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post Mar 30 2007, 06:37 PM
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Chapter 7, "Comfort is given, Justice is taken"

After spending a week in the good custody of Lloros Sarano I was back in Sarethi Manor again. Athyn, who had visited me every day while I was in the Temple, was ecstatic at having me back. I was worried about him; he had had too many traumatic things happen to him during the last six months, and now he seemed more exhausted and worn out than ever. In fact what he needed mostly now, and I too, for all that it mattered, was a vacation, a break from the normal struggle. I promised myself that when all this was over with we’d go…somewhere…that was, if I survived…

The prophecy by Sinnamu Mirpal was very clear to me, and it was also confirmed by the recent attempt on my life, because I knew very well who was responsible for that; the amulet I ripped off my would-be assassin was familiar; it belonged to the Venim family. I doubted Bolvyn himself was the one who tried to kill me, but whoever it was, it was on his orders, of that I was certain.

So all I had to do was to challenge Bolvyn Venim to a duel and then end his life, at the Arena in Vivec…?

Of course it was not that simple! I had to ponder a lot how I should let Justice be taken. I had to take active part in the government of House Redoran, to be able to get to know where the loyalties were. I had to know the standpoint of the other councilors and also raise their disposition to me.

Thorough planning was crucial here; otherwise I would be the one who would bite the dust. I also needed to train my sword-skill. I hadn’t used my Katana for a long time and I knew I had to be beyond simply good if I was to defeat a man like the Archmaster. I didn’t even consider another way of fighting him; a duel at the Arena witnessed by the Nobles of my House would be the only honorable way of dealing with this matter.

I discussed my plans with Athyn; naturally he tried to talk me out of it!

“Serene, I don’t like the thought of you being decapitated by Bolvyn Venim, In fact I don’t like the thought of you being decapitated at all. I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you!” he said, holding me close to him. “Why not let Sethyas do the fighting instead? He’s very skilled and…and he is a man! Besides, I know you do not like to take lives, even if taking this life would be justified.”

I took his face between my hands, kissed him deeply and sighed;

“I was convinced you would be the first one to stand behind me in this! I’ve told you about the prophecy of Sinnamu Mirpal…I’ve told you about my weird dream…and you know I am protected by Azura! You, Athyn Sarethi, the sun of my life, I love you more than you will ever know, and I beg you to support me now! The life of Bolvyn Venim will be taken by a woman, not a man, and that woman…will be me!”

Tears burned behind my eyelids as I once more kissed him. I was aware of his fear to loose someone dear to him and also the fear of acts of reprisal from the Venim family. But I couldn’t let that stop me; I had to do this once and for all or I’d never get peace at heart again.

Before he made an attempt to answer me I told him about a book Drulene Falen once showed me, “The Hope of the Redoran”. I actually never read the book but Drulene had told me what it was about.

“You for one should know that some things just have to be done,” I said, “If you hadn’t defeated your cousin back then, we wouldn’t be having this conversation at all.”

Athyn hesitated for quite some time before answering me. I could see in his face he’d given in to me, that he’d stand by my side all the way…This was of great comfort to me.

“I’ll go with you to Fort Buckmoth,” he said, sounding defeated and tired. “You will have to go through thorough training before you can even think of challenging the Archmaster, because that’s exactly what you’re going to do, right?”

I nodded and he continued;

“Since you are familiar with that confounded book, I think you know the name of the lady who used to train me when I was young? Shardie was the very best trainer to be found. She and I got on very well together and it is because of her that I have the position I have now…But you know all that.” Athyn paused, getting out a bottle of brandy and two glasses.

“We will need some fortification I think,” he said and offered me a glass. We tasted the beverage and he continued;

“Shardie has a daughter, named Shardie-Lee, who now is a master-trainer at Fort Buckmoth. She’s known as just Shardie and she is the one who I’d like to train you. Then you will have the best there is!” Athyn gently stroke my chin. “I care so much for you my love; I do not want to loose you.”

“We’ll be off to Fort Buckmoth, first thing tomorrow,” Athyn concluded. “So let’s spend this evening as nicely as we can, shall we?”

We had far too much brandy, far too much good food and maybe far too much love, but I still remember that evening as maybe the last evening that I still was somewhat innocent.

My head was aching and I could hardly stand the bright sunshine the following morning as Athyn and I were heading towards Fort Buckmoth. He, too, obviously suffered from last night’s events because he walked by my side silently with his head somewhat down. The sun was warm and I was drenched in sweat under my full Imperial Armor. Athyn had to take off his robe and carry it; the heat, or maybe last night, took its tribute out of him, and his face was a tad more grayish than usual, with beads of sweat forming on his forehead and he had to stop a few times to regain strength. I was carrying a small satchel with a few shirts and an extra pair of trousers together with my usual herbs and plants; nothing much really but it felt as heavy as if I’d had stones in it.

We found Shardie-Lee sitting in the shadows in a corner of the courtyard when we arrived, her brown skin glistened with perspiration and she was drinking from a large jug. Four young soldiers were scattered on the ground, totally exhausted, apparently from the hard training.

When Athyn presented himself and me her eyes widened; “I’ve heard about you, Serjo Sarethi, from my mother!” she exclaimed with a smile, “Nice to finally get the opportunity to meet you!”

I let Athyn do the talking, for my stomach was in uproar and I merely felt like vomiting; the heat and last night affected me severely. I sat down in the shadows, taking a sip of water, thinking ruefully that I’d have big trouble getting to my feet again…armor is just not meant to wear sitting down…


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post Jun 21 2011, 03:51 AM
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Patience Doomeister, Mother is working on it she assures me. I don't know that anyone is looking forward to the "rest of the story" more than I am. It will be all that we expect I have no doubt, and a lot that we don't see coming.

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minque   Serene of Cyrodiil, chapter 7   Mar 30 2007, 06:37 PM
Black Hand   Its back! And up and running! Wonderful...   Mar 30 2007, 07:51 PM
jack cloudy   Ah, so she gets some training. Sweet, now we can s...   Mar 30 2007, 08:18 PM
The Metal Mallet   Excellent way to start this chapter Minque. We de...   Mar 30 2007, 10:15 PM
blockhead   Ooooooooooooooooooooo. This is ... wow ... great....   Mar 30 2007, 11:34 PM
Lord Revan   Yes, heavy drinking never seems to be good for you...   Mar 30 2007, 11:40 PM
mplantinga   I enjoyed the way Serene convinced Athyn to back h...   Mar 31 2007, 04:59 PM
BSD-IES   Another of the classic TES fanfics. So beautifully...   Aug 14 2007, 12:00 AM
Lucidarius   Serene fighting Bolvyn Venim, now that I would lik...   Aug 30 2007, 01:53 PM
minque   [b]Ok...at last! Hopefully I´m over the ...   Sep 23 2007, 08:44 PM
treydog   Woo-Hoo! She's back, she's back.......   Sep 23 2007, 09:59 PM
The Metal Mallet   I have treydog's exact same sentiments. I am ...   Sep 23 2007, 11:23 PM
blockhead   Serene is back! YAY! I'm so glad you...   Sep 24 2007, 12:38 AM
Lucidarius   These are great news, Serene is back and preparing...   Sep 24 2007, 12:30 PM
Tellie   Wohoo, and update again, really good minky :) And...   Sep 24 2007, 08:45 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, so the secret to total behind-whacking is foo...   Sep 24 2007, 08:48 PM
minque   Thank you all...for nice comments, heh..maybe I ha...   Sep 24 2007, 08:59 PM
mplantinga   It's great to get another update to this belov...   Sep 25 2007, 03:32 PM
Honorius   Well, now that i find the last installment posted,...   Jan 22 2008, 07:00 AM
minque   Ok folks, so we go a bit further again...heh this ...   Jun 9 2008, 12:05 AM
mplantinga   Thanks for another intriguing update. I particular...   Jun 9 2008, 04:21 PM
BSD-IES   Cool! It's back! I've just read th...   Jun 9 2008, 07:37 PM
Black Hand   Hmm, Sethyas' words look a tad bit familiar to...   Jun 10 2008, 09:10 PM
treydog   What I like is that you so perfectly portray the c...   Jun 11 2008, 08:59 PM
minque   Ok folks! Because you've waited patiently,...   Jun 28 2008, 05:14 PM
Black Hand   Serene has a secret. Indeed. To quote the wonderf...   Jun 28 2008, 07:55 PM
minque   Serene has a secret. Indeed. To quote the wonder...   Jun 28 2008, 10:02 PM
The Metal Mallet   It is awesome to see you continue this lovely stor...   Jun 29 2008, 09:10 PM
minque   At dawn I took a bath, a long hot bath to regain f...   Jul 2 2008, 10:12 PM
Lord Revan   I hope that slap stung Venim for the next hour. :g...   Jul 2 2008, 10:27 PM
mplantinga   I actually found myself holding my breath for that...   Jul 5 2008, 12:11 AM
BSD-IES   I am a little worried about how the previous inst...   Jul 5 2008, 11:38 AM
minque   The Archmaster looked at me, and I never had seen ...   Jul 5 2008, 06:15 PM
mplantinga   It's good to see Ilmeni and Serene getting alo...   Jul 8 2008, 05:00 AM
Black Hand   Nice to see Serene and Ilmeni getting along. As pl...   Jul 8 2008, 05:08 AM
Kiln   Dang I haven't had time to read in a while. H...   Jul 8 2008, 06:21 PM
minque   Yes, Blackie, someone's helping me.. ;) So ...   Jul 8 2008, 06:27 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, I'm sure some people are going to pick u...   Jul 10 2008, 08:53 AM
Black Hand   Sweet! I know this fight is going to be good t...   Jul 10 2008, 05:08 PM
The Metal Mallet   Sweet! I know this fight is going to be good ...   Jul 11 2008, 07:55 PM
minque   Well Mallie, even if she wears Ahemmusa clothing s...   Jul 10 2008, 08:13 PM
minque   Next one, and it's dedicated to Mallie! T...   Jul 11 2008, 11:10 PM
Black Hand   Sorry for not commenting before, the uniqueness of...   Jul 13 2008, 10:43 PM
mplantinga   "I was failing..." That can't be ri...   Jul 14 2008, 07:49 PM
minque   [size=3]The dedication of this goes, a third time ...   Jul 17 2008, 09:37 PM
Black Hand   Awesome. Just Awesome.   Jul 17 2008, 10:22 PM
mplantinga   Very nice. I will admit that I can't make up m...   Jul 17 2008, 10:34 PM
minque   [i]So after the battle there will be some normal l...   Jul 23 2008, 10:51 PM
Black Hand   Ahh, Serenes getting some of her own time back, mo...   Jul 23 2008, 11:45 PM
mplantinga   Well, whether or not she wished to be Archmaster, ...   Jul 24 2008, 05:27 PM
Kiln   Very good, I like the description and crisp dialog...   Jul 25 2008, 03:23 AM
The Metal Mallet   Good stuff. The death experience was a nice addit...   Jul 25 2008, 07:46 AM
minque   Last update until end of August! I'm going...   Jul 31 2008, 06:49 PM
Black Hand   Hmm. Renie taking on the task of Death of a taxman...   Aug 1 2008, 10:55 PM
mplantinga   Her compassion for others is turning out to be her...   Aug 6 2008, 04:34 PM
minque   Any kinds of negotiations on an empty stomach are ...   Aug 21 2008, 10:26 PM
Black Hand   Ver nice! SGM. Yeah that Foryn can be a challe...   Aug 22 2008, 07:13 PM
treydog   And yet another cliff-ra... um cliff-hanger stoppi...   Aug 22 2008, 08:19 PM
Daedroth   And yet another cliffracer? haha :lol:   Aug 22 2008, 11:07 PM
mplantinga   Superb; a cliffhanger. Just what I always wanted. ...   Aug 25 2008, 05:31 AM
minque   My dera loyal readers! I do owe you an apology...   Dec 7 2008, 10:09 PM
Burnt Sierra   My dera loyal readers! I do owe you an apolog...   Jan 4 2009, 07:27 PM
mplantinga   I will always look forward to new installments, ev...   Dec 8 2008, 05:51 PM
treydog   Seconded. I am more than willing to wait patientl...   Dec 8 2008, 08:46 PM
The Bean   I finally got round to reading this. Yays! Ah...   Dec 11 2008, 11:50 PM
minque   I finally got round to reading this. Yays! A...   Dec 12 2008, 12:25 AM
redsrock   You better update at TESFU as well! Or....or.....   Dec 12 2008, 12:38 AM
minque   You better update at TESFU as well! Or....or....   Dec 13 2008, 09:45 AM
redsrock   Good. Because we need good writing over there. Not...   Dec 13 2008, 05:08 PM
minque   At last! I'm apologizing for my very long ...   Apr 10 2009, 04:25 PM
Black Hand   Excellent update! Nice to see you're back ...   Apr 10 2009, 07:54 PM
mplantinga   After the previous installment, I wrote that Seren...   Apr 12 2009, 07:16 PM
minque   Thank you very much, Blackie and Dr Planty, I real...   Apr 14 2009, 09:13 PM
Colonel Mustard   An update. FINALLY! So Varus is dealt with, a...   Apr 14 2009, 10:30 PM
mplantinga   Another problem dealt with. I'm glad to see th...   Apr 15 2009, 02:03 PM
Black Hand   Awesome. Killed that guy twice! Oh and yes, ve...   Apr 22 2009, 02:55 AM
minque   Ok my loyal readers, it's time to wrap up chap...   Apr 22 2009, 04:01 AM
mplantinga   An exciting conclusion to chapter 7. It was an int...   Apr 23 2009, 01:48 PM
Colonel Mustard   An interesting conclusion, Minque. I'll be loo...   Apr 23 2009, 06:42 PM
Black Hand   Oh, snickerdoodles! Sorry, I hadn't seen t...   May 9 2009, 04:58 PM
treydog   The solution to Foryn Gilnith was elegant- and bro...   May 11 2009, 05:42 PM
Black Hand   It has been seven months! MORE> SERENE...   Dec 10 2009, 08:58 AM
minque   Ihhh...you're right! And the only excuse I...   Dec 11 2009, 12:51 AM
Remko   Read the entire thing (where's chapter 8?? *ta...   Apr 8 2010, 06:27 PM
minque   Thank you ever so much for nice comments! I tr...   Apr 8 2010, 11:06 PM
Remko   There is one thing I really wanted to know: Is Ser...   Apr 9 2010, 11:22 AM
mALX   There is one thing I really wanted to know: Is Se...   Apr 9 2010, 05:35 PM
minque   There is one thing I really wanted to know: Is Se...   Apr 9 2010, 10:05 PM
haute ecole rider   Well. I wanted to read the WHOLE thing before com...   Apr 11 2010, 05:58 PM
Doommeister   I've just finished reading your stories, and I...   Nov 4 2010, 08:20 PM
treydog   Posting this for Athynae- who is too modest to pos...   May 14 2011, 02:34 AM
mALX   Posting this for Athynae- who is too modest to po...   May 14 2011, 07:58 AM
SubRosa   I finished reading the entire thing a few months a...   May 14 2011, 02:45 AM
minque   Oh my my...I'm almost crying here....Thank you...   May 21 2011, 09:15 PM
treydog   Oh my my...I'm almost crying here....Thank yo...   May 21 2011, 11:23 PM
minque   One note- the Athynae who wrote the poem is not...   May 21 2011, 11:29 PM
Grits   I have thoroughly enjoyed reading Serene’s story, ...   Jun 2 2011, 01:24 AM
Doommeister   gah still no update? why so cruel minque? update p...   Jun 20 2011, 10:30 PM


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