Serene of Cyrodiil, chapter 6, Sidetracks and sorrow Options

[mplantinga]

An excellent end to a wonderful chapter. I must say I'm really anxious to discover to whom the amulet belongs and what that means for dear Serene. Given her reaction, I can only assume that it has Morrowind-shaking repercussions, but I guess I'll have to wait to find out.

[blockhead]

Wow. Intense. I'll just bite my nails until chapter 7. I hope we get to see Serene finally start some serious kicking of spotted owl.

[jack cloudy]

Nothing I can add that hasn't been said already. Except perhaps for a reply to Blockhead. Of course you have the right on your own opinion, so don't take it badly.

Personally, I find that the relative lack of violence is one of the high points in this story. Most other fanfics I've read (mine included.) have a fight in nearly every update. It's a nice departure from the usual. Still, a Vomica Cruor from time to time wouldn't be bad at all.

[minque]

Nothing I can add that hasn't been said already. Except perhaps for a reply to Blockhead. Of course you have the right on your own opinion, so don't take it badly.

Personally, I find that the relative lack of violence is one of the high points in this story. Most other fanfics I've read (mine included.) have a fight in nearly every update. It's a nice departure from the usual. Still, a Vomica Cruor from time to time wouldn't be bad at all.

Thanks Jackie! I was afraid you guys were getting bored with Serene..! Hmm now the Vomica Cruor is only used by Serene in the RP. That Serene is somewhat more violent than the one in the story....dual personalities perhaps!

I try to keep excess magica away from the story, some intervention-spells and different kind of potions and some good old healing will be suffice for now!

Now Blockie has a point...Renie just has to kick some bad guys....and so she will!




edited by minque, non-intentional censor-break-through

[jack cloudy]

What the frick?! Minque, you just managed to break trough the censor!

And the Vomica Cruor. My mistake, I should've realized that such a violent spell would not fit the 'story' Serene.

[minque]

What the frick?! Minque, you just managed to break trough the censor!

And the Vomica Cruor. My mistake, I should've realized that such a violent spell would not fit the 'story' Serene.

Uhhh.....I guess I did? Oh my that´s bad, I think I have to edit my post...the rules should apply to me as well, my only excuse is that I didn´t think about it.....my bad!

[blockhead]

Nothing I can add that hasn't been said already. Except perhaps for a reply to Blockhead. Of course you have the right on your own opinion, so don't take it badly.

Personally, I find that the relative lack of violence is one of the high points in this story. Most other fanfics I've read (mine included.) have a fight in nearly every update. It's a nice departure from the usual. Still, a Vomica Cruor from time to time wouldn't be bad at all.

I'm sorry. I don't want to annoy anyone ... it's just that ... From reading Treydog's already finished story we know that Serene will become Archmaster of Redoran. From my in-game experiences I already know that there is only one way to become Archmaster. Therefore some violence will occur. All I am saying is that it will nice that (for a change) said violence will be done by Serene instead of to her.

I will admit to a bias though: I like women who kick spotted owl.

[Lord Revan]

Black Hand's Tale of sethyas Velas also confirms Serene becoming the Redoran Archmaster. She's becoming a VIP.

[minque]

Ok...fact number one:

You my darling readers know by now that I tend to alter the in-game plots pretty much..that means that I could let Renie be Archmaster without spilling one drop of blood

fact number two:

She has done some fighting....f ex with a couple of mudcrabs!

fact number three:

Nah....you´ll have to wait and see....

[mplantinga]

I was under the impression that the marvelous cameos of various characters in other stories were not binding on other authors. Perhaps my assumption is incorrect?

[The Metal Mallet]

I wouldn't think so. I'm pretty sure we take creative liberties when we're dealing with cameos in our stories. Otherwise, big plots holes between the two stories would be plain to see.

Though, I guess I kinda took that into consideration when I wanted Sethyas Velas to cameo in my story. I made sure I placed the time of my story after all the possible events Black Hand had/will be written about in his series on the character.

So yea, don't worry about the inconsistances between the stories. A wizard did it

[jack cloudy]

Don't worry, Blockhead. You don't annoy me. Different opinions are the spice of life. And I agree with you there, Serene has taken more than her fair share of abuse. She deserves to dish out some payback. And not just for herself, for Athyn as well.



Dang, plotholes? Bethesda already showed the way out for us. It's a Dragonbreak, from Akulakhan's destruction!