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> Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter One: Mournhold, City of Light, City of Magic
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post Jan 9 2008, 09:59 PM
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Wow, Sethyas has abandoned Helseth. Now this will cause some changes in the situation.


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post Jan 18 2008, 12:38 AM
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post Jan 18 2008, 08:14 AM
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That was a fantastic conversation between Sethyas and Barenziah. Very classy.


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post Jan 18 2008, 08:33 AM
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post Jan 19 2008, 11:25 AM
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From one manipulator to the next. While I hate to admit it, she does have a point however.


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post Jan 22 2008, 12:33 AM
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Ahhh, very very good Blackie! Seth really has done it again! And his conversation with Barenziah was wonderful indeed. Also I like the way you made her vivid! The way you pictured her was very convincing and trustworthy, gosh you made her almost human...

Please I want more of this!


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post Jan 23 2008, 06:56 PM
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post Jan 24 2008, 07:57 AM
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Hmmm, looks like we got some differing philosophies being exposed in this update. Glad to see it isn't all camaraderie between these two assassins.


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post Jan 25 2008, 06:23 PM
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I like how serious Al suddenly felt. Normally he seems like a bit of a joker, in his own way. But now, he was different. It really touched him.


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post Feb 1 2008, 12:08 AM
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post Feb 1 2008, 12:27 AM
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Wonderful! So Seth-ish..mmmmm I really enjoyed this one...and the concluding sentence makes me think....and above all yearn for the next chapter.

I do like the conversation between Seth and the old man, in fact I like all conversations you write, they are so intriguing, jeez man I like your style!


MOOOOOOOOOORE Sethyas, please!


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post Feb 1 2008, 07:40 AM
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Good ole S.G.M

Fantastic end to the chapter. The cliffhanger left on this one makes me anxious to read what happens next.


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post Feb 2 2008, 05:28 PM
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Awesome, stuff BH. I like it a lot!


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post Feb 2 2008, 05:31 PM
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Why, thank you! Always a pleasure to have a new fan.
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post Feb 2 2008, 06:14 PM
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I'm trying my best to read and reply to everyone else's work as well. You do a great job with dialogue. And you write in 1st person, just like me!


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post Feb 2 2008, 07:57 PM
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I liked how the guy just stayed cool and all while Seth was freaking out all the time.

Speaking of which, I'm getting a bit worried. Seth freaking out during a conversation doesn't happen often. But when it happens, it means stuff is getting serious.


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