 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Two: Rise of the Black Hand. |
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| sins_to_dark |
 Jul 8 2006, 05:41 PM
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This keeps getting better and better, really enjoying this story keep up the good work
 -------------------- I don't think you trust, in, my, self rightious sucide, I, cry, when angels deserve to die
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| Black Hand |
Jul 9 2006, 07:55 AM
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| jack cloudy |
Jul 9 2006, 08:18 AM
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Heh, lovely idea. The disguise and the writ. I do think he shouldn't have left the Fur hat behind. It could be usefull again sometime. Then again, the Fighter's guild stores these in the equipment chests, I wonder why?
,,We're the tough fighters from the fighters guild. Why are you laughing? What, I'm wearing a fur hat instead of a helmet? Well uh....just go away."  -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 9 2006, 08:24 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 9 2006, 05:26 PM
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QUOTE Grabbing my Writ from his lifeless hands, I pulled off the Colovian fur helm and placed it on his head, sometimes you respect your marks, and sometimes you take pleasure in killing another arrogant honoured user that annoys you. That is a great line right there. It's good to know that Sethyas has grudges against certain types of class. Another amusing assassination with the fur helm used to disrespect the corpse. Brilliant work! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| treydog |
Jul 9 2006, 10:46 PM
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 Master Joined: 13-February 05 From: The Smoky Mountains |
Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work.
-------------------- The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
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| minque |
Jul 12 2006, 09:52 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
QUOTE(treydog @ Jul 9 2006, 11:46 PM)  Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work. Yes.....I agree with the dachshund! Intriguing and amusing.....keep it coming! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jul 20 2006, 07:20 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 20 2006, 09:54 PM
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This recent update has been a very enjoyable read with a nice comic ending.
Sethyas is becoming a very dangerous fellow if he knows attacks that contain five different elements of pain, ouch! I'm pretty sure I don't want to get on his bad side. Can't wait to see what Sethyas does next! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Lord Revan |
 Jul 20 2006, 10:50 PM
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High Elfs beware Seth has a signature move that would own you all!!!
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| Black Hand |
Jul 22 2006, 08:07 AM
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| Black Hand |
Jul 22 2006, 10:03 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 22 2006, 02:39 PM
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Mmm mmm mmm delicious update! Very nice descriptions of the assassin technique, there's almost a "Batman Begins" type feeling to it with the fear instigating being used as an advantage.
It's nice to see someone use cunning to defeat their enemies/targets. I too, hope those Telvanni aren't battlemages, I pity Sethyas if that is so. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Lord Revan |
Jul 23 2006, 05:20 AM
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You know MM during a mages guild quest in Oblivion I witnessed two battlemages get owned by an imperial watchman for assault and murder. |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 26 2006, 08:05 AM
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| The Metal Mallet |
Jul 26 2006, 04:30 PM
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Wow, I would've never suspected Sethyas would use a reflect spell to defeat the two Telvanni. Simply put, genius! I also like his conptemplations afterwards. it's good to know that he understands the meaning of an assassin.
Really enjoying this fic so far. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Lord Revan |
Jul 26 2006, 04:47 PM
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ok 'make love' where did that come from??? but the rest was fine black hand |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 27 2006, 05:25 AM
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Jul 27 2006, 06:06 AM
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Jul 27 2006, 07:11 AM
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