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sprgckawl
post Jul 16 2005, 10:44 PM
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Production ended a little sooner than I thought tonight, but anyway, this is what I have come up with...created from scratch, respectively. The buttons seem a little out of place, but I couldn't think of anything else to go in those boxes, so that's what I'm most concerned about. Another thing that worries me is size. I run in a 1280x1024 res, and it looks a little small to me, so I'm not sure how other people are viewing it.

Basically, the format would go like: any text news/content could be placed in the content box no problemo, and any large text files (like books, lol) would utilize pop up windows to highlight the piece and keep the user from hitting "back" a lot. This goes the same for screenies etc. This sort of makes more sense to me as the work being viewed would have it's own window and the window would deservingly have a title. Admittingly, I'm biased towards pop up windows cause that's how I surf the net (never "back" only, "right click > open in new").

Anyway, have a look, note some suggestions or whatever. If I get no feedback, I'm sending this to troika to forward to someone who knows PSP to chop and make into a HTML website. Enjoy:

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post Jul 16 2005, 10:59 PM
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well it certainly looks very good.....nice layout and design....yup I like it very much...


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post Jul 16 2005, 11:59 PM
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But what do you think of the buttons? Little out of place, or is it just me?

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post Jul 17 2005, 12:19 AM
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QUOTE(sprgckawl @ Jul 17 2005, 12:59 AM)
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But what do you think of the buttons? Little out of place, or is it just me?
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Hehe..well they are too modern maybe...you should try to make some oblivion-style ones instead..meaning the same thing though


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post Jul 17 2005, 01:04 AM
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ooh ooh going off of Minque's idea for the waiting room mabey you could put Akatosh's symbol, you know, the god of time and all.


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post Jul 17 2005, 01:11 AM
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It's good, it's good! Perhaps using Akatosh's symbol would do wonders too. wink.gif


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post Jul 17 2005, 02:53 AM
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post Jul 17 2005, 04:03 AM
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Hmm it looks mighty small to me O.o

But anyways i agree that the buttons look out of place. I suggest instead of a folder witht he books, why not have a bookshelf with books.

as for the holding pen i'm not sure. what goes into the holding pen? works to be reviewed? If so mayb an open piece of parchment with a quill sitting on the parchment that is half filled with writing then ends midsentence. and have nice little ink blots whre the quill is sitting. not sure if that makes sense.


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post Jul 17 2005, 06:44 AM
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Perhaps point me in the direction of a picture or something of this Akatosh? Something I can use or modify smile.gif

Good stuff people, let's keep it comin...
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post Jul 17 2005, 05:20 PM
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courtesy of The Imperial Library

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post Jul 19 2005, 01:08 AM
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Thanks Soul.

I'll let you guys see the results as soon as I get something worthy of being shown. Thanks again for the input.
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post Jul 19 2005, 03:33 AM
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post Jul 21 2005, 02:39 AM
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Okay ladies and gents, with new and improved revisions:

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Thoughts, criticisms, feedback etc etc. All is welcome, and I'll take everyone's opinions into consideration. Oh and sorry for the few days it took me to do this 30 minutes of work tongue.gif
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post Jul 21 2005, 03:30 AM
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very nice two questions though

1) is that big area, with the more|less in it, going to be an updates section?

2)what is the holding pen image?



Edit: p.s. I probebly wouldn't be able to do that in a month lol

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post Jul 21 2005, 03:59 AM
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The holding pen image was a piece of paper with a quill pen, but I heavily modified it, perhaps a little too much - I think I will leave it though. And the more | less thing is where text updates/news will be shown.
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post Jul 21 2005, 04:09 AM
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Looking quite nice. Keep up the awsome work.

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post Jul 21 2005, 02:21 PM
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Very nice! The holding pen image looks weird, but still great.
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post Jul 21 2005, 02:56 PM
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QUOTE(Stargazey @ Jul 21 2005, 03:21 PM)
Very nice! The holding pen image looks weird, but still great.
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Think it will look better when its larger.. wink.gif But I agree it looks very very nice! biggrin.gif
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post Jul 21 2005, 03:39 PM
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Very nice, I am lookinf forward to seeing the site in full.


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post Jul 21 2005, 09:25 PM
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QUOTE(vaanic~one @ Jul 21 2005, 11:39 AM)
Very nice, I am lookinf forward to seeing the site in full.
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its very nice. I likey


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