 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Four: Binds the Broken... |
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| minque |
 May 15 2010, 02:32 AM
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The things he went through! The nightmares....wonderful! Now get me right, it wasn't all pleasant for Sethyas, but it forced him forward, to what? I don't know, but it will be revealed, I'm sure of that.
I think we have come to get sort of more "under his skin" you tell about a Sethyas that is somewhat changed, for the better I want to believe... I hope he will achieve what he's after when going under the city...and not get into such severe trouble that he'll be hurt (again) One thing is for sure, someone on the island of Vvardenfell is thinking about him, hoping he's ok. Maybe this someone manage to reach him...who knows! Wonderful updates, Blackie, makes me urge for more....  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Olen |
May 15 2010, 11:00 PM
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I like it
 . I'm not sure what else to say... its readible, well done and you really seem to be in the head of Sethyas, he's an very strong character and great to read about.Your perspective on the whole nerevar thing is interesting and adds a side to the story which is fresh and unlike any other fanfic I've read. And Seth's reaction is bang on of course. Great stuff. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| Black Hand |
May 16 2010, 07:27 AM
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May 16 2010, 10:51 AM
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May 16 2010, 10:48 PM
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NOOOOO! Not a cliffie....NOW!!! How do you think I'm gonna fall asleep tonight? Not knowing if that Seducer-thingy is going to kill my Seth or....hmmm well doing something else with him...
The plot is really tightening now, and getting more and more interesting... So I sincerely hope that I, when I return tomorrow evening, will get to know what happens to my favourite dunmer! Pretty please... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Olen |
May 17 2010, 09:32 AM
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And we meet the seducer... I want to know what happens.
I loved the Dwemer ghost, you got him bang on. I laughed a few times in his exchange with Seth. QUOTE I swear, no one is happy with a simple blade that cleaves bone...always need the special effects. Brilliant He's so much better than old Yagrum.Great stuff. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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May 17 2010, 09:56 PM
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May 17 2010, 11:54 PM
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May 18 2010, 12:21 AM
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May 18 2010, 06:17 PM
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Ooooh a new character. Novel idea too.
I wonder what Almalexia will amke of her... I like this story, it's fun to read -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| minque |
May 21 2010, 09:19 PM
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OMG! three updates...heh you are the post machine again! heureka!
I'm sorry I haven't commented for three days, but RL really has taken its tribute out of me...  Now then, I'm truly impressed how you described the interaction between Seth and Pene, just brilliant, going from "oops I'm gonna die..to showing great power towards her". I must admit I'm not so familiar with Daedra's personality in common but this creature really is special. I wonder...will she be tied to Seth for all eternity? Now of course, what will happen next? What will he do with her? what services can she provide? I really like the way this story is going, thrilling indeed... (So he thought of Serene in the moment of truth? Very sweet. I assure you she got the message! )-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 24 2010, 08:14 AM
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May 24 2010, 10:38 PM
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Oh la la...So the lil' seducer helped out in the fight? Pretty sweet of her I think. Or might it be her urge to serve her "master"
Anyway this was a great update, I will give you my favourite lines: QUOTE That was honorable?" I asked bemused. "You didn't say not too." she replied stoically. "'Twas a jest. I appreciate your help." I replied. "A...jest? If you appreciated it, then why state otherwise?" "It's a mortal thing. Humor. It help us cope with danger--" She began to laugh slightly, and I stopped mid-sentence, she knew us mortals better then I thought. brilliant! Got a good laugh here I love the interaction between Seth and Pene...what will this lead to??? More please? -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 24 2010, 10:40 PM
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May 24 2010, 10:54 PM
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Ahhhhh!!! She's a telepath!!!! YAYYY awesome! Good thing Seth got his fair share of practising that in the past huh! hehe!
So the sword got its flaming magicka....awesome (pyroil tar...wonder what the chemical formula of that is?..) Now the scene is set....let the play begin! Looking so much forward to see what will happen next... You're a blessed writer Blackie! Love it... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 25 2010, 06:06 AM
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May 25 2010, 03:21 PM
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The post machine is gathering momentum again
 And so is this story, the end of Tribunal is excellent and I'm looking forward to reading about Seth doing it. Pene is a good addition, she offers a chance to play Seth's character off and makes this piece even better. I'm surprised Almlexia didn't realise what she was, but then the godess is mad - you're certainly showing that. As Minque said - love it -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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May 27 2010, 10:39 PM
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May 28 2010, 11:07 PM
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Lovely! beautiful....The interactions between Pene and Seth is.....I don't know what to say....more than brilliant!?
QUOTE "Why are you Daedra so violent?" I asked her, raising a hand. "I could ask you the same question." she retorted. Well that's truth, right?? QUOTE "You can read my head. But you don't know my heart. As we broach into this prickly territory, let me set some rules. You can talk to me via telepathy, and you can read memories I give you permission to read. But no further than that. Are we clear?" Why does this sound so familiar? You know how happy I am that you continue this story, right?? I'm sorry I missed to comment on your second last post....nope I won't even try to excuse myself, you already know how RL can be sometimes... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 31 2010, 09:45 PM
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