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Posted by: Black Hand Sep 18 2006, 03:28 AM

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Posted by: minque Sep 18 2006, 03:37 AM

Yesssss.......truly great! Ah how I like the conversations you describe! In a very clever and interesting way you describe his ways with the Redorans....A great night-read!

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Sep 18 2006, 06:13 AM

So chapter four begins... and begins well! Very effective conversations about the cunning taking place and a very amusing duel. Hlaalu's aren't made for those types of things

Continue!

Posted by: Black Hand Sep 24 2006, 07:35 AM

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Posted by: minque Sep 24 2006, 11:08 AM

As wonderful as ever! You really make the most of it Blackie, I so much enjoy to read your story, well written, a good pace and the personal additions to the storyline makes it a great read

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Sep 25 2006, 12:55 AM

Wow, there's always just so much good stuff to comment on in each of your updates that I can't figure out where to start!

We get a little action, a little intrigue, and wonderful, wonderful emotion. You can really feel the stress that Sethyas is going through.

Maybe all he needs is a nice, candle-lit bubble bath.

Posted by: Lord Revan Sep 26 2006, 02:34 AM

Yeah, and his girlfriend back

Posted by: Black Hand Sep 30 2006, 07:30 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Sep 30 2006, 08:08 PM

Rather cool use of a cameo Black Hand, both authors wrote wonderfully in this update.

But I have to say this might be the coolest line I've ever read:

That put a smile to my face and a chuckle as soon as I read it. Good stuff. Very inspirational.

I guess I'll forgive you for posting right after I update, ruining the chance at having my fic right at the top

PS- when you mean "all that Trey said was written by Trey" does that include the note? Just a curious question.

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Posted by: jack cloudy Oct 2 2006, 07:58 PM

Oh, what we don't do to save the planet. I pity Sethyas for not having a James Bond view of things. He is making his life a living hell like this. (Though I think Bond's behaviour is disgusting so maybe it's just better like this.)


Woot! Trey cameo! Now the proof has been given. Nirn does excist in multiple dimensions.

Posted by: minque Oct 4 2006, 03:28 AM

Oh my gosh......what a wonderful surprise to see Trey in your story as well! That and the most interesting encounter with Fathasa Llethri. The promiscuous life of old Bolly surely inspires to some neat twists huh?

Wonderful work Blackie!

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 7 2006, 09:31 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 7 2006, 02:42 PM

Oooo the political intrigue is getting thick. Also Ranye seems to be a rather interesting character as well, she seems to be a saucy one

Keep up the excellent work, Black. You're consistant as always.

Posted by: treydog Oct 10 2006, 10:19 PM

I wish I had more time to comment on the excellent writing on display- RL is a pain....

But to speak particularly to Black Hand's work- I was flattered to be asked for the cameo & glad to add my few words to this epic story. The cooperative spirit amongst our writers is one of the best parts of our community- if work and life ever let me up long enough to participate more fully, I will do so.

But, for now, know that I am following the stories and am impressed with the talent and imagination shown in them.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 11 2006, 02:56 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 11 2006, 03:12 AM

It's always great to read another Sethyas update. I liked the way Sethyas handled Venim and I especially enjoyed reading the conversation with Sarethi afterwards. That was written wonderfully.

But soon we're going to get back to action, which is always fun to read as well. Firstly, we'll see if anything embarassing or/and awkward will happen in Ebonhart. Hopefully Ilmeni hasn't decided to visit her father on the particular day Sethyas shows up.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 11 2006, 04:55 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 11 2006, 07:32 PM

Oooo, did I notice a mention of Simion? Cool!

Another excellent update Black! The interaction with Sethyas and Rayne was both intriguing and amusing.

The conversation with Sethyas and Dren was also really good; I wasn't expecting that. I guess I was thinking he was going to be more fire and brimstone due to the estrangement between his daughter and Sethyas, but the way you did it worked effectively.

I await the next update.

Reading your updates always makes me want to go off and write an update of my own, but then I remember the ton of chemistry homework I have to do. Then I sigh and wish it was Saturday so I could write.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 15 2006, 11:30 AM

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Posted by: minque Oct 15 2006, 05:22 PM

Wonderful reading! Just came back from US and found these latest installments, which pleased me very much. You really makes the best with all those conversations between the charachters, it´s pure awesome! Mind you this gives me a lot of inspiration how to continue my story! No no, I won´t steal anything...don´t worry, your story is outstanding.....and inspirational!

I just love it!

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 15 2006, 09:25 PM

Your dialogue is always so interesting to read, very well thought-out with some really nice lines.

Looking forward to seeing how Sethyas handles building a stronghold.

Posted by: jack cloudy Oct 15 2006, 09:30 PM

Hmm, at least the father doesn't seem to oppose Sethyas getting involved with Ilmeni. Perhaps the good old geezer can have a little subtle conversation during diner? I am sure that Sethyas would appreciate it.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 17 2006, 03:06 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 17 2006, 08:09 PM

Nice update Black. Your way of developing the stronghold was nice and fresh, and suits Sethyas' character to a Tee. Wonderful stuff.

I look forward to the next portion of this fic.

Posted by: mplantinga Oct 17 2006, 08:51 PM

I just started reading this story a couple days ago, and it has taken me a while to get caught up. I doubt that any comment I could make here could sum up all my thoughts about the story so far. I've really enjoyed watching your character develop, especially the subtler points of trying to combine being an assassin with the honor of Redoran nobility. I find your approach to story telling quite wonderful, and I'm looking forward to trying to keep up with new installments as they come.

On a side note, the story has made me very nostalgic for Morrowind. Maybe I'll have to play again sometime.

Posted by: jack cloudy Oct 17 2006, 10:21 PM

Yup, not your average noble, is he? I so like Sethyas. His opinion of things keep it interesting.

Posted by: minque Oct 18 2006, 10:46 PM

Ah very nice! The house-building-thingy was awesome! So typical Sethyas! I really love this guy.....I´m seriously thinking it would be nice for Serene to meet him........

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 19 2006, 03:29 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 19 2006, 05:11 AM

Very entertaining exposition in this update Black. Politics, politics, politics. I really get a feel for the characters in updates like this, because it isn't about action, it's about interaction. And the interaction is good I tell ya, damn good!

Posted by: jack cloudy Oct 19 2006, 09:51 PM

Politics and charity. Yeah, charity is awkward in Oblivion. I once sold about ten unlocking scrolls for 40 septims. I was feeling generous. Maybe next time I should pay someone to take my stuff.

I wonder how the noble is going to take it? Nobles seem to be rarely used to getting a no, from someone who is lower on the social ladder than they are.

Posted by: minque Oct 19 2006, 09:52 PM

Yesss yess.....exactly my opinion as well! oh my.....this was an entertaining part, and I can´t wait to learn more!

Posted by: mplantinga Oct 19 2006, 10:01 PM

It was very refreshing to see a noble acting, well, noble. The more I read about this character, the more I admire him. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 22 2006, 06:59 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 22 2006, 08:15 PM

You can certainly feel the sense of urgency in the frantic pace you're setting up, Black. Nice stuff, though I wonder if Venim has any cards up his sleeves yet...

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 22 2006, 09:54 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Oct 22 2006, 10:37 PM

Its been a hell of a day.

That almost sounds like an understatement for our busy hero.

The next mission is very involved as well, I remember I was stuck doing it the "dirty way" because I had released the slaves before this quest was initiated, and of course, the walkthrough book uses the wrong name for Helvi

Continue whenever you have the chance, it's looking like you're getting into one of your update sprees again!

Posted by: mplantinga Oct 23 2006, 08:56 PM

Thanks for a couple great updates. Sethyas' unique style continues to be quite intriguing.

I do have one question: Tel Naga is the home of Neloth, not Gothren (in the game, anyway). Was this a purposeful plot change?

Posted by: minque Oct 25 2006, 07:21 PM

You really get the various events together with great skill, all fit together in a wonderful pace! My gosh I must reinstall MW now...I´m so yearning to play again!

Inspirational my dear....inspirational!

I liked your description of the Sarethi family-life!

Posted by: jack cloudy Oct 25 2006, 07:39 PM

Man, how come he can never get a calm, peaceful day? He does nothing but run around 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. He must have serious stamina by now.

Posted by: Black Hand Oct 26 2006, 03:38 AM

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Posted by: minque Oct 28 2006, 02:24 PM

You better keep that promise!!! can´t wait you see....

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 2 2006, 03:49 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 2 2006, 04:22 AM

Wow, the emotions conveyed at the beginning of this update are spectacular! I was completely enthralled by Sethyas account of mourning his sister's death and his reasoning for the duty he must hold to. Utterly fantastic!

Now we'll get to see how Sethyas figures out a way to close down the mines. Judging by his character, I have an idea of which way he'll resort to. I'm sure it'll be interesting to see how he discovers it though.

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 2 2006, 04:30 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 2 2006, 05:06 AM

Hehe, that's why I didn't mention which direction I think he'll take

Posted by: mplantinga Nov 2 2006, 07:28 PM

I really enjoyed how you dealt with the Imperial about the mine. It is installments like this that make me lament the limited dialog options inherent to any computer game.

Posted by: jack cloudy Nov 2 2006, 08:33 PM

Oh, blackmailing. I really enjoy Sethyas' diplomatic actions. Yeah, it's such a shame that Morrowind doesn't allow it too much.

The only example I can remember right now is that Hlaalu mission where you go seal an egg mine. I blackmailed the mine's owner into giving me money yet I still killed the queen afterwards so I got paid by the Hlaalu. Twice the pay, once the trouble. (Hmm, that sounds like a Hlaalu motto.)

Posted by: minque Nov 9 2006, 10:18 PM

Ahhh wonderful as always! Your dialogue and interactions are outstanding...oh I hope there will be an update soon, please!

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 10 2006, 03:41 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 10 2006, 04:11 AM

Excellent update, Black. I basically had to do the same thing as Sethyas did, but that was because I freed the slaves inadvertantly too soon. Ohwell...

I really liked the "situation" Sethyas created for all the "mishaps" that happened to the members of the Mining Company, very political-like of him.

Hmm.... I wonder what this "card up his sleeve" really is....?

Posted by: Lord Revan Nov 10 2006, 05:11 AM

"ladies and gentlemen, meet Sethyas Velas: peasant, assassin..... sabatuer!"

But I also want to know what seth has in mind, please continue Blacky

Posted by: mplantinga Nov 10 2006, 06:58 PM

It would seem that Sethyas has learned as much about politics as he had about killing. I enjoyed how he controlled the situation with Llethri, and admired his principled approach to the Caldera mines. I hope he isn't over-confident about his upcoming fight with Venim; he won't have the advantage of stealth this time.

Posted by: jack cloudy Nov 10 2006, 07:41 PM

Nothing smells better than freedom. Ah, good old freedom.

Well, Sethyas still has the ring of the Khajiit. However, all of Redoran will be watching and using it could be seen as dishonorable. The best chance I see is to use a slowworking potion. (Like, it doesn't do a thing till a few days after getting it and then it gives one hell of a big headache, some slight heartproblems and the like.) No one fights well when having a severe case of the flu for example .

Posted by: minque Nov 10 2006, 09:01 PM

Ah how he dealt with that Caldera-business! I enjoyed it as I did the nice set up of scenery you predict here..a council-meeting, how appropriate! I can´t wait to see what happens at that meeting!

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 10 2006, 09:42 PM

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Posted by: jack cloudy Nov 10 2006, 09:50 PM

Wow, that was one great meeting. I loved every bit of it.

Hmm, the rules are pretty strict. I wonder how far the Corprus-strength goes. It would be so much fun to see Sethyas stop that Dai-katana with one hand and slit Venim's throat with the other. (Using two swords, to stay within the rules.)

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 10 2006, 10:09 PM

Holy crap! That was some good piece of dramatic writing right there if I ever saw it! Now you have me salvating for a new update!!!

Please don't leave me here too long; I might drown in my drool otherwise

Posted by: minque Nov 10 2006, 10:17 PM

Oh.....my.....god! What a meeting! I´d really liked to be there! So real, I could see the councilors in my mind...ahahhhhaaaa, I could hear Bolvyn yell, holy muffin, now I´m looking forward to next update!

I take it you mean the Sarethi family, right?

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 10 2006, 10:20 PM

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Posted by: mplantinga Nov 13 2006, 09:39 PM

An excellent update. I am looking forward to seeing how our favorite councilman manages to defeat Venim within the strict rules he has been given.

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 14 2006, 02:06 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 14 2006, 02:27 AM

It was an honour and a priviledge to work on this update with you. Everything surrounding the fight was wonderfully written and build up the expectation of the fight amazingly well. And the ending was beautifully emotion. And Sethyas gets to the chance to get his freak on! Yea!!

Oh yea, and thanks for the plug as well! And I see that the commentasaurus remark still lives! Awesome!

Posted by: Lord Revan Nov 14 2006, 02:33 AM

Woohoo! *Claps enthusiasticly* Bravo MM! Very Nice work. That was truly an epic example of mortal combat. And Black Hand, you amde an excellant character for MM to make a fighting sequence for. *Cheering everywhere* It would seem that Seth has gotten his girlfriend back

Posted by: Kiln Nov 14 2006, 08:31 AM

Best thing about your work is the frequent and incredibly long updates, seems like you never have a short update and that is a good thing. I liked the justification of why the character didn't care if his actions weren't like him near the end of this update, seems like realistic reason.

After risking one's life and being reunited with Ilmeni I can understand why he would act a bit differently. Anyways please continue, I'll be watching.

Posted by: mplantinga Nov 14 2006, 09:04 PM

I was very glad to see that this battle had the epic feel a fight with the Redoran Archmaster deserved. It was good to see that Sethyas can hold his own in a fair fight, and I'm of course very happy he won the fight. I was particularly pleased with the final words passing between Venim and Sethyas; it felt very appropriate for someone who measured everything by combat strength to recognize the Moon and Star once he had been defeated.

Posted by: jack cloudy Nov 15 2006, 07:39 AM

Whoot! Ilmeni is back! Ok, so Sethyas can now further his plan of saving the world, but that's not so important at the moment. Heh, I bet they both have been avoiding the other out of fear for being rejected. Now remember, her father wasn't opposed to their relationship.


Almost forgot. Excellent fight scene!

Posted by: minque Nov 16 2006, 07:44 PM

I have run out of words to praise this update.....beautifully described, and by all means the cooperation between you and "commentasaurus" was just marvellous. I´ve read this part about three times now and ...woah"!

Posted by: Lord Revan Nov 16 2006, 10:58 PM

And am I gald to have gotten the first reply to that excellent update or what?


So, I'm holding my breath for the next update. so don't let me suffocate!!!!

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 19 2006, 03:51 AM

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Posted by: Lord Revan Nov 19 2006, 04:43 AM

"I have a people to unite, and a God to kill. Most importantly, I have a Temple to piss off."

That is a phrase I'm going to remember years from now Black Hand! *Laughes like some silly child* Well, it looks like the Tribunal might have to share the limelight...... or just get out of it.......

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 19 2006, 04:50 AM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 19 2006, 08:51 AM

Again, wonderful display of emotion within the dialogue between Sethyas and Athyn in particular. Fantastic!

I look forward to seeing what Sethyas plans to do next.

Posted by: jack cloudy Nov 19 2006, 10:28 AM

Ah, the confrontation with the temple. I'm telling you, the potential for that scene is endless!

Let's hope Sethyas doesn't piss the temple off too much.

Posted by: Black Hand Nov 19 2006, 08:23 PM

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Posted by: minque Nov 19 2006, 08:30 PM

Ahhhh...hilarious! I do love this story! The conversations between Ilmeni and Sethyas...oh gosh..hehe so truthworthy as in RL!

My my......as I said in my comment on Trey´s story...Now I really have an urge to write!

Thank you Blackie for giving us this great story!

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Nov 19 2006, 11:35 PM

The master of dialogue strikes again! I found this update to be quite an enjoyable update. Particular this line had me chuckling:

Great stuff, Black!

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