 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter One:..to the east, to Morrowind. |
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| treydog |
 Jun 29 2006, 10:06 PM
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I really enjoy the creative touches you have added to make the familiar story new again. Please continue the good work.
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| Black Hand |
Jun 30 2006, 07:19 AM
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| Black Hand |
Jun 30 2006, 07:15 PM
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| jack cloudy |
Jun 30 2006, 07:42 PM
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Great scene all the way to the interogation. Good old Snowy is intimidating at first but if you have prepared yourself, he'll fall like a Scrib.
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| Black Hand |
Jun 30 2006, 07:51 PM
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| DarkHunter |
Jun 30 2006, 08:05 PM
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Hrmmmm... Tricky Tricky. But shall his luck continue?
-------------------- A skull, some blood, and a flying mace. Not much to work with. ~Imperial Legion Captian.
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| jack cloudy |
Jun 30 2006, 08:07 PM
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Wow, he actually managed to catch Crito off-guard. Well I must say that a Wakizashi through the neck is more elegant and less dirty than throwing a Dwemer cog in his face like my character did. Heh, this story has a funny sense of humor. I like it.
-------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Jun 30 2006, 08:42 PM
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| treydog |
Jul 1 2006, 02:59 AM
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I really like the attention to detail with things like the encounter with Snowy- seem to recall he killed a fair few of my early characters til I learned not to walk right up to him...
This installment gives us some nice insights into Sethyas character and way of thinking- very nice. -------------------- The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2006, 08:29 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 1 2006, 08:36 PM
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The quest continues I see.
I like the subtle things you add in, normally I didn't care about the Sleepers, but it's interesting to include them and give them a victimized character to them. I really liked that. Keep up with the good stuff, ya hear? -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| jack cloudy |
Jul 1 2006, 08:38 PM
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Ah, his worries for his sister are admirable. Now let's hope she's fine. As for now, he'd better get ready for the 'favour'. It will be a bit bonechilling.
 Yeah, I also like the thing with the Sleepers. I always kept my distance but never truly bothered to get involved. I did feel sorry for killing those that attacked me though. They were practically harmless yet still they insisted on fighting me.  This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Jul 1 2006, 08:40 PM -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2006, 09:11 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 1 2006, 09:32 PM
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I really enjoyed the subtle bits of humor in this post with the "stereotypical" witch ingredients, and the battlemages quip. You're a post machine right now. I was like that at first, but I have trouble staying on Word for long periods of time, I get a little antsy writing.
Anyways, I'm eagerly anticipating Sethyas run in with the undead, muhahaha! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| jack cloudy |
Jul 1 2006, 09:32 PM
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Wha, there are actually Silver arrows in Balmora? Hmm, I guess I should actually go to the shops for a change instead of relying on the good old pillage and plunder.
I liked your dealings with the mage guild. Now deal with the tomb, please. This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Jul 1 2006, 09:33 PM -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2006, 10:11 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 1 2006, 10:22 PM
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Wow, another post today? This is madness! Especially when each post is consistantly good!
Really liked that fact, that Sethyas thought the Bonewalker was too overwhelming to fight. Good thing this wasn't in Oblivion era, or else he might have something chasing him until he got to the Silt Strider. For all I know, I can't wait to see what else you write today  -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2006, 11:10 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 1 2006, 11:27 PM
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QUOTE lol, thanks too all, especially Metal Mallet, and Jack Cloudy Well it's the least I can do when the material is great! I'm a big advocate of the Fan Fiction section for this forum and all the writers have great styles. Just reading all them help me with my writing, at least it well, I do notice some things I need to work on with my current fic. This site has killed countless boring hours at my work, so I'm very greatful for it. Yet again, your post is filled with humor, and great dialogue. I can't wait to see if Sethyas will join the Mages Guild. I definately miss my Morrowind game right now from reading this. My friend is borrowing it, but I don't think he's playing it! So I'm going to start bugging him! I wonder when the Morag Tong will get involved as well, I'm really looking forward to that. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| minque |
Jul 1 2006, 11:43 PM
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Oh dear....I must join the fan-club of this story! ´tis great you know! Well depicted charachters and a very good flow.....
I hope I´ll be able to keep up with it but you post so frequent that it´s amazing..... Anyway it´s a very good story and I´m looking forward to read more! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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