 Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Vvardenfell, Chapter Five: History Rewritten, and History Reborn |
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| The Metal Mallet |
 Dec 5 2006, 06:08 AM
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Mmm mmm mmm! Tasty update Black!!
It's always interesting to read Sethyas preception on how to handle things. I didn't know what to expect when he got to Ald Daedroth, but I really enjoyed what you did with his decision making. Can't wait for the next one! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Kurt Hawkeye |
Dec 5 2006, 07:41 AM
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 Associate Joined: 26-November 06 From: San Antonio, San Diego, Fairbanks... |
Lovely, lovely work. I'd love to see these bound and published someday
 --------------------  “You grow up when you decide to do right, and not what's right for you, but what's right for everyone, even if it hurts." -Malcolm Reynolds |
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| Wraithguard |
Dec 7 2006, 04:32 AM
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LOL maybe the writers should sell a short stoor collection, that'll be interesting, Say sethyas whered you find the five fingers of pain spell.... i cant find it
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| jack cloudy |
Dec 7 2006, 03:13 PM
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 Master Joined: 11-February 06 From: In a cold place. |
Sometimes, a heart as warm as the forge of a Dwemer is needed. Sometimes, this heart must become as cold as the windswept wastes of Skyrim.
A good update as always. Wraithguard, I personally believe that Sethyas is referring to the Five Fingers of Pai spell, although it is likely a somewhat improved version of the original by now. Apparently, the n didn't fit. Not to mention that Pai sounds cool. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| mplantinga |
Dec 8 2006, 02:53 AM
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A very unorthodox approach to the Ald Daedroth cleansing. I was a little shocked, to tell you the truth, but after some reflection it seems to make some sense. After all, if any of the ordinators had known he was the one who claimed to be Nerevarine, they may well have tried to kill him. Perhaps your bloody solution was better after all.
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| Wraithguard |
Dec 9 2006, 06:19 AM
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hmmm i think im just gonna make my own spell like the "ten fingers and toes of your dead and im not spell" or something................. |
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| Black Hand |
Dec 9 2006, 12:15 PM
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 Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
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| minque |
Dec 9 2006, 02:20 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Excellent my friend! Your interpretation of the Ashlanders is wonderful, the conversations between first Sinnamu Mirpal, then Kaushad was really interesting to read. You put life into them, and I love that..being very fond of the Ashlanders myself.
Oh and I do like Sethyas...he is really one-of-a-kind! More please???  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 9 2006, 04:04 PM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
That update was great Sethyas! I really loved the description of the "connection" between Sethyas and the Bow of Shadows; very magical. And once again, your dialogue between characters is fantastic!
Keep it up, ya hear? -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| canis216 |
Dec 9 2006, 06:08 PM
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 Knower Joined: 28-March 06 From: Desert canyons without end. |
Ashkhan Kaushad... what a character.
-------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| jack cloudy |
Dec 10 2006, 08:09 PM
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Of all the Ashkans, he is my favourite. You've got to love a guy who sends the world's greatest hero on a quest to find him a Dunmer of the female kind.
 -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| Black Hand |
Dec 12 2006, 06:29 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
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| Black Hand |
Dec 12 2006, 10:39 AM
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| jack cloudy |
Dec 12 2006, 11:12 AM
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Brilliant. I especially loved the bit with Sethyas passing out and being waked up by a Guar.
The Erabenimsun was done good as well, showing that Sethyas is an expert at ending vital functions. I thought he would go and snipe through the thin skins of those yurts instead of frontal confrontations but nevermind. Personally, I found this tribe to be somewhat lacking compared to the others. At least you felt like you did a good thing with the Ahemussa, the Urshilaku tested you fully and were willing to accept you upon proving your heritage and Kaushad was plain hilarious. Here, nothing but slaughter. The symbolic meanings of the artefacts were nice but still, I would have preferred a diplomatic solution rather than fighting. -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| minque |
Dec 12 2006, 08:09 PM
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QUOTE Brilliant. I especially loved the bit with Sethyas passing out and being waked up by a Guar. yup..me too.....it was sheer hilarious....like the rest of those two installments. I have run out of words to praise your story Blackie, but I think you know how I feel about it huh? -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 12 2006, 09:07 PM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Post Machine! Hoo boy!
Excellent stuff as usual Black. Sethyas finalizing the Zaniab Tribe Nerevarine Trial was quite amusing and the following trial was nice and gritty. Love the storytelling! With this Trial finally finished, it'll be interesting to see whether Sethyas immediately goes to the High Fane or does some other things. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Wraithguard |
Dec 13 2006, 03:47 AM
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Associate Joined: 29-October 06 |
dang i look at the time you posted this update and i think to myself,"by george this guy is devoted."
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| Lord Revan |
Dec 14 2006, 04:08 AM
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 Master Joined: 6-May 06 From: Texas, USA |
If I could sum up your story in one word I think epic would fit the bill perfectly. Your story has romance, intrique, action, ocassional comedy, and many other elements of a great tale. So......... comtinue please, Black Hand! |
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| mplantinga |
Dec 17 2006, 02:36 AM
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Knower Joined: 20-September 05 From: Bluffton, SC |
Sethyas has certainly gained much confidence in his combat abilities. Not long ago, he would never have dared to take on two supposedly seasoned warriors in a fair fight. I will look forward to seeing how he deals with the remaining prophecies.
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| Black Hand |
Dec 17 2006, 10:00 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
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