 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Four: An Assassin Amongst Us..... |
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| minque |
 Oct 15 2006, 05:22 PM
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Wonderful reading! Just came back from US and found these latest installments, which pleased me very much. You really makes the best with all those conversations between the charachters, it´s pure awesome! Mind you this gives me a lot of inspiration how to continue my story! No no, I won´t steal anything...don´t worry, your story is outstanding.....and inspirational!
I just love it! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 15 2006, 09:25 PM
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Your dialogue is always so interesting to read, very well thought-out with some really nice lines.
Looking forward to seeing how Sethyas handles building a stronghold. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| jack cloudy |
Oct 15 2006, 09:30 PM
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Hmm, at least the father doesn't seem to oppose Sethyas getting involved with Ilmeni. Perhaps the good old geezer can have a little subtle conversation during diner? I am sure that Sethyas would appreciate it.
 -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Oct 17 2006, 03:06 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 17 2006, 08:09 PM
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Nice update Black. Your way of developing the stronghold was nice and fresh, and suits Sethyas' character to a Tee. Wonderful stuff.
I look forward to the next portion of this fic. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| mplantinga |
Oct 17 2006, 08:51 PM
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I just started reading this story a couple days ago, and it has taken me a while to get caught up. I doubt that any comment I could make here could sum up all my thoughts about the story so far. I've really enjoyed watching your character develop, especially the subtler points of trying to combine being an assassin with the honor of Redoran nobility. I find your approach to story telling quite wonderful, and I'm looking forward to trying to keep up with new installments as they come.
On a side note, the story has made me very nostalgic for Morrowind. Maybe I'll have to play again sometime. |
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Oct 17 2006, 10:21 PM
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Yup, not your average noble, is he? I so like Sethyas. His opinion of things keep it interesting.
-------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| minque |
Oct 18 2006, 10:46 PM
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Ah very nice! The house-building-thingy was awesome! So typical Sethyas! I really love this guy.....I´m seriously thinking it would be nice for Serene to meet him........
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Oct 19 2006, 03:29 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 19 2006, 05:11 AM
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Very entertaining exposition in this update Black. Politics, politics, politics. I really get a feel for the characters in updates like this, because it isn't about action, it's about interaction. And the interaction is good I tell ya, damn good!
-------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| jack cloudy |
Oct 19 2006, 09:51 PM
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Politics and charity. Yeah, charity is awkward in Oblivion. I once sold about ten unlocking scrolls for 40 septims. I was feeling generous. Maybe next time I should pay someone to take my stuff.
I wonder how the noble is going to take it? Nobles seem to be rarely used to getting a no, from someone who is lower on the social ladder than they are. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| minque |
Oct 19 2006, 09:52 PM
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QUOTE(The Metal Mallet @ Oct 19 2006, 06:11 AM)  Very entertaining exposition in this update Black. Politics, politics, politics. I really get a feel for the characters in updates like this, because it isn't about action, it's about interaction. And the interaction is good I tell ya, damn good! Yesss yess.....exactly my opinion as well! oh my.....this was an entertaining part, and I can´t wait to learn more! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| mplantinga |
Oct 19 2006, 10:01 PM
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It was very refreshing to see a noble acting, well, noble. The more I read about this character, the more I admire him. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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| Black Hand |
Oct 22 2006, 06:59 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 22 2006, 08:15 PM
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You can certainly feel the sense of urgency in the frantic pace you're setting up, Black. Nice stuff, though I wonder if Venim has any cards up his sleeves yet...
-------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Black Hand |
Oct 22 2006, 09:54 PM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 22 2006, 10:37 PM
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Its been a hell of a day.
That almost sounds like an understatement for our busy hero. The next mission is very involved as well, I remember I was stuck doing it the "dirty way" because I had released the slaves before this quest was initiated, and of course, the walkthrough book uses the wrong name for Helvi  Continue whenever you have the chance, it's looking like you're getting into one of your update sprees again! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| mplantinga |
Oct 23 2006, 08:56 PM
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Thanks for a couple great updates. Sethyas' unique style continues to be quite intriguing.
I do have one question: Tel Naga is the home of Neloth, not Gothren (in the game, anyway). Was this a purposeful plot change? |
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| minque |
Oct 25 2006, 07:21 PM
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You really get the various events together with great skill, all fit together in a wonderful pace! My gosh I must reinstall MW now...I´m so yearning to play again!
Inspirational my dear....inspirational! I liked your description of the Sarethi family-life! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| jack cloudy |
Oct 25 2006, 07:39 PM
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Man, how come he can never get a calm, peaceful day? He does nothing but run around 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. He must have serious stamina by now.
 -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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