 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Four: Binds the Broken... |
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| Black Hand |
 Jan 29 2010, 11:23 AM
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| Olen |
Jan 29 2010, 06:17 PM
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I'm glad to see this start again. I read it all over a couple of days a few months ago and it's excellent, I like the degree of emotion there is in the story, the hopes and fears of your characters are far more realistic than many fantasy stories which makes them come off the page nicely.
I also like the development of the plot, I shall have to go and re-read the rest of Sethyas Volume II... More? -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| minque |
Jan 29 2010, 10:39 PM
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This made my day! An update, a new chapter, continuing the story of Sethyas....ohhhh...Could it be any better? Well yeah...even more updates f course!
Anyway, a strong opening of chapter 4. The conversation between Rayne and Sethwas is well described, yet so sad...I mean I think she actually love him and I also think he loved her...once. Not immediately when thay got together, no he was still numb with grief over Ilmeni, but I honestly think he loved er at certain times. What made him stop loving her I can't exactly figure out but maybe it will be revealed, either here or in the Retcon-thread. QUOTE Dear Reader, Do you really think you only have one reader? *lol* I can assure you we are quite some folks who follow this story with utmost pleasure!  I'm glad you decided to continue, which also inspire me.... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Feb 7 2010, 09:47 AM
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| minque |
Feb 8 2010, 01:22 AM
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Ooookay..on we go, right Seth? farewell simple life and uncomplicated love! Or what? It seems as he somehow got at ease with life...but that could be an illusion.
Anyway I can't wait to read about his encounter with Lexie, how on Nirn would a love-story with a goddess turn out, if that is what's going to happen?  Sethyas, Sethyas...my thoughts are with you, and I wish you luck, as always! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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Apr 29 2010, 07:34 AM
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Apr 29 2010, 09:47 AM
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 Good stuff, I'm glad you had the time to update. I like the dimension you're bringing out with Almalexia, though I can't see it going well somehow... More? -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| minque |
May 1 2010, 05:57 PM
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Ohhh! You just made a dull depressing day to a really shiny one, Blackie! How I've been waiting for an update, sitting patiently..(ehhh???) hoping for it...
Aaaanyway, Seth is doing work for Lexie? Hehe I do hope he will get a nice reward when he accomplish his task.... I hope you will find the time and inspiration to continue....(like soon..) -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
May 9 2010, 09:46 AM
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May 9 2010, 10:36 AM
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May 9 2010, 10:44 AM
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Wooo more Seth!
Great as ever, I like reading about him, brightens up a morning. More... please  EDIT: you must be psycic - I got ninja'd with another part while replying  This post has been edited by Olen: May 9 2010, 10:46 AM -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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May 9 2010, 11:07 AM
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May 9 2010, 10:40 PM
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YAYYY.....The Postmachine is back! Been away for two days, and what do I find? Three(!) updates!! Awesome!
You mention the Queen, may I ask who she is? I'm sort of senile these days, so I can't remember who she is...hmmm I so much liked the list of artefacts and Seth's notes about them... QUOTE Chrysamere - Retrieved after duel with Serenes Uncle, returned to the Imperial Legion. So he gave that back? Very honorable... QUOTE Ice Blade of the Monarch - Retrieved from Rotheran, given to Athyn Sarethi as present. How he appreciated that gift! QUOTE Ring of Phynaster - Retrieved from tomb, given to Serene Catraso as present. Oh? Sweet, sweet brother... QUOTE Staff of Magnus - Retrieved from Witches Coven in wilderness near Mount Kand. Currently in possession of Mages Guild on loan from Bal Isra Estate. Serene very disappointed in me. Hmmm, yeah, she would have wanted him to keep that one QUOTE Warlock's Ring - Retrieved from Witches Coven in the south. Gifted to Serene Catraso. Very grateful. Why who wouldn't be? Question is, which of these will he give to the museum? I mean all of the things represents a part of his life...I wonder and..... I'm waiting for the next part, ..ohhhh aye! Love it, just love it -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 10 2010, 10:34 PM
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| Olen |
May 11 2010, 03:45 PM
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The list was great. Very Seth.
QUOTE Auriel's Bow - Retrieved from Ghostgate. Details unimportant. <snip> Spear of Bitter Mercy - Heard that there was Sheogorath shrine below my apartment in Vivec, God of Insanity spoke to me. Spoke to crazy hermit. Killed giant netch with fork. Still not sure where the fork is. These were brilliant, I love the dead-pan humour. And now he's remaking Trueflame... I can't wait to read more. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| canis216 |
May 12 2010, 06:37 PM
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Ooh, good to see this story resumed. I wonder who could have retired the pawnbroker?
-------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| minque |
May 13 2010, 01:11 AM
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Yessssss....more Sethyas! Humorous, brilliant as always! Blackieblackieblackie......S.G.M!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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May 14 2010, 09:03 AM
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May 14 2010, 11:24 PM
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May 15 2010, 01:08 AM
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