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Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin - Solstheim, Chapter Two: North as the Racer Flies |
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McBadgere |
Jan 28 2012, 06:57 AM
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Oh-ho-hooo yes!!... Don't know where there is, but I'll get you there safe... Excellent!!... ... Lahved it from start to finish... The pretty wee pictures are a treat!... ... Most excellent!... Nice one!!.. *Applauds heartily*...
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treydog |
Jan 28 2012, 04:29 PM
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Master
Joined: 13-February 05
From: The Smoky Mountains
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QUOTE I just didn't know too much about the local dangers. However, as I'd said before, if it bleeds, I could kill it. Always a helpful skill on Solstheim. QUOTE Not too mention things that would likely want to eat us are in there, and likely territorial. Here now- it was only the ONE time- and that was an ACCIDENT… . Oh, wait. Nevermind. LOVE the screenie of Seth- sorry- DRALAS, in full stalk mode. And I also appreciate the fact that you have made the wolves behave realistically (at least for now)- instead of with homicidal lunacy. The last of which is understandable, since in the vanilla game, there are NO prey animals on Solstheim- except for horkers- and.. well, people. And hooray for Falco!
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
The best-dressed newt in Mournhold.
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McBadgere |
Jan 30 2012, 06:10 AM
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Joined: 21-October 11
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Niiiice... ... Nice quiet scene building... I do likes me ebony...My fave armour on the games... Brilliant chapter, really enjoyed it... Nice one!!... ... *Applauds heartily*...
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mALX |
Feb 2 2012, 11:05 PM
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Ancient
Joined: 14-March 10
From: Cyrodiil, the Wastelands, and BFE TN
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* QUOTE
"Yes?" he said sharply to me, as though every second I stood there cost him another twenty septims.
I rummaged through my bag in silent annoyance, costing him another hundred septims. Finally producing a letter intended for the Factor of Raven Rock.
ROFL !!! Loved that !! QUOTE I stopped for a moment, and thought out loud. "Dralas is a common enough Dunmeri name. It doesn't stand out. Venim does however. It was the name of an old enemy, it's a name I would never use. So if someone is looking hard enough, they'll know it's me."
"O--kay." Pene said, truly confused. "I thought you didn't want to be found?" She asked.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
In a truly grandiose moment, Pene was speechless.
Pene steals the show several times throughout this story, this is one example - Loved this !! QUOTE yet in a sort of chaotic harmony.
This was perfection. Awesome Write, and sorry it took so long to catch up !! *
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treydog |
Feb 4 2012, 06:48 PM
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Master
Joined: 13-February 05
From: The Smoky Mountains
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It was a treat to watch "Dralas" and Pene try to fit in with the group around the campfire. QUOTE When the conversation turned to me, I was actually at a loss for words. I was not really used to this kind of open conversation. Further, I was used to being quiet on several subjects. The few who I could talk about them with weren't here, and were also used to keeping quiet.
"M-me?" Pene said, startled. She gave me an uncertain look before started to speak. "I-I'm a healer? Yes, that's right, from High Rock..." she said in a low tone. Me- oh- I um--- kill people for a living. And- my companion is a Seducer. Sleep tight everyone! QUOTE It seemed there was a general consensus that most people who ended up in Solstheim weren’t here for the scenery. I am just sitting back to enjoy Seth- sorry- DRALAS'- explorations.
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
The best-dressed newt in Mournhold.
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mALX |
Feb 7 2012, 01:56 PM
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Ancient
Joined: 14-March 10
From: Cyrodiil, the Wastelands, and BFE TN
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QUOTE Pene barely stifled a laugh. She was catching on too humor quite quickly.
Pene picks up on the slapstick, lol. Loved that section! Absolutely loved Pene's reading of his aura !!! Great write !!!
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treydog |
Feb 8 2012, 03:34 AM
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Master
Joined: 13-February 05
From: The Smoky Mountains
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Enjoyed this part- especially Pene's nonchalant revelation that she can "see" the arcane energies of places and people. And then there was this: " QUOTE I don't actually sleep." She replied.
"I'm jealous." Great addition to the story- as the conflict between Carnius (boo- hiss) and Falco begins.
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
The best-dressed newt in Mournhold.
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Darkness Eternal |
Feb 8 2012, 05:22 AM
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Master
Joined: 10-June 11
From: Coldharbour
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Love Carnius, my kind of guy. And I liked the part where Treydog said. It was cool. QUOTE She piqued up visibly at this. "Good. There's a grave I wanted to visit!" She said immediately.
I blinked once. "That's...creepy." Haha, loved that.
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And yet I am, and liveā€”like vapours tossed. I long for scenes where man hath never trod A place where woman never smiled or wept There to abide with my Creator, God, And sleep as I in childhood sweetly slept, Untroubling and untroubled where I lie The grass belowā€”above the vaulted sky.ā€¯
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McBadgere |
Feb 8 2012, 05:52 AM
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Joined: 21-October 11
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YES!!...Immortals that can be killed!!...I do like that... ... Loved this whole chapter, espescially that discussion on auras and energies and all that... Robert likes that sort of thing... Many many excellents to you sir!!!... Nice one!!... ... *Applauds most heartily!!*...
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