With Fate Uncertain And Bloodstained Hands, Memoirs of Felisa Serhas. Chapter One: Beginning of the end |
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saqin With Fate Uncertain And Bloodstained Hands Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
Olen Good opening, we meet the main character and get a... Sep 25 2009, 08:34 PM saqin I'm afraid you're right about me typing di... Sep 26 2009, 04:43 PM saqin Here you've got the next piece of the story. A... Sep 28 2009, 03:01 PM Olen I like your take on Valen Dreth, quite different f... Sep 28 2009, 03:33 PM saqin He, thanks for pointing out that stupid mistake. I... Sep 28 2009, 05:24 PM saqin Soo, here is the next part. ---------------------... Apr 8 2010, 07:47 AM mALX I am so glad you are updating this! You are of... Apr 8 2010, 05:04 PM Remko A fresh look on an old story.. nice! But the l... Apr 9 2010, 01:24 PM saqin Thanks for the comments, it's good to see that... Apr 12 2010, 03:59 PM Olen Good to see you back at this piece. It's a re... Apr 12 2010, 07:24 PM mALX I like the way you are handling this! Apr 16 2010, 07:01 PM saqin Thanks for the great comments. Did I hear someone... Apr 19 2010, 03:50 PM Remko I was afraid that would happen... I liked it! ... Apr 19 2010, 04:07 PM mALX Oh, I didn't see that coming - HUGE! Grea... Apr 19 2010, 08:23 PM saqin One month was the time he gave me. One month to pr... Aug 8 2010, 01:45 PM mALX ARGH! A cliffhanger! Aug 20 2010, 05:40 PM Rachel the Breton Hmmm, this is turning into quite the interesting s... Aug 25 2010, 01:15 AM saqin Well, here there is more! I didn't have ac... Sep 11 2010, 09:55 AM mALX Really Great Chapter! You use a lot of intere... Sep 12 2010, 05:39 AM treydog That is a wonderfully evocative moment. Really... Sep 12 2010, 12:55 PM saqin Thanks ^^ And well, I kind of already had the end ... Sep 14 2010, 03:05 PM treydog Very powerful, especially at the end. You have th... Sep 14 2010, 09:33 PM mALX ARGH! A black widow spider...a praying mantis... Sep 15 2010, 05:31 PM saqin And so the story continues... [b]Chapter two: Why... Nov 15 2010, 07:38 PM Remko Yay, it's continued :) Loved the parallel line... Nov 16 2010, 11:53 AM mALX The interplay between Felisa and Gasheera was AWES... Nov 17 2010, 01:01 AM saqin Should have another piece coming soon, but in the ... Dec 26 2010, 01:20 PM mALX Should have another piece coming soon, but in the... Dec 26 2010, 02:18 PM Acadian What a pleasure to catch up with you on this! ... Jan 26 2011, 03:41 AM TheOtherRick I just read the whole story to date. What a great ... Jan 26 2011, 08:48 PM saqin mALX: It makes sense that you'd want Janus Has... Jan 27 2011, 08:44 PM TheOtherRick I spoke until he closed his eyes, and then I felle... Jan 27 2011, 09:54 PM Acadian Don't underestimate Gahsheera. After all, he ... Jan 28 2011, 01:27 AM saqin TheOtherRick: :D :P I'm not saying anything...... Jan 28 2011, 09:28 PM Acadian Despite the entrails spilled, this was actually a ... Jan 29 2011, 01:14 AM mALX GAAAAAH !!!! I thought the ... Jan 29 2011, 04:42 AM TheOtherRick B-B-Q kitty entrails...naaaaas-teeee! :P Th... Feb 2 2011, 10:03 PM saqin It was midday when Shadowmere brought us to Cheydi... Feb 13 2011, 09:24 AM Acadian Some more depth on Felisa's history with the D... Feb 14 2011, 01:33 AM TheOtherRick Definitely an interesting encounter between Felisa... Feb 14 2011, 04:35 AM mALX Great paragraph! The intricate balance of t... Feb 18 2011, 06:48 AM saqin Thanks for the good comments, I had quite a lot of... Feb 23 2011, 06:38 PM TheOtherRick [i]Me? I decided to travel a bit. This caught me b... Feb 23 2011, 07:20 PM mALX Powerful ending to this chapter !!... Feb 24 2011, 06:11 AM Zalphon "Because Sithis told me to", you're ... Feb 25 2011, 02:42 AM saqin TheOtherRick & mALX: Thanks :D Zalphon: A b... Mar 29 2011, 02:09 PM Acadian Quite a scheme Sa'Quira has dreamed up and pit... Apr 1 2011, 12:27 AM mALX Love how you added the links at the bottom to help... Apr 2 2011, 11:26 AM saqin Acadian: :D Sa'Quira is actually, if I get to... Apr 7 2011, 02:48 PM mALX Oooh, what an interesting incident !! An... Apr 11 2011, 03:03 PM saqin Emerging from the forest, our eyes came upon a sma... May 5 2011, 02:32 PM saqin http://archive.pixbox.se/arkivet/synligt_3...20/32... May 9 2011, 02:40 PM mALX Poor Jeelius getting the brunt end of a woman... May 29 2011, 07:18 AM saqin [b]Chapter three- Because lies are easy [b]Sa... Jul 2 2011, 07:52 AM mALX Whew! Really Great Write here! My favori... Jul 2 2011, 04:06 PM saqin Felisas' POV We camped by the road the night... Jul 25 2011, 09:11 PM mALX Great inner dialogue here !!! I lo... Jul 29 2011, 08:07 PM Grits “He'd obviously want to see it. What I was tal... Aug 1 2011, 03:53 PM Saquira Sorry about being so far in between posts. I'v... Nov 4 2011, 08:05 PM Acadian I’m so glad to see you continuing this wonderful s... Nov 5 2011, 01:19 AM Grits It was good of Gasheera to admit how Felisa has be... Nov 5 2011, 02:01 PM mALX I'm getting to this A.S.A.P. - had a week of ... Nov 6 2011, 12:00 AM Saquira Sa'Quiras' POV Approaching Bruma beneath ... Nov 7 2011, 06:48 PM Acadian Another enjoyable update! ’The flames surrou... Nov 8 2011, 01:48 AM Saquira Felisas' POV I made my way through the shadow... Nov 26 2011, 10:40 AM McBadgere Excellent story!!...And I don't like t... Nov 26 2011, 08:01 PM Acadian A nice suspenseful buildup, full of description as... Nov 27 2011, 01:55 AM mALX From Sa'Quiras' foretelling visions to the... Nov 27 2011, 02:20 AM Saquira And there be another part (finally)! I'm h... Feb 7 2012, 03:46 PM Saquira Sa'Quira's POV When the bright light subs... Feb 8 2012, 03:45 PM mALX This last chapter is tremendous from beginning to ... Feb 8 2012, 05:47 PM Saquira Thank you :D ----------------------------------... Feb 9 2012, 06:45 PM Saquira I've finally finished the third chapter! ... May 3 2012, 02:27 PM Grits It’s great to see an update for this story! :... May 6 2012, 10:22 AM Saquira Chapter four- I will do whatever I can to keep you... Jul 16 2012, 09:22 AM Acadian Felisa completes her contract inside Bruma, while ... Jul 30 2012, 12:57 AM mALX GAAAAH! Your chapters are too short, they onl... Aug 28 2012, 05:46 AM Saquira Gosh, it's been so long since I made any kind ... Jan 15 2013, 08:18 PM mALX I'm glad you wrapped the story back around to ... Jan 16 2013, 01:19 AM 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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