 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin; Mournhold Volume, Chapter Five:...Redeems the Mad. |
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| Black Hand |
 Jun 23 2011, 04:01 AM
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| mALX |
Jun 23 2011, 04:17 AM
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Holy Cow! AWESOME !!!
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| Olen |
Jun 23 2011, 01:52 PM
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Agreed. That was very dramatic.
You got her madness just right there, not so much evil as just crazy and deluded. I suspect the coming battle will be a good one. Also I see you've changed the title for this last(?) part. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| treydog |
Jun 23 2011, 02:57 PM
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Uh-oh. We have not only Angry Almalexia- it is also CRAZY Almalexia. Of course, Seth did kind of screw up her plans for immortality, what with destroying Lorkhan's Heart and all....
Incredible drama- and you capture the madness perfectly- as well as showing the duality of Seth-Nerevar as he/they confront their lover and betrayer. -------------------- The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
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| minque |
Jun 24 2011, 05:49 PM
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OMG...what can I say? will it all end here? Will Seth perish for the hands of a crazy woman? I can't believe it, my hero, my friend, my soulmate....Nirn will be a gruesome terrible place without you Seth!
No..NO, he will make it! I must believe he will make it.....YES..... "Seth, I will be inside your mind the whole time, I will help you" Serene -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jun 27 2011, 01:36 AM
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| Black Hand |
Jun 27 2011, 06:59 AM
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| Olen |
Jun 27 2011, 12:11 PM
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Great screenies, they really add to the feel of this piece. I liked that Nerevar became stronger for the final battle, it makes his going toe to toe with one of the best swordsmen (swordswomen?) in Morrowind more believeable. I suspect his presence will wane again, but who knows what he might leave behind?
Killing Pene was unexpected, though it seems that she'll make a reappearance. And now the mad god is dead what next for Sethyas I wonder. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| minque |
Jun 27 2011, 11:18 PM
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Uhhhh I didn't see that coming! well well Seth, now what? And Pene.....I wonder will she come back in some mysterious shape or???
hey, great screenies, really magnificent! -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Black Hand |
Jun 28 2011, 03:33 AM
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| Olen |
Jun 28 2011, 09:56 AM
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And so ends the Tribunal questline. The guard was particularly well written, he certainly added something to the piece. That he might suspect makes sense, but so doen not attacking. He knows he's either wrong or going to lose, badly. So they wait, which fits with the temple rather well.
I still wonder what loose ends he'll tie up now. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| Black Hand |
Jun 28 2011, 08:23 PM
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| minque |
Jun 29 2011, 09:32 PM
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YAYYYY!!!! THAT just can't be a coincidence..nonono.....At last we will learn more....
And my GOOOD is Sethyas handsome!!!! As always the closing up on this is very well written, and illustrated with great screenies S.G.M -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Olen |
Jun 29 2011, 09:33 PM
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Now that I like, little deviations from the main quest keep things fresher and give this piece a little more freedom to go it's own way, and perhaps continue. A much better gift than the one in the game, and a new avenue of mystery and further plot.
QUOTE “The name of the Mysterious Agent in the ‘Warp in the West’, was…Lysander Velas.” Quite the cliffhanger. And perhaps Sethyas was not born to such uncertain parents after-all... You have me hooked for whatever comes next. QUOTE I performed what was becoming a ritual for me, and drank Cyrodiilic Brandy A traditional activity when finished saving the world and killing a god.  -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| Black Hand |
Jul 1 2011, 11:24 PM
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| Olen |
Jul 2 2011, 03:53 PM
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Not many leads there - but I doubt she's manipulating him. If I were to guess now I might say a visit to Cyrodiil could be on the cards, and possibly an arrest.
You've certainly managed to keep the mystery in this piece without letting up. I await the next installment. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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| mALX |
Jul 2 2011, 05:23 PM
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QUOTE(minque @ Jun 29 2011, 04:32 PM)  YAYYYY!!!! THAT just can't be a coincidence..nonono.....At last we will learn more.... And my GOOOD is Sethyas handsome!!!! As always the closing up on this is very well written, and illustrated with great screenies S.G.M All of this QFT!! This story is unbelievably well done, and the screens add hugely to the immersion !!! Awesome Write, wish you had this down on the fic forum where I could see it when you post updates! -------------------- |
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| Black Hand |
Jul 2 2011, 07:09 PM
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| mALX |
Jul 2 2011, 08:48 PM
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EW! I've never seen a close-up of Vivec's face before, didn't realize his eyes were ... GAAAAH! ... Filmy... URG!
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| Black Hand |
Jul 2 2011, 10:00 PM
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