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| Wolfie |
 Jul 7 2005, 12:05 AM
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Yay! Update!
Great as always Minque  --------------------  D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton EnsamVarg |
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| treydog |
Jul 7 2005, 12:19 AM
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 Master  Joined: 13-February 05 From: The Smoky Mountains |
Even after a long wait, your story immediately draws me back in. Serene's humanity, her kindness, her spirit...all come through in your wonderful prose. Even something as "mechanical" as choosing armor reveals more about the characters. Beautiful, as always.
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| minque |
Jul 7 2005, 12:27 AM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments, it´s really heart-warming....
 and your patience with me as well...
Hmm I must admit I stole the idea of trying on armour from Jonajosa´s lovely story of Johannis, it just got right to me as a really feminine thing to do....  :embarrassed: -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| jonajosa |
Jul 7 2005, 12:37 AM
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Um. I hate to do this but.....
I state this rule that was in the contract with my agent for protecting my story. "Rule number 123,456: I can sue Minque for a total of 3 cakes if she uses the fictional name Johannes. Which is under the copyright protection of Jonajosastories.inc" You need to pay me now... In the coffee shop... I'll take a coffee too. :goodjob: |
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 7 2005, 10:39 PM
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 Master Joined: 18-February 05 From: From "not where you are"-ville |
Nice Minque I just caought up and is Lord Nerevar Reborn Sedrane Mirpal?? (that is the ashlander Serene fell in love with, right?)
--------------------  (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| Wolfie |
Jul 7 2005, 10:43 PM
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No, The Lord Nerevar Reborn is a young Breton who goes by the name of Trey (well, the name is a guess but the Breton part is true)
-------------------- D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton EnsamVarg |
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 9 2005, 11:51 PM
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ya, I figured that out......
-------------------- (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| minque |
Jul 10 2005, 12:08 AM
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mmmm yup , clever minxes.....Lord Nerevar is Trey! and you´ll meet him now and then in my story......
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| Dantrag |
Jul 10 2005, 12:08 AM
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 Councilor Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
it is trey...read trey's last entry///
-------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 10 2005, 12:17 AM
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Master Joined: 18-February 05 From: From "not where you are"-ville |
yes also lonewolf I ,er, made that statment before I read Trey's story.
 This post has been edited by Soulseeker3.0: Jul 10 2005, 09:55 PM -------------------- (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| Kiln |
Jul 10 2005, 08:55 PM
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This story is completely awesome. I read a few chapters and got hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
-------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 10 2005, 09:55 PM
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Master Joined: 18-February 05 From: From "not where you are"-ville |
sssooooo Minque..... when ya going to update it? The story I mean.
-------------------- (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| minque |
Jul 10 2005, 09:59 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
ahhhhh...well, I´ll have to tear myself away from the RP.....it´s taken over my life......noo but i´ll try to do it rather soon....
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 10 2005, 10:00 PM
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Master Joined: 18-February 05 From: From "not where you are"-ville |
oooh ok, which Rp? the Serene one or the rpg thread one?
-------------------- (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| minque |
Jul 10 2005, 10:08 PM
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A Mystery unleashed..and yes Serene appears there too.....
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| Soulseeker3.0 |
Jul 10 2005, 10:52 PM
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Master Joined: 18-February 05 From: From "not where you are"-ville |
oooh I see. the one I was in all of a suddeen stopped.
 but I will wait, reluctantly This post has been edited by Soulseeker3.0: Jul 10 2005, 10:52 PM -------------------- (linky) SKA This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok |
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| Lucidarius |
Jul 11 2005, 08:11 PM
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 Evoker Joined: 11-June 05 From: East of the sun, west of the moon |
Really nice update, mingue. The armor scene was very vivid in my mind, and it is very realistic that most women (even a tall one like Serene - according to Trey's story) won't have quite the same breadth or strength as a man.
As I wrote to Trey, it's fun to read about two different protagonists get into the same fiction. Don't feel sorry about not updating, because real life is after all the most true RP of all, and if that fails because we've spent too much time with a game, it would be really awful and sad.  I do hope that you'll get around to updating, it's just that naturally real life must take precedence. -------------------- Virtue itself turns vice, being misapplied,
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| Dantrag |
Jul 12 2005, 04:40 PM
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Councilor Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
minque, prepared to be proud of me!
I caught up on your story in 3 days ! I like it a lot. (more than peach cobbler.) -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| minque |
Jul 12 2005, 09:40 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
QUOTE(Dantrag @ Jul 12 2005, 05:40 PM) minque, prepared to be proud of me! I caught up on your story in 3 days ! I like it a lot. (more than peach cobbler.)  WoW...I´m not only proud I´m honoured as well...and very glad you like it....now then I have to make sure there´ll be an update soon then...  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Kiln |
Jul 13 2005, 12:33 AM
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QUOTE(minque @ Jul 12 2005, 09:40 PM) WoW...I´m not only proud I´m honoured as well...and very glad you like it....now then I have to make sure there´ll be an update soon then... Don't tease us like that.  *Crowd gathers* Update! Update!-------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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