 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Three: Azura's Portents. |
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| The Metal Mallet |
 Aug 29 2006, 09:13 PM
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Soul trapping Uthol was genius! I never thought of doing that, despite hearing that the Ash Vampires were immortal basically. I simply figured, "I'm the Nerevarine! If I kill something it stays dead!"
I don't mind the length at all, it actually read quite fast, a sign of excellent writing  I also never knew about the Dagoths having talking options such as the one you stated. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Aug 29 2006, 09:24 PM
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I also never knew about the talking options, despite sneaking around a lot with the amulet of shadows. I guess I was too focussed on sneak attacks. (Critical damage with Chrysamere rocks!
 )And about the reviving, my opinion was: ,,Yeah, go ahead and come back. If I took you out this time, I'll take you out next time. Besides, I'm not coming back. I'm going straight for your daddy and split him in two.  "-------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Aug 29 2006, 09:26 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Aug 29 2006, 09:32 PM
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Sweet, I can't wait to see that.
I bet if I tried to soul trap each of the Ash Vampires, one of them would get caught in Azura's Star and then I would be like "Noooooo!!" because it's so useful for enchanters, and recharging stuff. And no, I wasn't kidding  -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Aug 31 2006, 10:37 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 1 2006, 04:44 AM
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*Big sigh of relief* Woah, you had me nervous there, Black. You really built up the suspense when Sethyas went to grab the ring. Then you make it comical. Nice stuff
So now we truely know Sethyas is the Nerevarine. Hopefully he'll do a good job at it. I wonder how he'll react to the discussions with the Failed Incarnates.... -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Sep 2 2006, 08:57 PM
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As Mallet said. That was one good bit back there. Very enjoyable. I wonder how he'll respond to the ghosts of the failed incarnates. They want to load him down with loot after all.
PS: The Moon-and-Star ring is one of the crappiest I've seen. Sorry, but its enchantment isn't all that hot. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 2 2006, 09:57 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 3 2006, 03:03 AM
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Epical. That's all I have to say. I don't even care if it isn't a word!
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| Black Hand |
Sep 3 2006, 08:53 AM
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| minque |
Sep 3 2006, 04:35 PM
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Ahhh....wonderful! You really put a lot of emotions into this.......and you describe the adventures leading forward in an almost tender way..
A masterpiece....... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 3 2006, 07:16 PM
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You convey emotion very well in this update. You can feel the weight put onto his shoulders. And it's heavy
I look forward to seeing how he deals with the Great Houses and the other Ashlanders. Though it is funny that they're called Ashlanders, since only half of the 4 tribes are found in the Ashlands... This post has been edited by The Metal Mallet: Sep 3 2006, 07:17 PM -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Sep 4 2006, 04:56 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 4 2006, 07:27 PM
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Oh boy, Crassius, what a nutjob he was. One of the more interesting characters in Morrowind I'd have to say. I definitely felt a bit uncomfortable when he asked me to strip to support me as a Councillor....
Wonderful update yet again, Black. I wonder what's bothering Eno though... -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| minque |
Sep 4 2006, 08:36 PM
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Ahh you do a wonderful work with the dialogue, well known to us, yet full of twists and additions.....truly an awesome update!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Sep 7 2006, 05:41 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Sep 7 2006, 09:17 PM
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Uh oh! Sethyas is having lady problems! Those can be the worse ones too.
That'll probably not be good to have on his mind when he's supposed to assassinate a couple of Dunmer who are possibly even more sneaky than Sethyas! Not to mention dealing with Orvas himself. Oooo the stress and suspense! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Sep 8 2006, 03:30 PM
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Agh, now that is why I'm a loner. Who can understand women? (Well, I suppose that women understand women but let's not bother with the details here.)
Hmm, if there are people who are more sneaky than Sethyas, there is one hell of a good solution. Direct assault with heavy weapons and magicka. No one expects that from an assassin. Besides, the plantation could use some redecoration. Don't underestimate the power of angry Atronachs. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| minque |
Sep 8 2006, 09:11 PM
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Oh nooo.....poor Sethyas!..On the other hand Ilmeni´s reaction is understandable....Nevertheless if Mr Velar plays his cards in a clever way....we might see a happy ending here....or?????
 Wonderful update! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Sep 12 2006, 04:34 AM
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