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> Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Three: At the King's Command.
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post Mar 16 2009, 09:30 PM
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What can I say? I'm stunned, truly I am. You'e a poet, Blackie, oh yes I've know that for a very long time, but you're just "doing it" all the time.

His dream is very suggestive, is it the power of the Goddess? or is it just Sethyas being influenced by her, for that is what he is...

Then again it makes me wonder how an anciend goddess can get into his head like she's obviously is beginning to do. can't he resist her? Is Sethyas so vulnerable or is he just desperately seeking ratification??

thank you for a good read, I needed that after yesteday's sorrow...



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post Mar 17 2009, 11:52 PM
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Aha. More musings from the Morag Tong's number one muser.

Seth is very musey, isn't he?
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post Apr 29 2009, 07:43 AM
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post Apr 29 2009, 12:34 PM
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Sethyas is back!! I've been missing him for awhile.... Great update Black Hand can't wait for the next!


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post Apr 29 2009, 10:49 PM
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Is that gunpowder Seth has found?
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post May 1 2009, 09:53 AM
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And the plot tightens, tension is built up. This whole post is a cliff hanger, at least I feel it that way. As usual brilliant writing, Blackie you are incredible!

Keeps my fingers crossed for my favourite assassin... wink.gif


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post May 6 2009, 07:23 AM
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post May 6 2009, 10:59 AM
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Boom baby! BOOM!

Yeah, I liked the part.
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post May 7 2009, 12:24 AM
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QUOTE(Colonel Mustard @ May 6 2009, 04:59 AM) *

Boom baby! BOOM!

Yeah, I liked the part.

Yeah, me too. I like things that go BOOM! biggrin.gif


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post May 10 2009, 12:43 AM
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Intelligent as usual, Sethyas encounter with the techniques of ancient dwemerii...brilliant! He took some heavy risk though! I mean apparently he knew about those chemicals, how they would react and even then he fired at them.

Bold and courageous, but but.....gruesome things could have happened if he hadn' managed to run off.

Calculation or sheer luck?

What dwells in the black hole?

Some questions were answered but even more were raised..makes me anxious to learn more.


Oh and Seth...please....be careful! wink.gif


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post Jun 15 2009, 09:48 PM
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post Jun 15 2009, 10:07 PM
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“You say this, even when it is obvious that you attempt to stir my passions, and have done so since we have met.”

“You are bold, mortal.”

“And you are subtly dangerous.”

Our lips met, even as the Hands watched.

I left with the taste of Almalexia on my lips.



OK Seth....now you really jumped right into something I hope you can handle without too much pain. A tryst with a goddess is a serious matter. I will certainly keep my fingers crossed, that everything will be ok...phew!

A wonderful update, much appreciated! But also it makes me urge for more...

Thank you Blackie for continuing this story about my favourite assassin.... wink.gif


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post Jun 19 2009, 10:12 PM
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post Jun 19 2009, 11:23 PM
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Perhaps Sethyas needs to be more careful, that could have killed our favorite assassin!

Good update, I especially like the bit about the Nine's virtues. Keep up the good work Black Hand!


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post Jun 20 2009, 12:32 AM
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Ok so Seth really has a knack for elder women? Or is it the divineness of Lexie that appeals to him? Anyway this whole thing could easily have led to end of story for him, but as you stated he still is alive to tell!

The wandering priestess' s prophecy could have come true...hrmm

You keep impressing me with your wonderful writing, Blackie, you really do! Now I will wait patiently for the continuation.....

(Eh who am I fooling, I'm not a patient person, not when it's about Sethyas.. wink.gif )


Oh and I beg you Seth....be careful huh!


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post Jun 29 2009, 05:40 PM
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I think Sethya's friend Al would disapprove of this combat technique, even though he sports a dagger with similar qualities. When I played through Tribunal with him as a character I believe he resorted to the "climb on rooftop and cut down target in a hail of viper-bolts" method. But then Al doesn't let goddesses mess with his head and make him think he's some kind of warrior-hero. Sethyas needs to mind his mind.

Well done, as ever. I think you try to get a little over-verbose in spots, but you compensate well with images like this: "But I [...] had drank her love like a man drinks wine to forget the pain."

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post Jul 12 2009, 06:19 AM
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post Jul 13 2009, 09:21 PM
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QUOTE

"Hunter loves the Goddess, no?"

"Hunter loves Rayne." I replied sardonically.

Why do I and also don't I believe him? Maybe because he's Sethyas Velas and not an ordinary man...

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"And yet, you lead me on, kiss me, even when you know it to be dishonorable. A woman's emotions are not a thing to be played with, much less a Godesses. As you are mortal and young, I can forgive you. But you must very shortly make a choice. And you know what I can offer you, and you, a mortal who will not age, who will live as long his will and fate allows it, this a true blessing to me. Think on it Good Sethyas, but we will not pursue anything until you have chosen."


This last paragraph summarize it all, he must choose, that is obvious, but how can he? It must be very very hard for him, since I believe he has still some feelings for Rayne, yet how can he resist a Goddess? How can he resist the divine powers of Almalexia?


I....only hope he choose the right thing...for his sake!


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post Jul 17 2009, 10:24 PM
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post Jul 19 2009, 08:09 PM
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AAAAAAAHHHHHRRR!

This is just cruel! You couldn't resist, right? A cliffie...hrmmm

Okidoki, just have to wait for chapter four then, I guess

A suitable ending though....oh aye


*sitting patiently.....or?*


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