Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin; Mournhold Volume, Chapter Five:...Redeems the Mad. Options

[mALX]

EW! I've never seen a close-up of Vivec's face before, didn't realize his eyes were ... GAAAAH! ... Filmy... URG!

That's not the Vanilla version, that's a mod that somebody made, based on concept art of Vivec. lol

http://planetelderscrolls.gamespy.com/View...ail&id=4961

That mod is great! What a great job they did on making him look human! But on the alternate heads - scary !!!

[Black Hand]

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[Doommeister]

So good.

Black Hand, you have a knack of drawing your readers in. I can never find any nits, which is always good

S.G.M

[Olen]

Two parts, the post machine seems to be whirring up again...

“Liar…”She retorted.

Excellnt line, spot on both with her personality and... well...

I wonder if he'll take Pene with him to see Serene, she's a healer too so would be interested but might see through the disguise. Interesting. I suspect Pene should manage to spread some entertaining havoc in Bal Isra too.

And what next, every part you write leaves me wondering that. Good job. SGM.

[minque]

I could almost feel the claws behind the words.

So I upset two women in one day, it seemed I had a knack for that.

Hilarious! Are you sure Serene is upset? well if you see it in a historical view you might be correct! And so Pene returns, hmm interesting! I can see issues coming up, but then again there might not be a problem with, as Olen said, bringing Pene to see Renie....hehe Now I wouldn't count on it!

I liked the part with Mr Lysander Velas (came to think of the fact that I first thought Thanelen Velas the arch bad guy was Seth's father! ) Now I hope for more about that!

And..as always...GREAT writing we have here..great great...

[Black Hand]

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[Athynae]

WOW!!!!! Speechless is about all I can say. Reading, reading and reading some more and I finally come to this, what I am sure will prove to be one of the many stories hidden in Mother's journal that I can't bring myself to read. Reading yours is different in a way, but I still draw some understanding of her from your writings and I also "feel" why she is drawn to you. I do know how she feels about Father but I also feel there is far more to this than meets the eye.

'Thyna

You are a wonderful writer, I am stunned and amazed at the sheer number of writers that have come together here. Each with strengths of their own and all with incredible talent. I am so happy that Treydog invited here, and also saw a way to make me a small part of it. I have begun my own quest but it will be some time before I share any of my adventures ( I have to figure out how to stay alive long enough first, lol)

[Olen]

I'm not sure what I can say... screenies are great (I assume you've got a fairly modded version of Morrowind) and a bit of a blast from the past and reminder of how connected the different fic worlds are here.

As ever I'm fascinated to see where this goes now, there's so many options...

[Black Hand]

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[Athynae]

I have always relied on my intuition seems I was not wrong this time either. I will wait for Mother to tell me what needs to be shared although I have her journal it appears my reticence to read it has proven to be a good thing. Thank you Uncle Seth. At least I will be a little more prepared for the conversation, expect the unexpected, or is it something that I am sensing is to come???

[Black Hand]

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[Athynae]

Beautifully shared, eloquent and yet, leaves me with as many questions. Thank you though for sharing, it does mean so much more to know how much the two of you share with each other. I do not doubt my parents love for each other and I cannot speak words of experience but somehow I know that loving two people with one heart is possible-in this it has to be....

[treydog]

Umm- wow? As in- you surely have stepped this up SEVERAL notches- on many levels.

Having Pene decide to "hang out" (literally until Seth made her get dressed) at Indarys Manor...

The battle with Almalexia and the "disappearance" of Nerevar

The painful, poignant heartfelt scenes with Serene- emotions so intense that they could not be spoken aloud, but only mind-to-mind

And the beautiful screen-shots!

This is altogether wonderful, my friend.

[minque]

ohhhh jeez! Just found this again, gah, I looked in your sub-forum but..HERE it was, hmmm ok...

Amazing is the least I can say about this! And those screenies! Never has Serene been more beautiful, I love the way she looks, you made her exactly as I see her. The scene between Seth and her is astounding, creates a lot of questions and also reveals just enough. I love it very much.

And now....I know exactly how to move on!

S.D.G.M.I

[Black Hand]

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[mALX]

GAAAAAAH !!! The full family is back!!! Uncle Seth, Serene, Athlain, and Athynae ... ... ...


KABOOOOOOM



** mALX's head swelled to gigantic proportions before bursting

[treydog]

Yet again- information that is revealed turns into yet more mysteries. The take-away from this is what incredible writers you and mnque both are.... The exploration of the complicated, tortured relationship between Seth and Serene is stunning.

[minque]

Makes one wonder, huh?

[Black Hand]

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[Olen]

A cliffhanger! What has come out in a moment's drunkenness, certainly it's changed things and I suspect might drive the next section of the plot. Seth never gets much rest does he...

I look forward to the resolution.