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> Ahnaressu's Travels Ch. 8
Wolfie
post Jun 9 2005, 05:30 PM
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damn you. now i really want to know how this fight is gonna turn out!!


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post Jun 9 2005, 06:55 PM
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[quote=LoneWolf]damn you. now i really want to know how this fight is gonna turn out!![/quote]

Yeah!!!!! Totally agree with Wolfie here!!!! Double damn....


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Dantrag
post Jun 19 2005, 05:38 AM
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this is basically to hold my 2 favorite readers until I finish the battle scene...my eraser gets used more than my pencil, it seems...anyways, here you are.

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Ahnaressu followed Neloth outside the tower of Tel Naga. They stopped just outside the entrance, on a hill that sat a few feet above the rest of the town.

"Rules?" Ahnaressu asked as he took a few swings at the air with his sword, feeling its perfect balance.
Neloth shrugged. "Use whatever you like. Potions, enchantments, spells, weapons, the list goes on. just do not kill me and I will restrain myself from killing you."
"Fair, but would you like to tell me of my sword's enchantment?" Ahnaressu asked him.
"You'll find out. I promise." Neloth replied with a smile.
Ahnaressu looked at the mage quizically, searching his face for any hint of foul play. If he found outthat the wizard placed a harmful enchantment on his sword...
"I did nothing to harm your weapon." Neloth said, as if he read the younger dunmer's thoughts.
"I would hope not." Ahanressu replied in a threatening tone.
Neloth grew tired of conversation. "Make what preparations you may." he said as he went into casting defensive spells.

Ahnaressu merely stood, waiting.


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post Jun 19 2005, 11:03 AM
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Ahh your naughty minx...teasing my appetite for more are you huh? But anyway thanks for the update, It´s very good as usual and I must say it makes me yearning for more so please ....please....update soon again !


:goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob:


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post Jun 19 2005, 02:40 PM
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[quote=minque]Ahh your naughty minx...teasing my appetite for more are you huh? But anyway thanks for the update, It´s very good as usual and I must say it makes me yearning for more so please ....please....update soon again !


:goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob:[/quote]

I agree with minque here. You are becoming an expert at leaving us hanging. biggrin.gif

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post Jun 19 2005, 08:57 PM
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[quote=jonajosa][quote=minque]Ahh your naughty minx...teasing my appetite for more are you huh? But anyway thanks for the update, It´s very good as usual and I must say it makes me yearning for more so please ....please....update soon again !


:goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob:[/quote]

I agree with minque here. You are becoming an expert at leaving us hanging. biggrin.gif

:goodjob:[/quote]

How could I not be? I've only been posting two paragraphs at a time...


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post Jun 19 2005, 09:09 PM
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How aobut posting extremely scrupmtious words at a time??? then everybody wonders infinitely what the next one will be.


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post Jun 19 2005, 09:14 PM
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[quote=Konradude]How aobut posting extremely scrupmtious words at a time??? then everybody wonders infinitely what the next one will be.[/quote]

what have you been smoking?


I want some.


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post Jun 19 2005, 09:15 PM
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Only the best for me!!!!!!!! :shocked: :eek: Skooma!


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post Jun 19 2005, 10:09 PM
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[quote=Dantrag]

How could I not be? I've only been posting two paragraphs at a time...[/quote]

Because you keep cutting it off before we get to the fight... and you've done it twice. biggrin.gif Its almost like all those anime shows where they decide to have a conversation like every 2 min during fights. No offense. I find it funny. smile.gif
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Dantrag
post Jun 22 2005, 08:40 PM
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The long awaited....bleh, just read it.

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Neloth picked up his ebony staff. "Let us begin." he said with a grin.

Ahnaressu didn't reply, for as Neloth was saying the words, he was also casting a fireball directly at the ashlander. Ahnaressu quickly dove, avioding the inferno. He came out of the roll on one knee, ready to spring.

Neloth cast the same spell again, but Ahnaressu was ready for it. He jumped to his left to dodge the flame before springing towards Neloth. Ahnaressu swung his sword from right to left, while still inthe air but Neloth was quicker with a staff than Ahnaressu would have guessed. Neloth held his staff out vertically to block Ahnaressu's attack. The parry had Ahnaressu off guard and off balance. He managed to land on his feet, but Neloth's staff held Ahnaressu's katana back effectively.

Instead of pressing forward with his weapon, as Neloth was doing, Ahnaressu pulled out of the lock by ducking low, and rolling to the side.

Neloth's staff hit the ground harmlessly. Ahnaressu turned back around to face Neloth, pacing in a circle.

The mage had much more body strength than Ahnaressu would have guessed from the old mer's skinny, mage-like frame. He wondered if it was magical strength.

He didn't have time to ponder any further, as Neloth cast an unkown spell. Ahnaressu figured out what the spell was soon enough, when the Telvanni was in the air above him, a staff held above his head. The ahslander decided to try to score a hit while Neloth was in the air, but ended up blocking the wizard's staff yet again. He should have dodged, he realized as he saw the wizard's landing. jumping so high didn't make for perfect landings. he made a note to himself before pulling out of yet another lock.

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that's all for now...


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post Jun 22 2005, 08:53 PM
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Nice detail in fight. More More.
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post Jun 22 2005, 08:54 PM
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It's okay I suppose.... biggrin.gif biggrin.gif :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob:


Looking forward to the second...and probably third.... part. Please don't take as long next time though!


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post Jun 22 2005, 09:01 PM
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Yeah, Dantrag, this is good, so you should continue! biggrin.gif
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post Jun 22 2005, 09:11 PM
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of course it´s good! it´s great, I´ve been following Ahnahressu from the start.... :goodjob: :goodjob:


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post Jun 23 2005, 04:05 PM
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Excellent fight scene- I like the way you characterize Neloth.
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post Jun 24 2005, 05:10 AM
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thanks for the support...

Almost finished with the rest of it.

(just so you know, chapter 9 will be entirely about Valnor/Nyph/Lergo...)


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post Jun 28 2005, 12:21 AM
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small update -

I am now sending each new installment to minque to take advantage of her supreme editing skills.

The next one has been sent, meaning that when she's done, you all will be able to read it.

And she's gone for a little bit, so...be patient.


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post Jun 28 2005, 12:47 AM
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Hey, you stole my editor tongue.gif


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Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton

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post Jun 28 2005, 12:56 AM
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Indeed.


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