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Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Nov 19 2005, 11:47 AM

"Flying High Above My Window"

By Joshua Finch "Doomed-4-Eternity"

Creatures Fly high above my window,
Cliff racers fly higher than the mountains,
Soaring high above the clouds,

Pwang, Pwang,
I struck them down,
Pwang, Pwang,
I will celebrate, I shall hire a clown,
Pwang, Pwang,
They are now extinct,
Pwang, Pwang,
That clowns feet really stink!

Now i can fly high above my window,
I can now fly higher than the Mountains,
And now, i can soar higher than the clouds,

Pwang, Pwang,
Saw a flying Dwemer ship,
Pwang, Pwang,
I licked my lip,
Pwang, Pwang,
There may be good loot,
Pwang, Pwang,
However there could be more soot,
Pwang, Pwang,
I went abroad,
Pwang, Pwang,
I found a room, on my own accord,
Pwang, Pwang,
I went across the plank,
Pwang, Pwang,
My life suddenly shrank,
Pwang, Pwang,
I jumped off!
Pwang, Pwang,
I saw Freddie Flintoff!
Pwang, Pwang,
I used my my Alteration,
Pwang, Pwang,
I found my spells of Levitation!

My life went by,
A tear fell off my eye,
I also went with it,
Before i fell into my PE kit!

I thought our library needed some more songs so heres my first of a few!

(If yoiur wondering who Josh is thats me!)

NEED SOME EDITING AND CRITIZISM THX

Posted by: vaanic~one Nov 19 2005, 07:14 PM

Er, okay, the references to PE kit and Freddie Flintoff do not fit in the TES universe.

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Nov 21 2005, 04:24 PM

Er, okay, the references to PE kit and Freddie Flintoff do not fit in the TES universe.

Posted by: Stargazey Nov 21 2005, 11:07 PM

Is there any chance that you could start ONE topic for all of your writings, and let people view them there?

A topic for every story is getting a bit spammy.


Star

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Nov 22 2005, 01:53 PM

Is there any chance that you could start ONE topic for all of your writings, and let people view them there?

A topic for every story is getting a bit spammy.
Star

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Nov 26 2005, 06:44 PM

so any ideas or is this ready to go?

Posted by: minque Nov 26 2005, 07:00 PM

so any ideas or is this ready to go?

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Nov 26 2005, 07:02 PM

To go where exactly????

Posted by: minque Nov 26 2005, 07:06 PM

I suggest you ask Mr Gazey for his opinion! He´s in the staff!

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Jan 5 2006, 03:53 PM

I suggest you ask Mr Gazey for his opinion! He´s in the staff!

Posted by: Dantrag Jan 6 2006, 09:41 PM

Except for the things that Vaanic one said, it's great!

Posted by: Doomed4Eternity Jan 7 2006, 01:04 PM

Except for the things that Vaanic one said, it's great!