the store so late?”

“Just go away!” the rogue Nord said gruffly.

Loypuur needed no other proof – this was the burglar and he caught him in the act. Nord seemed confused as he was now crouching and looking from one direction to another, obviously without any idea what to do.

“I think you’re the one who should go away. Or better yet, come with me. To the guards, that is.”

“I’ve got nothing more to say to you!” replied Nord and Loypuur noticed that the burglar is losing his nerves.

“In that case… I… must make you leave,” answered Loypuur with a shy smile. He decided not to whack the Nord with an axe, after all he was not a murderer and the Nord perhaps wasn’t either. Instead he readied his fists and ‘pushed’ Storn the Burly towards the exit.

“Whaaaaat?!” screamed Nord, pulled out his long-sword and smashed Loypuur. ‘The Nord obviously wants it the hard way’. Loypuur readied his silver axe and hit him, sending him a few meters back. But since he didn’t want to splatter Nord’s blood all over the store, he decided to lure him outside. Besides, guards outside will definitely be able to arrest the short-tempered Nord. As it turned out, the Nord wasn’t alone - here were a Bosmer and a Dunmer waiting outside and they immediately joined their accomplice in attacking Loypuur. High Elf was running backwards, intentionally dodging or blocking the attacks of the trio. He remembered his master Khedira’s words – “Don’t hesitate, Loypuur! Block and attack!” He wanted to but he couldn’t! He didn’t like killing common burglars even if they turned out to be murderers. Loypuur was instead hoping that a guard close to the gate will notice him being attacked and will attempt to arrest the trio.

His predictions were correct and as they got closer to the main gate, the guard joined the fight! ‘This Nord just won’t let me go!’ thought Loypuur because a bulky Nord ignored the guard and continued smashing towards him. Loypuur noticed that both Dunmer and Bosmer were attacking the guard who was now outnumbered and now it was time to stop this!
“Don’t hesitate, Loypuur! Block and attack!” And he did exactly so – he blocked an incoming Nord’s attack and then with one well-placed swing ended the burglar’s life. Loypuur was a bit shocked as Nord’s body lifelessly fell to the wooden ground… it’s been a few years since he killed someone… but now was not the time for the past! Now he needed to help the guard! With a few swings from his now bloody silver axe he weakened a Bosmer and Dunmer and the guard was thus able to finish them off on his own. It was done – the persons responsible for break-ins were dealt with but unfortunately it ended in bloodshed.

As Loypuur was walking over to The Flowing Bowl to inform Lelles about the situation, he got some doubts. ‘Will I succeed in the Arena? I dislike killing, even if it involves burglars or murderers. How much do I even know about the Arena? Very little… apart from what I heard from occasional travelers and adventurers that were passing through Firsthold. There should be even more killing. Duel until death. But on the other hand there must be certain charm in all of this… Guess I won’t be any smarter until I see and experience it with my own eyes… and blood.’

Norbert Lelles was overjoyed when he heard that the burglars have been dealt with. It was a shame that it had to end in bloodshed and while Loypuur agreed, there was no other choice – the burglars were prepared to kill anyone just to get away. Loypuur wondered whether all bandits in Cyrodiil are the same, being over-confident in their abilities even when it’s obvious that they’re going to lose. Sounds like High-Elven attitude. After receiving his payment, Loypuur headed to the Fighters Guild where he decided to spend a night free of charge. He needed to save some septims to afford a healing spell from Trevaia in the chapel and thus he couldn’t afford to pay 25 gold for a room at The Count’s Arms. Besides that, he wanted to save some more gold. Loypuur didn’t know for what exactly, perhaps for some better armor like steel cuirass, boots or helmet… He decided to search for some more work in the morning. At first he’ll pay a visit to the lighthouse, perhaps there will be someone this time and if not… he remembered a desperate looking lady of his race standing on a ship at the docks. Perhaps she’s a damsel in distress and needs a hero to save her!


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post Mar 27 2013, 02:24 PM
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I like the way Loypuur’s wandering thoughts while he was waiting filled in some of his background.

Oh, and I like the way he lured the burglars outside hoping to not have to kill them. smile.gif




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post Mar 27 2013, 03:16 PM
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Thanks, Grits - time for two new stories.

Two damsels in distress

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As Loypuur slowly began to wake up, he noticed someone standing next to his bed staring at him. He slowly opened his eyes, pretending to be asleep and saw Huurwen, a fellow guild member. ‘Must be because I’m sleeping in my loincloth only’ thought Loypuur, quite delighted that there was someone actually looking at him while being almost naked. He decided to lie still for a few more minutes. Huurwen eventually wandered off and now it was time to stand up and look for more work!

He slept well in a company of fellow guild members, the only shame being that Vigdis who was sleeping in a bed beside his, preferred sleeping in her clothes while Sten the Ugly, who was also sleeping in a bed beside his, preferred sleeping in his loincloth. And while Loypuur was glad to have a bed free of charge, he didn’t foresee his long-term future in the guild. Perhaps he wouldn’t even join if not being locked out of his room two days ago. As much as Loypuur liked being a warrior, he never fancied guilds, instead he imagined himself as a knight on a white horse, saving pretty damsels in distress.

Getting lost in dreams was something that Loypuur was very good at and before he ‘woke up’ he already arrived to the lighthouse, hoping to get some work. But yet again, there was no one and he decided not to waste time and instead headed for the ship in the docks on whose deck he saw a noble-looking lady. She was a High Elf like him and not particularly good-looking. But she was in a distress nonetheless! As she told Loypuur, a crystal ball was being kept in the ship but she couldn’t reach it because the ship was haunted. Apparently someone murdered the whole crew and now restless spirits of the slain sailors were trying to kill anyone that entered the ship.

Loypuur decided to help the lady, since he had some experiences killing the undead. Thanks to master Khedira, he knew that only silver weapons can harm undead and Loypuur already had a silver axe. He silently entered the cabin and immediately sensed a presence of something sinister. Not only the stench of the dead but also strange blue light that was emanating through the closed door of captain’s bedroom. He waited for a few seconds, thinking that whatever is on the other side, might perhaps open the door but that didn’t happen.

‘Loypuur, you have to be quick now. No hesitating… no dodging… just go ahead and attack!’

After he encouraged himself, he stormed through the door and almost ‘bumped’ into a spectral apparition. There was no time to admire the ghost’s sword or its spooky face… Loypuur swung his silver axe two times and it was enough… a green gas was getting out of the ghost, leaving only a glowing slime behind. Now he had some time to look around. There was a corpse of a dead msn, presumably the captain, on the bed and blood was everywhere around. ‘Whoever murdered him, must be a cruel person’ as he bent over the corpse, checking for something of importance. He found two keys of which one was identical to the one given to him by the lady while the other one obviously opened something else. What exactly, Loypuur decided to find out later. Now it was time to send the restless sailors to eternal rest.

The spectral sailors didn’t give him much trouble and apart from few scars and bruises, he dispatched of them quickly. If Loypuur found a scene in the captain’s cabin to be gruesome, then the discovery on the lower deck was even more so. All sailors were covered in blood and were obviously suffering before they died. Sometimes it looked like the murderer dragged the corpses and put them in unnatural positions like on a small table or over the barrels. But Loypuur wasn’t there to catch the murderer and he didn’t even intend to – this was a task for the guards. He retrieved a crystal ball from the chest and returned it to the lady on the deck. He was rewarded with a warm smile and enchanted cutlass and Loypuur immediately saw this as a great opportunity to earn a few more septims.

He flinged the cutlass in the air so it turned around and hoped to catch it but he threw it too high and the cutlass almost ended in the sea below. Loypuur quickly checked around if someone saw his incompetence of catching the cutlass but obviously people on the docks were too occupied with other things. There was only one thing to do at the haunted ship – find out which keyhole does the captain’ key fit in. He returned to the cabin and quickly found a locked chest. Loypuur unlocked it and found… a hundred gold! Was it his right to take it? Should he leave it there for the authorities to take it? … Loypuur checked around if there’s someone in the room although he already knew that beside the slain captain and remains of the ghost there was none. ‘Dead don’t need gold, do they? And the authorities did nothing to put those poor souls to rest’ he said and placed the gold in his purse.

After a meal at The Flowing Bowl in a company of a guild member Rhano, Loypuur headed to the chapel and had enough septims to buy so called Heal major wounds spell. Since it was afternoon, he decided to look for some more work at the other ship in the docks. But as it turned out, the entrance to the cabin was tightly locked and there was no one on the deck. ‘I can as well take it easy until the evening’ figured Loypuur and went for a short stroll through lovely Anvil. As he came close to the chapel, he decided to visit the castle. He heard a rumor about the countess who apparently lost her husband many years ago. ‘Must be a competent woman to run the town like Anvil on her own’ thought Loypuur as he entered the castle’s hall. After admiring pictures of Anvil and its vicinity in the large foyer he went to the other room where a counters herself was sitting. There was complete silence in the room and Loypuur had a feeling similar to one in the chapel.

He introduced himself to the beautiful countess Millona but was careful not to act too seductive for two reasons. First one being that she was a countess and second one that her bodyguard was right behind him and Loypuur didn’t know what the penalties for flirting with the countess are. His services were obviously not required at the castle and he took a slow walk back to the mainland. After admiring the sunset from the bridge he remembered seeing a farm not far from Anvil’s main gate. Loypuur spent a lot of time gardening in his past and he had quite some knowledge about flora of Tamriel. But as it turned out, his help regarding gardening was not needed here, instead the farm owner Maeva the Buxom (‘a dominate-looking Nord with big boobies’ thought Loypuur) was recently abandoned by her husband, some guy called Bjalfi the contemptible. ‘Hmm… what kind of name is that?’

But that was not the problem – the problem was that Bjalfi escaped with a mace that obviously belonged to Maeva before the marriage. Loypuur wondered whether Maeva really wants that mace back or is just desperate because her husband didn’t escape with a lover but with… a mace! ‘Strange times’ thought High Elf but decided to look for the mace in a nearby Fort Strand tomorrow. He remembered seeing this fort from the bridge linking Anvil and the castle so he shouldn’t have any difficulties finding it. Since Maeva the Very Buxom didn’t mind his company, he joined her for a supper and although she was telling him about her husband all the time, the supper was good nonetheless. Loypuur once again agreed that Nords are good cooks, no matter if they are contemptible or buxom.

It was late as he left the farm and slowly headed to the guild. When he arrived, most of guild members were already asleep but unfortunately this time everyone was sleeping in their clothes. Well since Loypuur just couldn’t sleep in his clothes and since there was a chest beside his bed that definitely served a purpose for storing the equipment in, he undressed, leaned a silver battle axe against the wall and lied down in his bed. Before falling asleep, he was hoping to be awakened in the same manner as today… that is being observed by some guild member, preferably a female one.

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post Mar 27 2013, 03:18 PM
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The buxom widow

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As Loypuur slowly opened his eyes, he once again noticed someone standing close to the bed. As he opened them a little more, he saw… Azzan! ‘Oops, no time to sleep anymore’ he thought, quickly stood up and got dressed. There was no time to waste as his plan for today was to look for Bjalfi the Contemptible in nearby Fort Strand.

As he was approaching the old fort, Loypuur noticed that there wasn’t much of a fort left apart from some ruined towers. But he didn’t have a lot of time to study the fort because he was ‘greeted’ by an aggressive Dunmer swordswoman.

“Good morning! I’m here to look for Bjalfi…”
*Dark Elf swings with a sword, Loypuur jumps back*
“Calm down now! As I said, I have some business with Bja…”
*Dark Elf swings once again and hits Loypuur*

“Well if you insist!” Loypuur got angry, readied his silver axe and after one powerful strike the Dark Elf was dealt with. As she fell to the ground, he suddenly felt a piercing pain striking his left arm. He was just hit by an arrow! He noticed a Bosmer archer inside the fort courtyard that was getting ready for another shot. Loypuur had barely enough time to jump to side and hide behind the stony wall. While Bosmer was quick and agile and Loypuur was just the opposite in his heavy armor, he had difficulties catching the Bosmer archer who was successfully running away from him. In the end, Loypuur cornered the Bosmer at a nearby rock and finished him off.

‘Now that was a kind welcome! I suspect that all residents of Fort Strand are the same.’
And he was correct. But this time Loypuur was ready and he didn’t even try to talk some sense into marauders’ heads. He didn’t hesitate when attacking… and marauders, whether they were Wood Elves, Nords, Argonians or his race fell one by one. He found an iron cuirass and a helmet on some shelves and decided to replace it for his rusty one. Of course Loypuur could just take the full set of iron armor from numerous slain marauders but he didn’t feel like taking from the dead. Besides, most of cuirasses wouldn’t fit him either, because they were crafted for smaller people and Loypuur was very tall. Eventually he came across the Nord wearing a better armor than the others – steel greaves and boots. But Loypuur also noticed that this Nord was carrying an unusual looking mace at his belt. ‘Must be Bjalfi the Contemptible. Let’s hope I can talk some sense into his thick head.’

But it was in vain – as soon as Loypuur initiated a conversation, the Nord attacked but he turned out not be particularly tough opponent and Loypuur finished him with a few swings. “May you find peace which you couldn’t find on this world, Bjalfi” said Loypuur as he was standing next to the dead Nord. ‘I just made one woman out there a widow…’ and the feeling wasn’t exactly great but then again, he had no choice. He picked up the mace on which initials of Maeva and Bjalfi were engraved and decided to return to Whitmond farm.

On his way out he became careless and he stepped on a pressure plate that activated a swinging mace which heavily hit Loypuur in the back. Luckily his newly acquired iron cuirass eased the blow but his back will probably hurt for a few days. On his way to Whitmond he opened a bottle of cold beer that he found in a chest and was slowly drinking it, not only to ease the pain but to feel a bit better because he never killed so many people at once. Although all of them deserved it, Loypuur wasn’t used to killing and he wasn’t sure how Maeva will react to the news about husband’s death.

As it turned out, she was happy to see her mace returned and didn’t really care much about her husband. She ‘dedicated’ him a few ‘touchy’ words but obviously didn’t have any intention to take care of the funeral or see her husband for one last time. Her reaction surprised Loypuur as he was sure that Maeva will be at least a little sadder but in the end he didn’t know what their relationship was like in the beginning. ‘Guess they didn’t love each other from the start.’

Sun was slowly setting as he arrived to Anvil and after he performed some repairs at Morvayn’s Peacemakers and purchased new iron boots, he headed for The Flowing Bowl to have a late dinner. He was not in a good mood, the scenes of killing marauders were still too vivid in his mind and he bought a bottle of cheap wine to relax a little. Not even Isolde could improve his mood and after a dinner he headed to Lelles’ store to sell some old and buy some new stuff. He sold rusty iron greaves and purchased tan linens. His current battle outfit consists of complete set of iron armor except for tan linens which Loypuur prefers over greaves. Since he didn’t feel like heading to Guild yet although he should probably rest because his back pain was getting more intense, he instead headed for a short walk east of Anvil.

There he discovered a unique standing stone, definitely one of numerous about which he read about in The New Doomstones series from Quill-Weave. He decided his fate to be led by The Lady and gained a lesser power, which boosted his endurance and willpower when casted. ‘Could be helpful for the Arena.’ He made a short walk to a nearby shrine and found out that it belongs to Mara. After a short prayer Loypuur decided to return to the Guild. He was feeling a bit better when walking to the town, perhaps a gift from The Lady and a prayer to Mara helped. It was already the 1st of Heartfire as he came to Anvil and apart from a few guards and a sailor the town was empty and silent. And silent was the Fighters Guild as well since most of the members were already sleeping. And while Loypuur was exhausted and had heavy back pain, he still had enough strength to check, who the beauty in blue velvet outfit sleeping in a bed beside his was. ‘Ah, it’s that Dunmer. Forgot her name, starts with L… Llensi… Llernsi… Llansi… Lllll….’ Too tired to think about her name, Loypuur fell asleep in a second.

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post Mar 27 2013, 04:13 PM
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QUOTE(Lopov @ Mar 23 2013, 11:50 AM) *

. It was funny and memorable day and thinking back Loypuur came to a conclusion that if Wilbur hadn’t locked him out of his room in the morning, then mountain lions would have killed madam Thelas’ rats.


Funny how little things like this happen in a virtual world, you know? This portion of the tale (where Loypuur is in Anvil) reminds me of Eldar, when he cursed the rats, Pinarus and his shirt, etc. laugh.gif I still remember that moment from months ago.

I am far behind on this (and all the other reading I've been doing) but you know me. I'll catch up!

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post Mar 29 2013, 04:23 PM
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Getting ready for departure

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Loypuur woke up around 12 am and while most of his guild members were already busy, he decided to take it easy! Back pain wasn’t gone yet and he wasn’t in a mood for stretching either, besides he needed to think about the latest events and plans for the future. After all, he hasn’t arrived to Cyrodiil to admire beautiful sunsets at The Gold Coast or flirting with exotic Redguard lasses, at least not in first place.

He sat down on a stony bench under a tree in front of The Count’s Arms, crossed his legs, leaned his head a little back and closed his eyes. He could feel the warm sun on his cheeks and heard a murmur of someone talking in the distance. On occasion he heard a sound of heavy boots chinking which meant that a guard must have passed him.

He came to Cyrodiil a few days ago with 200 septims and now, few days after, he had barely 35 in his pocket. Although he hoped to earn more, he didn’t worry either, after all he bought a very valuable silver battle axe and powerful healing spell. Loypuur disliked casting spells but sometimes his knowledge of basic alternating and restoring spells could come in handy. And while his magicka reservoir was huge, he didn’t regenerate it – the curse of The Atronach. Another reason why he was a shame to his family – a mage who doesn’t regenerate his magicka! While his family couldn’t get over it, Loypuur had no real problems… he never felt that he was a mage. Problem solved.

But his thoughts shift to past too many times! It was because of the Arena that he arrived to Cyrodiil. And he wasn’t any closer to it by spending his days in Anvil. It’s just that Loypuur hoped to earn more septims to buy better equipment. But as it looked like, his iron armor will have to do in the Arena. Or perhaps he will get a special armor there, just for the combatants? That he didn’t know. In fact he didn’t know a lot about the Arena at all, apart from few facts and rumors that he heard back in The Summerset Isles.

It was time to depart for the Imperial City and this was when Loypuur suddenly became… afraid. He had no idea about Cyrodiil in general and didn’t know where the Imperial city was. He saw a signpost outside Anvil and he could only hope that there are more of them on the main roads. He didn’t know how long will it take him to get there… days, weeks? Will he survive it? He wasn’t used to long marches… the only marches that he attended were those when he joined master Khedira and his army. Loypuur intentionally behaved badly on occasion so his father didn’t take him with him on his ‘journeys.’ ‘Well that is, if executions count as journeys’. While his father was convinced that he punished Loypuur by leaving him home, he had in fact made him happy! Because those were the only occasions when he had joined master Khedira and his soldiers and participated in fighting. Since he was very young at that time and since master Khedira didn’t want his superior’s son to get hurt, they mostly let him deal with weak enemies but Loypuur nonetheless felt like a true warrior!

Yet again he remembered his past! So as told before, he wasn’t used to long marches and he was afraid that he might get tired too often on his way to the capital. How much food shall he take with him? Where will he sleep if he doesn’t find an inn or a town? Will he survive the attacks of bandits and wild animals? How will he find himself up in the capital of Tamriel? But then again, these thoughts and fear of the unknown made Loypuur eagerly anticipate his departure! Scared on one hand, curious about his future on the other hand, Loypuur realized that he won’t be any smarter by sitting on the bench. It was decided – tomorrow, on the 2nd of Heartfire, he will depart Anvil as soon as he gets up.

He had basic iron armor, a quality silver battle axe, 35 gold and he’ll take some food from the Guild. If there won’t be enough of it in the Guild, he may visit The Flowing Bowl to purchase additional supplies which means that he may leave Anvil with much less than 35 septims. After one last walk to the shrine of Mara to admire the sunset, young adventurer returned to the Guild and went to sleep.

He must be in a good condition for what awaits him!

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post Mar 29 2013, 04:25 PM
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Burnt trees

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It was around 10:30 am that Loypuur left Anvil. He could feel that he was postponing the departure for as long as possible… first he went to buy some food although he already took a lot from the Guild. Then he went to the chapel and prayed to Mara who rewarded him with a boost of willpower and a warm Divine smile. Only after that, when he really didn’t have anything else to do, young High Elf left Anvil and looked back on more than one occasion – he really grew fond of that town.

Few miles away from Anvil he was approached by a Khajiit highwayman who demanded all of his money. Loypuur had 12 gold in his pockets and he told a Khajiit that he doesn’t have any. It didn’t help, a Khajiit attacked him nonetheless and Loypuur killed him with the silver battle axe. For some reason the Khajiit’s weapon was poisoned with a personality draining poison – Loypuur didn’t understand why would a road bandit lower his personality but each to their own.

He bought more food at The Brina Cross Inn and continued his journey. Soon after that, he noticed a town located high on his left and trees around it looked burnt. And it looked like the town walls were burnt as well but they could as well be so dark – Loypuur couldn’t say for sure from the distance. When he came to a signpost, he found out that the town on his left must be Kvatch. He was in a dilemma whether to continue and have a meal somewhere in the nature or stop at Kvatch. After some pondering he decided to visit the town, curious why the trees around it were burnt.

After making only a few steps on the road to Kvatch he bumped into one of his race… and he seemed very delusional! He was rambling about a town in flames, Daedra from the gate and everyone being dead… Loypuur couldn’t ask anything more because the High Elf immediately ran away. ‘Now what was he talking about? A town destroyed, Daedra from Oblivion, …I should go and see what’s going on there but I guess he was drunk… Everything seems quiet down here.’

And so Loypuur went on…

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post Mar 29 2013, 07:24 PM
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QUOTE(Lopov @ Mar 29 2013, 11:25 AM) *

For some reason the Khajiit’s weapon was poisoned with a personality draining poison – Loypuur didn’t understand why would a road bandit lower his personality but each to their own.


*laughs* Yeah, 'cause lowering Personality is soo important during a melee fight! laugh.gif

Very cool to see you're continuing this, scoundrel. Have a happy Easter.



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post Mar 29 2013, 07:53 PM
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QUOTE(Renee Gade IV @ Mar 29 2013, 07:24 PM) *

Very cool to see you're continuing this, scoundrel. Have a happy Easter.


Thank you and likewise!


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post Mar 31 2013, 09:48 AM
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I'm really enjoying this!!...

Although, every time I almost catch up, you post more!!... laugh.gif ...I'll definately get there though, it's brilliant stuff...

I've missed just wandering around Anvil, though I've never done some of the quests there...

I must compliment you on your ability to tell stories in a different language...Absolutely amazing...I've barely got a decent enough grasp of english biggrin.gif , so the idea of trying something in a second one is terrifying...Well done to you!!...

Amazing, looking forward to much more...

Nice one!!...

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post Mar 31 2013, 01:18 PM
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Thanks for your compliments, McBadgere.

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I must compliment you on your ability to tell stories in a different language...Absolutely amazing...I've barely got a decent enough grasp of english biggrin.gif , so the idea of trying something in a second one is terrifying...Well done to you!!..


Yes, it takes quite some of my free time, basically because I re-read a story many times before I decide to post it and probablyI even then I don't notice every mistake. Unfortunately my vocabulary is limited when it comes to certain aspects, for instance I'm bad at writing combats because I lack appropriate words.

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Although, every time I almost catch up, you post more!!.


My problem is that my game is quite some days ahead of my updates and sometimes I have difficulties writing the past events, especially since I want to have most of the days covered in the stories. "Luckily", I didn't have a lot of time to game during Easter and I had at least partialy dealt with writing backlog so there are some new stories coming up.

Thanks once again and I hope you'll enjoy Loypuur's adventures in future as well.



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post Mar 31 2013, 01:26 PM
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The Hero of Kvatch

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Loypuur woke up, covered in sweat. His heart was beating so fast that he had a feeling it would jump out of his chest. Everything around him was dark. ‘Where am I?’ he asked himself and noticed he’s lying on a bed. ‘A bed?’ He quickly jumped out of the bed and while doing so, knocked something down, so it fell to the floor with a loud sound. ‘What was that?’ – he began to look for whatever he knocked down. Then he noticed a window, a large window… he noticed stars on the clear night sky… and then he saw the stables on the courtyard below. Then he remembered…

‘The inn… I’m at the inn… Gottshaw inn.’

He sat back on the bed, breathing deeply. His eyes were slowly getting adapted to the darkness and he could see more clearly… his iron helmet that he knocked on the floor, was lying in the corner… his wool shirt was on a top of the drawers… in the next corner was his damaged iron armor, small silver axe and a shield… a shield with an emblem of the wolf – the shield of Kvatch.

“Kvatch…” whispered Loypuur… but like the battle for Kvatch was not enough, he now had a nightmare. A strange nightmare, partly related to Kvatch and partly to some old man with the amulet. Loypuur tried as best as he could to remember the nightmare…

… he was among the smoke and fire of Oblivion, fighting alongside Savlian Matius, Tierra and Berich Inian Hordes of scamps, clanfears, Dremora churl warriors and casters were coming from all directions. They were fighting fiercely but they were outnumbered. His friends fell one by one… first Berich, when a disgusting scamp stuck its claws through his chest… second Tierra when a clanfear pushed her into a lava pool… third Savlian whose skull was crushed by churl’s mace… then the Daedra stopped and looked at Loypuur. They slowly made a circle around him… Loypuur knew the end was near. As they swarmed on him, he closed his eyes… nothing? Why is nothing happening?

‘Quickly, this way!’

Loypuur opened his eyes. He was not in the portal of Oblivion anymore. Instead, a strong Redguard in ornate looking heavy armor grabbed his shoulder and was leading him down a corridor. It looked like sewers. There was an old man running next to Loypuur, wearing noble clothes and red amulet. Loypuur saw that amulet before but couldn’t remember where? Before he could ask where they are going, they were attacked… faceless people in red robes attacked out of nowhere, casted an unusual looking armor on them and attacked with bound weapons… Loypuur had no weapon and he had to attack the enemies with bare fists… when he successfully knocked down one of the attackers, he felt a hand on his shoulder… he turned around fast, ready to punch the attacker but it was the old man… he was holding Loypuur’s hand and handed him the amulet. Then he mumbled something that started with letter ‘J’ but Loypuur couldn’t understand it… as he asked the old man what was he trying to say, a blade pierced through old man’s chest, blood splattering on Loypuur’s face. Behind him a man in conjured armor was standing, laughing wickedly from under his mask.

‘Nooooooooooooooooo….!’ shouted the strong Redguard and attacked the assassin. Loypuur tried to help the Redguard but suddenly everything around him began to fade away… walls were disappearing and fire was coming from behind them… he could smell the smoke and the smell of burnt bodies… is he going back to Oblivion? Then everything around him burst, the strong light blinded him and everything became silent… is he safe? He didn’t dare to open his eyes yet… everything was still silent… Loypuur slowly opened his eyes. There was someone standing in front of him… but who? When he finally opened his eyes, he noticed… a Dremora! Staring at him with evil look and bloody mace in his hand.
‘Die, mortal! Die!’ And with one strong blow he crushed Loypuur's skull!


That’s how Loypuur remembered his nightmare. He had no idea who the old man was… what was he trying to say… and what was that amulet… he remembered seeing it somewhere before but he couldn’t remember where… who were the men in red robes? Why were they faceless? Too many questions… and not an answer to any of them.

It started to dawn and sunlight slowly brightened the small room in the Gottshaw Inn. With the coming light, Loypuur noticed numerous wounds and burns on his skin. That was not surprising… since he just fought the battle of his life. Although he slept for at least twelve hours, he still felt tired. But more than that… he felt sad. Sad because he remembered brave and good people that had died in Kvatch. Ironically, he was proclaimed the hero of that town. Loypuur couldn’t help but laugh at the irony of it although his laugh was a bitter one. ‘An amateur like me saving the town!’

And although that was a nightmare, it was not a dream… his wounds and vivid memories of burnt people, man in the cage, scamps, clanfears, dremora warriors, blood fountains, dusty towers and many more convinced him that he, Loypuur, was a part of it. He needed air, fresh air, to calm down and recollect his thoughts.



Few hours later he was slowly walking towards Anvil, his wounds preventing him to move any faster. Apart from his gauntlets which were too damaged, the rest of his armor was possible to repair and Loypuur decided to perform the repairs at Morvayn’s Peacemakers. He didn’t plan to return to Anvil so soon but it was necessary.

Thinking back he had absolutely no idea from where did he gain the courage to enter the Oblivion gate. He wasn’t convinced that he’d do it the second time, not because he would be selfish but because he wasn’t prepared for the horrors again. Perhaps it was the mention of ‘people trapped inside the town’ that persuaded Loypuur to enter the gate. He remembered that he said to Savlian: “If there are people to be saved, then I’m going through that gate!” He didn’t regret his decision but he was still asking himself how did he manage. He just couldn’t understand – an amateur like him… entered the Oblivion gate… fought through the hordes of Daedra and ascended their bloody towers… removed the Sigil stone and closed the gate… and while these memories made him feel proud, there were also sad memories…

…like the one of Kvatch soldier Ilend Vonius being slain by a clanfear. Or the man in the cage whose name Loypuur didn’t know but who told him how to close the portal… ‘What was your name, unknown hero… what was your name?’… probably he’ll never find the answer to that. Because no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t break through the brood cage in which the old man was being kept and was forced to let him to whatever fate awaited him.

…flashback… a burnt hand sticking out of lava pool holding a silver axe. Loypuur didn’t know who the burnt man was but it was like he wanted to give him the weapon. Although he had his large silver battle-axe, it offered him almost no protection against running clanfears… Loypuur carefully took the dead man’s axe and a shield with Kvatch emblem from fallen Ilend Vonius. Wearing this shield and this axe made him feel stronger and he felt better knowing that the last things his enemies will see - will be his silver axe and an emblem of the town which they destroyed! This very axe and this very shield were still with him, accompanying him to Anvil.

…flashback… how victorious did he feel after closing the gate… only to find out that the battle for Kvatch had just began. Luckily they managed to get all civilians to safety – a brave Redguard warrior Tierra helped them to the refugee camp. But remembering Tierra made Loypuur remember Jesan Rilian… brave Imperial whom he talked to in the chapel… and who was slain when overwhelmed by three scamps at the castle Kvatch courtyard… ‘Jesan Rilian died because of dirty tactics used by Daedra – they couldn’t finish him alone so they grouped and attacked him together – cowards!’

…flashback… Jesan’s death made Loypuur go mad and he didn’t care about his wounds anymore, he just went on and slew everyone in his path, from scamps to clanfears and Dremora Churls. And while he couldn’t help Jesan anymore, he saved another life… that of Berich Inian. Inside the castle, Berich was overwhelmed by a clanfear and two scamps. Loypuur hurried to him and attacked the clanfear, distracting it. Then he repeated the procedure with two scamps – the end result was that all three attacked him, leaving Berich Inian alone which was exactly what Loypuur wanted. He finished off the Daedra and could see the gratitude in Berich’s eyes.

…flashback… after he killed a scamp, Loypuur bent over to the dead man in noble clothes… it was Ormellius Goldwine – Count Kvatch. They were too late… a few minutes later when he reported the count’s death to Savlian and was proclaimed The Hero of Kvatch… he felt nothing. Nothing. Only sadness, anger and pain because they couldn’t save more lives. In the end only Savlian Matius, Berich Inian, Tierra, civilians and he remained. All the others – dead. He took Savlian’s Kvatch cuirass but was already decided what he will do with it.

…Loypuur dimly remembered what happened after that. He was still shocked because of the whole situation and he remembered that he left Kvatch. He met a priest on the road down, who was talking about numerous portals and something about a balance being disrupted but Loypuur couldn’t listen to him. He was very tired and didn’t know when he slept for the last time - probably in Anvil on the day when he departed for the Imperial City. Well, he didn’t make it very far and he definitely didn’t expect his journey to the capital begin like it had. He managed to get to the Gottshaw inn and fell asleep immediately.



"Yes, that’s how it happened" said Loypuur as he finally managed to recollect his thoughts. He still couldn’t remember what he old man said to him and he still didn’t know where he saw the amulet before. Anvil was already seen in the distance. Loypuur checked the Kvatch cuirass and found out that it’s enchanted. ‘I will put it to good use… then I’ll return to Kvatch’ thought young High Elf as he was approaching the town.

Sun was shining high in the sky as The Hero of Kvatch arrived to Anvil.


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